TH 1: ARSHI FF: A Silent Roar Chapters 1-5 /COMPLETED - Page 78

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Posted: 9 years ago
👏👏👏
Very gripping and titillating teaser.Great edit with Khushi's pics. 
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Posted: 9 years ago
Yay! He found her!
Great banner Faiqu!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: supermom1

Hi Arshi,

 
Thanks for including me in your post. You are an awesome writer and are a good story teller. I have been on vacation for a while and haven't got a chance to read your story, but your teaser is interesting and will try to read all the chapters. Keep up the good work.


Hey supermom😊

hugs🤗

So good to see you here.and I will be honored to have some words from you.

Thnx for liking my rambles , nothing much ...you know me , don't go in mushy stuff , it's the story I am after.
Edited by ArshiHamesha - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: scorpio47


 Love Khushis's character. Independent strong.
Loved kadva Karela as Khushi puts it.
Love her quivering lips & noodling heart beats mixing with his signals of oneness.
Love the Telepathic connection. When in love you always know what your partner feels.
Will Shyam reveal his true  slimy character.?
3 years. 3 weeks! 
What have you got up your sleeve?
Has Shyam got connection with Khurana ?
Mysterious phone calls !!!
Why ! Lots of questions !!! 


Welcome aboard scorpio😊

Glad you are enjoying it so far and did you read all the chapters in one go...phew ...

it's a lot to absorb...Questions will be cleared slowly 

Thnx 
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Posted: 9 years ago
sorry for late comment
not got pm of teser so
 
loved it
wow interesting
she is so much in terror man is surely Devil
hate him
 
so sweet of buaji
 
khushi thought it was same saitaan
half right but this saitaan was her prince
lovely
 
asr in action
finally little lovely moment
and hopeful rays
 
let see what after this teaser turns of story
tfs
 
 
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Posted: 9 years ago
hi faiqa,

great teaser... khushi's pictures all over teh kidnapper's room? ugh... how creepy is that. obsession... always erratic and scary.

and it was just now that i noticed you have put... true inspiration from me???? wow. i missed that earlier... so grateful... but really was i helpful in any way? yay.

aww. hugs. 🤗
i liked that explanation of the time frame you gave above and the colour coding to gree on kidnapper sections. 😆 😆 familiar that green from our early blast days. teehee.

update soon please.

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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome Teaser,👏 Now where is the update????
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
                                  

Thanks for All the love and affection ,my readers gave me.Your suggestions and comments are so dear to me and you know how much I value em.🤗

I know till Chapter 4 , things were a bit challenging but as I promised you things will get better and after reading today's chapter , you will be pleased .

Now I have some who wants hindi dialogues and some who don't..I tried accomodate both with color coding...Hope my both groups will be fine with that...

Don't forget to press LIKE  or COMMENT

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ArshiHamesha❤️
Edited by ArshiHamesha - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
It's a beautiful interestingly written story.
If it grips yes I read it all and sometimes again & repeat again just in case I have miss read or
Missed what You really want to convey to your ardent readers. I.e. Moi..
👏 Keep up the flow.  Big hugs to you. Xx