Bharat Ka Veer Putra -Maharana Pratap

Praja love nver end (Ss) <3 (part 12 updated) +note on pg 27 - Page 4

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wow awsum
but wanted more nok jhok πŸ˜‰
loved it
update next part asap😑
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Eagerly waiting for the next update!
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hi hina plz update
mari ja rahi hu me nxt part k liye
plz  update
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Praja Luv Nver End <3
Part-4
The story start's wid ajab applying medicine on pratap wound's..
A-abh aapko ksa lag raha hai kuwar pratap (ask in concerned voice)
P-ji..acha..
(nd eyelock)
( Pal.. do pal ki kyun hai zindagi
Iss pyaar ko hai sadiyan kaafi nahi
Toh khuda se maang loon
Mohallat main ek nai
Rehanaa hai bas yahaan
Ab door tujhse jana nahi...
Jo tu mera humdard hai
Jo tu mera humdard hai
Suhaana har dard hai
Jo tu mera humdard hai)
(nd suddenly dasi enter's d room..both of dem breaking d eyelock)
D-kamgari baisa..kamgari bhaujiraj..baisa aapko aapke datta ne unke kaksh m sirg bulaya hai..
A-ji..hum abhi aathe hai..(in shocking nd worried voice) (start's thinking..datta ne bulaya hai..hey khanaji)
P-kya hua ajab..(in worried tone)..aap thik toh hai..
A-(cum's to sense) ji..kuwar pratap abh aap vishram kijiye..hum abhi aate hai..
P-ji..(nd smiles)
(ajab gng to mm room piche mudthi hai aur kuwar pratap ko dekh kar mushkhurati hai..pratap ajab ko dekh k mushkurathe hai)
(us nd ajab reach the mm room at same time)
A-(seeing us) khamgari hukum..(nd smiles)
Us-gadikhama..
(nd has fb of hw ajab was insulted in chittor by marwari ppl's aur ajab ko kuch khene k liye aagaye badthe hai ki tabhi mm ji ki awaaz aathi hai)
Mm-(in suprised look)are ranaji..aap.. yaha..khamagari ranaji..(nd fold's hand) kuch kaam tha aapko tho humme bulaliya hota..aapne yaha aane ka kasht kyu kiya..
Us-are nahi nahi raoji..hum toh aapse ek avsak charcha karne aaye hai..aur iske liye..(seeing ajab stop's)
Mm-kya hua ranaji..(say's seeing 2rwds us)
Us-ji wo..
(both turning 2wrds ajab)
Mm-aayiye ajab..humme aapse kuch avask baat kheni thi..hum chate hai ki aap aapni dekh rekh m samaroh ki tyaari dekhe..
(both ajab nd us in surprised look)
Us&A-kya..samaroh..
Mm-ji ranaji humne aur hansabaiji ne aaj is dharm yudh k vijay k avsar par samaroh aayojit karne ka nirnay kiya hai...aur un sashi veero ko unke sash v veertha k liye purshkrith karne ka nirnay kiya hai..
Us-(in happy nd suprised tone)..Utham..athi utham raoji..
Mm-abh aap ja sakthi hai ajab..(say's turning 2wrd's ajab)
A-ji (khamagari..fold's hand's looking 2rwd's both of dem)
(In pratap's room)
(pratap talking to himself say's
nahi nahi abh hum aur vishram nahi kar sakthe hai..hum dangal sthal jate hai aur tarwar baazi ka abhyaas karthe hai)
P-(while gng 2wrds dangal sthal he suddenly here's ajab voice nd stop's nd say's) Ajab..are yeh toh ajab ki awaaz hai..par v hai kha..(unhe yaha waha dundthe hai nd find's her in room were function ll b organized in evening)
A-srig kijiye aap log..samaroh sandya m hai..srig kijiye..(talking to servant's)
(Pratap hiding behind curtain's notice ajab silently)
In mm's room,
Mm-ji ranaji kheye aapko humse kya avask baat karni hai
Us-ji mmji..hum jaante hai ki humne aapke sanskari putri ka aapman kiya isliye hum aapse shama mangna chate hai..
hum jante hai aapko ko hum p punah vivash karna kathinlag raha hai..kintu phir bhi hum aaj rana us k naate nahi aapne putra kuwar pratap k pita hone k naate aap donose (hb nd mm) aapki putri ajabde ka humare putra kuwar pratap k liye haat mangne aaye hai..
(Mm nd hb both in shocking tone)
Mm&Hm-Kya..
Chakarpani entering bilojia palace..
Chak-(kuwar pratap ko dekh kar)khamagari bhaujiraj..
(Pratap aapne hi soch m khoye hue chakrapani ki awaaz nahi sun pate)
Chak-(pratap ko hilate hue bolthe hai..)kamagari bhauiraj..
P-(cuming to sense..wid surprised look) ji..chakra..chakrapani aap yaha..(hugs him to hide his suprised look)
Chak-ji bhaujiraj..hum toh yaha kabse khade hai..kintu aap kha khoye hue hain (ask pratap mischievously)aur aap ajabde baisa ko dekh kyu rahe the..
P-kya..(in fearfully surprised look)..hum..ajab ko..aap bhi na chakra..(nd suddenly notice that gumhar was gng to fall on ajab nd shout's loudly ajabde..)
A-(turning back wid smile) ji..(nd she's shocked seeing kuwar pratap running 2wrd's her)
(nd at d last moment pratap saves ajab..but loosing there balance's both of dem fall dwn nd both starts laughing )
(nd eyelock)
(BG music Teri muskuraahate hain taakat meri
Mujhko enhi se ummid mili
Chaahe kare koi sitam ye jahaan
Enmein hi sadaa hifaajat meri
Zindagaani badi khoobsurat hui
Jannat ab aur kya hogi kahin
Jo tu mera hamdard hai
Jo tu mera hamdard hai
Suhaana har dard hai
Jo tu mera hamdard hai)
Chakra-(chakra undono dekh gabrahte hue puch
the hai)bhauijiraj..baisa aap dono thik toh
hai..
(Both pratap nd ajab cuming to sense say's)
A&P-ji..(aur v dono ek dusere k pass dekh
mushkurahte hai nd ajab thnk pratap)
A-chakarpaniji aap yaha (asked him wid
surprised look)
Chakra-ji bhaisa..wo hum bhaujiraj pratap se
milne aaye the..
(Charkpani pratap ki aur dekh k pratap se puch
the hai)
Chakra-(in mischievous tone) waise bhaujiraj
aapne humare prasan(question) ka uthar nahi
diya..
P-ji..wo..
Chakra-ha..ha..boliye bhaujiraj..
P-(in irritating tone)aap bhi na chakrapani
kuch bhi puch the hai..(room se bhar jane
lagthe hai k thabhi ajab unhe rokh thi hai.. )
A-(pratap ko dekh puch thi hai)ji suniye..
P-(turn's back)ji kheyiye..
A-ji wo..hum...aapse yeh puchna chate the ki
aap yaha kse..humse kuch kaam tha..aur abh
aapke gav kse hai..(ask him wid smile)
P-ji..wo..abh..hum thik hai..(give's a smile nd
says) ji..hum..wo dangal stal ja rahe the toh...
(Chakrapani stops pratap in middle nd says)
Chakra-(wid mishchieous tone)ji baisa..humare
bhaujiraj dangal sthal ki aur ja rahe the k
thabhi..unhe aapki awaaz sunayi di aur v
pardho k piche chup aapko dekhthe rahe aur..)
(pratap stop's chakrapani in middle..nd both
pratap nd ajab start's blushing)
P-chakra..chakrapani ye..ye..aap kya khe rahe
hai...
Chakra-sach hi toh khe rahe hai bhaujiraj
hum..(wid mischievous look)
P-humne na aapko bohot chut de rakhi
hai..isliye aap kuch bhi khe rahe hai (saying
this leaves the room)
A-(still thinking nd blushing..)
Chakra-(pratap k piche jate hai )
bhaujiraj suniye toh..bhaujiraj..
In mm's room,
Mm-thik hai ranaji..hum aapni putri ajabde k
liye aapke putra kuwar pratap ka prasthav
svikar kar the hi..
Us-(in happy tone)dhanywad raoji..(nd both of
dem hug each other)
precap-announcement of praja marriage in
samaroh😳
thanku so much for lovely comments..nd here's d pt 4 hope u guys ll enjoy reading it πŸ˜‰πŸ˜³
Edited by hina931 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
This stuff needs to be updated ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome too good lovely part waiting for next
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good work hina...πŸ‘πŸ‘
main mar java gud kha ke ....oops... sorry kheer kha ke...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 9 years ago
Oye Hoye!!!! awesome story...finally kahi tho Praja ki marriage ki news mili...πŸ˜ƒ keep going... it's really superb... n i hope jaise Is (OS) k 1st part me likha tha abt bijolia-mewar ki stry i mean MM N US becoming frnds again aur waise hi serial me b dikhaya DITTOπŸ˜ƒ i hope aage ki story b aise hi ho...πŸ€— 4m my side...
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Originally posted by: aashna_siddy

This stuff needs to be updated ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!


sure ll update it asap 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awsum ...loved the part especially that of chakrapani and The PrAja Vivah vale scenes...update soon...!!