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Posted: 9 years ago
 
                              A HOPE ...                       
 
 
 
It's Dusky, but a hope for dawn

one is in verge of death but a hope to live

A path chosen, thorns in, but a hope to reach

It's dry, no drop for thirst, a hope for rain

An unfulfilled dream, a hope to make it true.

 A hope to reach the moon

Might wind will oppose, rock will stops, waves swallow me

But there's hope in me

I am on way, thorny bushes spreaded

Many troubles to come, puddles to jump, rock to break, hurdles to cross

There's hope to reach the moon...

               .~...~.

 

 

 

NOTE : Hello guys , howz all !! i wrote something .  howz it ?? Do tell me. hit like n comment . n sorry if its boring.  😊 

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Posted: 9 years ago
Me first 
Amazing poem  loved it 
Beautifully written
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Posted: 9 years ago
NICE POEM
NICE FEELINGS
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Posted: 9 years ago
It was a beautiful poem. 👏 ❤️
Keep writing more. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
beautifully written.. Hope is smtg dat helps us to move frwd in life, and u have written abt it so well, keep writing mr..
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Posted: 9 years ago
lovely poem
dear
it has energy
to not stop
ourself to
hope for the best
n in this way
we reach
our selected aim
BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN
THANX FOR PM
TAKE CARE
😛😛😛 
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Posted: 9 years ago
dare  u say it boring ... it was lovely and really motivating... i connect with this poem a lot... 
lovely yaar meri hamshakal to bahut talented hai... love u keep writing 👏👏

sry for late reply i wasn't here... sry😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
amazing poem
keep it up👏