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ClapClapClap

ITS WICKED!!!

KEEP GOING....

TAKE CARE

ANOLI

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Posted: 08 June 2005 at 1:05pm | IP Logged

THIS STORY IS THE BEST!!!!!!!

PLEZ HURYR WIHT THE NEXT PART!!!!!!

later

Goldi2

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Posted: 08 June 2005 at 5:09pm | IP Logged

Angad looks at her

"haan, tumhara kamraa, upar jaakar, left aur akhri kamra tumhara hai

when without a word, Kripa begins to climb the stairs,

Naina is about to say something

Kripa continues walking up, but stops as soon as she sees something, that scares the wits out of her

Angad is about to follow

"aaaaaarhgh" She screams

everyone looks at her shocked

conitnuing...

light flashes accross Kripa's eyes, reporters buzz around her and buzz

up a dozen of questions

"Ms. Kripa Sharma app humme bathaayenge ki app che mahine se kaha thi?

Another reporter

"Aap popstar Angad ki saath wapees gaane waali hai kya"?

Another reporter

"What about your alleged relationship with Angad"?

Kripa fumes in anger and gives a DEATH stare at Angad

Angad looks at her  nervously and hurries upto her and hurriedly goes to her, he shoves between reporters and takes Kripa upstairs and takes her to a  room

There he has to hear what has now become his fate - Kripa's anger

Kripa lashes out at him

"YEH .... points a finger at him yeh sab kya chalra hai?,"

"Yeh Kripa Sharma kaun hai"?

"dekho maine tumse pehle hi kaha tha, ki

Angad goes to her

"please, goosa math ho, woh meri galthi hai, mujhe yaad rakna jahiye tha

ki reporters bhi yaenge, par ek baath bathao, maine to tumse outhouse

mai rehne keliye kaha tha, ki jab thak mai na aau thum waha se hilna thak nahi, toh tum yaha kyun ayee...

Kripa gets angry at him  and with venom in her eyes

"Savni wahi karthi hai, jo woh karna chahti hai, okay"

"Agar tum mujhko apne saath rakhna jaathe ho, tho teek hai, par mai tumhari yeh dadageeri bardash nahi karne waali"

Angad hushes her up, "Ayinda se essi galthi nahi hogi"

"ab neeche chalogi"

Angad then glances at her state and when Kripa is about to go he catches her hand

"ek minute, esse nahi, Angad goes to his closet and takes out a choli that he had selected for her when he had gone on his world tour

He hands it over to her

"yeh pehenlo"

Kripa looks at him like his gone crazy,

Angad sees the look in her eyes

"No, mai tumhe order nahi karaha hoon sirf tumhari madad karaha hoon, thaaki phirse reporters tumpar barse na

Angad is smiles in relief that kripa agreed, then his expressions change from relief to horror

Kripa is about to take off her clother and change,

Angad goes out of the room,

"kya besharm ladki hai, mere samne"

After a while Kripa comes out wearing a light blue shiny choli, looking beautiful as ever

Angad ke hosh udjaathe hai

"tum kya mere choli ke strings tie karsakthe ho, mujhse ho nahi raha hai"

Angad comes near her, and touches her shoulders and then ties the strings.

Angad ties the strings

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Downstairs Naina, is too chocked to react, she wonders now what she will do,"ab kuch ho bhi nahi saktha hai Kripa wapees aagayi hai, reporters hai, bohoth saare guests hai aur sabse badhi baath hai ke Angad usse Kripa par gaayal hai....

Naina is fearing the worst

On the other hand, Mishti in nervousness is gripping her scarf and is sweating, she impatiently waits for something to happen

The awaited moment happens, All eyes turn to the couple preceeding down the stairs

Angad wispers to Kripa

"tumhe sab yaad hain na, tumhe kya kehna hai, kaise react karna hai"

Kripa with an air of her own

"ofcouse mujhe sab batha hai"

Reporters once again buzz around Kripa,

"Ms. Kripa Sharma app humme bathaayenge ki app che mahine se kaha thi?

Kripa smiles confidently at them

"mai Mumbai ke outskirts mai apna vacation mana rahi thi"

Everyone is shocked to hear this

With that she walks with Angad to where Mishti is standing

To everyone utter surprise< Kripa walks over to Mishti and comes face to face with her

And to add another jatka

"Congratulations Mishtiji"

Kripa smiles at her, then she stands aside for Angad to come and the engagement to begin

Mishti and Angad then swap rings adn everyone claps for them

Naina's eye sockets are about to pop out, she watches Kripa smiling gaily at the engagement and to Angad's saddened but Mishti's excited face and is confused as to what is going on...

i know this part was kinda boring, but i promise you all the next one will a truly intense one, full of masala and much longer than this one, oh yeah with loads of pictures to go with the story.

today i'm outta ideasDead

lots of luv

Soni

 

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Night Maiden

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Posted: 08 June 2005 at 5:25pm | IP Logged

 

OH GOD PLZ CONTINUE..................THIS IS TOOOOOOO GOOD TO WAIT FOR.

suganain

Goldie

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Posted: 08 June 2005 at 5:27pm | IP Logged
please continue ..and with more love scenesClap

happe

IF-Dazzler

happe

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Posts: 4462

Posted: 08 June 2005 at 5:37pm | IP Logged
I loved it. Amazing story.

perveen

Goldie

perveen

Joined: 18 September 2004

Posts: 1448

Posted: 08 June 2005 at 5:47pm | IP Logged
this is not fair u always end ur story with a suspence i cant wait to read the next part jaldi akro please............

neha9

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Posted: 08 June 2005 at 7:18pm | IP Logged
ya both the parts were awesome!!!!!!!!!!! pleae hurry cant wait 4 the next part

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