Hey there,Loved this story of yours...Frankly, I got kind of sadistic pleasure, in reading about this Khushi going full throttle at Arnav and the family. She seemed to be quite sorted at the end of it,I feel.
But, at the same time, I thought, she gave in too easily to Arnav's explanation for his atrocious behaviour. Just forgiving him, and signing the legal documents without any queries was simply beyond me, especilly when this character had come thus far.
These are just my views/thoughts as a reader.Nothing to criticise your writing.😊
Would like to read your other stories as well. Do let me know about your blog, where I can find them and the sequel to 'I Like The Way...'.
Pls pm me whenever you plan to update.
Much love,
Mili.
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