os- a journey from couch to bed - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
#31
Kudos to you πŸ‘ Very well written ... Difficult to believe that it's your first attempt ! You seem like a natural at this πŸ˜³ Keep it going ... πŸ‘Edited by ZedZee92 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: ZedZee92

Kudos to you πŸ‘ Very well written ... Difficult to believe that it's your first attempt ! You seem like a natural at this πŸ˜³ Keep it going ... πŸ‘

aww thanks a lot dearπŸ€—...it was my first try dear.. i was really confusedwhether should i update it or not bcoz it ws my first try so was  little scared but reading ur comment i m feeling epic happyπŸ˜ƒEdited by komsy7856 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
Fab writing..so much like the real raman n ishita
pls write more
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
adorable, amazing os with great dialogues!
loved it!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
Super duper cute !!
Continue soon please !
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
Please write a second part and demonstrate RAMAN'S CAPABILITY πŸ˜† Would love that!😳 and well this part was hilarious. Ishu scared of chooha and hugs Raman. shoo sweet πŸ˜³
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
Cute OS!! I'm waiting for the day Raman actually asks Ishita to sleep on the bed in the show as well.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
Hey Komal,
Thanks for PM.

For first time this was outstanding. Very beautifully written.
Loved it. N whole that capability wala scene was awesomeπŸ˜‰
Really wish in show also they throw that couch n IshRa start sleeping on same bed.
Please keep writing.
Loved ur style
Thank u for this treat
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
Adorable writing
Do write more
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: _Dipsi_

Fab writing..so much like the real raman n ishita

pls write more

aww thanks a lot  dear😊