ASYA(KABHI) SS- Remember Me-Thread II Completed - Page 84

Originally posted by: sweeetyrocs

Nice update dear

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

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Originally posted by: aarzoo50

khichdi ban rahi hai... mere bagair 😡
mjhe b chahiye 😔

Originally posted by: Amulya9

I jst love u love u love u to  infinity swapno

Kisne curse kiya.naam bolo dekhlungi mai...

I didnt.i think...mai tho thodi loud voice questioned u

Actually v didnt got  happy ending in show na thats y mai possesive hojati hoon  reg asya.

thats very sad...real me wife didnt remember😭😭

 Aw this update made me smile...

Im so happy ...um so proud of asad...

Asya in kv wth zinia...beautiful moment...

Im so so happy fr asad..

I love his line u remembered us ...n now i remember u swapno😉

My fav scene in this FF ...scene where asad comes to zoe n sleeps in her lap when shes abt to leav ..his lines still make me cry...

Thanq fr writing happy ending update fr us..love u inna saara

Originally posted by: sabuwa

I luv the ending tnx for the beautiful story

Originally posted by: p_s05

Reserved! 

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Unreserved!

I think I should say "Thank You" for chapter 11, even though I respected your version of the end. You wrote an alternate end for your readers', you really are amazing.    👏  

There were two elements I loved:

1. The entire Asad adopting Zinia and embracing her as his own little princess, I absolutely love and obsesses over AsYa as parents especially Asad as a dad, I think he would have been a fabulous father, something I expected to see at some point in the show, alas.

2. AsYa from the moment Zoya walked into that bedroom, absolutely awesome stuff. 

"But I am not going to forgive you for this. You still act like a jerk, stupid, fool man"

"Protect me from what? From you; from your love so that you can face every death of your own. You did not share with me about Zinia. Why? Why you did not share the whole truth of my Ammi's death?"

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"Ammwi, Ammwi, you came home finawwy. Zinia misshed Ammwi everyday"

"Aww..babuni..Ammi is here only from now. You will never miss her from now on" 

"After changing in his usual kurta he went to meet Zinia and welcomed with the most awaited moment of his life. Both were sleeping. Zinia was enveloped with Zoya's arms. Asad tucked the blanket properly over them and kissed there forehead. His lips lingered on Zoya's forehead more than the needed time."

"He was not going to sleep alone today. He lied beside Zoya and embraced both of them with his arm."

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^^^ For this you have to promise to write AsYa as parents OSs, pretty please!   ☺️

Zoya's recurring introspect of Asad's pain, feelings and hurt before she met him was higly endearing, I also loved how everyone wanted her to go to him to "make him happy"

Keep Well!

🤗

P.S Have I told you I really enjoy your unique style of writing?

Well

I do

Please write more!

Originally posted by: anopama

Oh thank u thank u thank u 

I was not mad an angry for ur sad ending 

I was just caught by surprise and their was a lot of incomplete Q&A

I am a sap for happy lovey dovey ending with all questions answered 

Even if I knew thw answer already 

In ur sad ending Asad couldn't survive as zoya left as she was his breath 

So if she leaves he die 😭

But I love the alternate made me cry😭more out of happiness 

So she heard of the accident on way to hospital had a bad dream 

Love tht she met raabert and all he did was hug her then he realizes 

So he filled in the gap and all her unanswered questions were answered and ones she didn't even know she had were answered 

She learned how Asad life revolve around her how everything he did he did for her and her only 

He never lost hope of her coming back 

He got the forgiveness he seek from jiju and was given an responsibility and it was tht responsibility tht kept him alive 

So she went and visit gaffur and he even asked her to keep Asad happy and Asad belief in her returning 

Oh love her and dilshad reunion and then raabert sending her to his bhaijaan room to make him happy 

Oh she is ready to pounce on him he send her divorce paper he couldn't believ the shock she was there to be with him 

Oh he was so hope ful she remembers but she just read his journal it doesn't matter all that matter is tht she loves u even now .

Love zinia and he ammi reunion Asad happiness mesh zoya's he was able to keep his promise 

Sister reunion 😭

Wow they all on zinia little bed 

Oh Asad u are still EC don't know to kissed ur wife oh boy and did he shut her up 

Love it to bits both the ending but move the happy one because of it happiness I cried more 

Looking forward for the new asya story as I sleep and breath asya 

So keep them coming 

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Originally posted by: yumna.imad

hehehe emotions pe control nahi rehta Aapi...😆😛

Akhir dil toh bacha hai jee...😉

kuch na karo... ek achhi si epilogue dedo... hum us se aur bhi khush hojayenge😳

hehehe i will always be happy agar aap aise hi happy endings deti rahi... 😎

Good...  😃

Same here😳

YAMUNA?????? WHY THE HELL IS MOSTLY PEOPLE HERE  CALLING ME THAT??😲

Its YUMNA people 😳...

Yamuna sounds more like Namuna... im not a Namuni...

Even Jas called me tht... 😕😆

Call me Yumi... it sounds better😛😆

Originally posted by: swapno

Kya chahiye tujhe???😉😆

Originally posted by: aniha20

May be khichdi 😉 🤣