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eymane

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Posted: 25 June 2014 at 1:34pm | IP Logged
Hii Guys im wrting a story and i need your opinions on it so i know if i should carry on or not. plz be honest. i havent thought of the yet but will soon. Here is its first paragraph. PLZ BE HONEST GUYS AND TELL ME WHETHER I SHOULD CARRY ON OR NOT.

Today is the Summer Solstice, I'm moving into adulthood and still don't have any answers to the questions revolving around my head since I was a toddler. While I sat in front of the Victorian mirror on my white dressing table, trying to detangle my curly, frizzy and unruly hair, I came across thinking why I haven't got the answers to my questions yet or even if I was supposed to get the answers to my unanswered questions.


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Posted: 28 June 2014 at 10:09am | IP Logged
i guess no one liked it so wont continue CryCryCryCry

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Posted: 01 July 2014 at 10:05am | IP Logged
No comments because there is hardly anyone in the forum. I love the beginning and I say, you should definitely continue! 

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Posted: 03 July 2014 at 3:08pm | IP Logged
Don't be bothered by the lack of comments. They come. Late, but they do. 
I really liked the intro paragraph, and you should definitely continue this. 

 :)

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Posted: 11 July 2014 at 7:20pm | IP Logged
do write more

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Posted: 21 July 2014 at 6:02am | IP Logged
Solace in Solitude !  Title !
Seems interesting ...continue  writing  ! The story has to  unfold to us ...then only it will be proper to suggest any title !
As a writer you must have seen the manifestation of your imaginations and feelings ...so it will be easy to a writer to put a title for their stories !
As an outsider it will be difficult for any !!

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Posted: 23 July 2014 at 4:31am | IP Logged
write. write. WRITE!

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Posted: 24 July 2014 at 12:36am | IP Logged
You need to write more!

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