FF-Benaam khwaayishein-FINAL CHAPTER-PAGE#78 - Page 4

Originally posted by: bawaswift

Ashu's inside feelings with knowing the fact that he is an orphan... He is out of his home and in this have hurt his beloved as well... ! Very sad n gloomy.. ! 

He broke her heart and in the end he broke her as a whole... ! He is a broken heart.. but why he did so to her ? 

This is a real torture for him and his love. Very nice Prologue and the starting has given a feeling of a tormented soul making ways for another phase of his life... !

Keep going Sai.. you have many ways to go ! ⭐️⭐️ 👏👏

Wow Thank you so much Bawa for such wonderful comment 😃
Yes Ashu is tormented but soon everything will fall into place ...Why He did ? what happened ? you will read more about it when I start the story ...😉

Originally posted by: Vidishaa

why did he push her away...what happened between the father and son

Wait for the chapter , you will get all answers 😉😆

Originally posted by: saibanu

Wow Thank you so much Bawa for such wonderful comment 😃
Yes Ashu is tormented but soon everything will fall into place ...Why He did ? what happened ? you will read more about it when I start the story ...😉

Originally posted by: bawaswift

All thanks to you... ! 😃Sure will be waiting for it to start ! 😃

Happy writing ! 

😃

Originally posted by: parmarA

Wonderful prologue written sai.

I don't know why Baba said those harsh words to Ashutosh.

So Ashutosh is orphan here.Ashutosh is heartbroken person here.

Why did he broke her heart?I think he couldn't trust anyone.

Now after reading this prologue waiting for your new chap.

Thankooo Alak di 🤗
All your questions will be answered as you read upcoming chapters ...Next chapter I will post it on Saturday 😃

Originally posted by: saibanu

Thankooo Alak di 🤗
All your questions will be answered as you read upcoming chapters ...Next chapter I will post it on Saturday 😃

Wii wait for saturday sai.Nimge ille nodi tumba khushi aaitu ri.🤗

Wii wait for saturday sai.Nimge ille nodi tumba khushi aaitu ri.🤗

Namgu illi Vapas bandu tumba kushi aytu 😃

Originally posted by: saibanu

Wii wait for saturday sai.Nimge ille nodi tumba khushi aaitu ri.🤗[/QUOTE]

Namgu illi Vapas bandu tumba kushi aytu 😃
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me too ditto ditto 😆

Originally posted by: Diksha_1991

Wii wait for saturday sai.Nimge ille nodi tumba khushi aaitu ri.🤗

Namgu illi Vapas bandu tumba kushi aytu 😃


me too ditto ditto 😆


WOW you know kannada !!!!!
Good to know that dearie 😃