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Angadzgirl

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Posted: 07 June 2005 at 3:31pm | IP Logged

very nice story...plz continue...

~sweta~

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  Continuing...

Angad leans in closer to Kripa's face, until their lips are an inch away

The winds blow fiercely and the silent night brings to unseperable, exhilarating lovers so close with the rest of the world left behind, let these lovers live in their own world

singkripa2Kaisa Ye Pyar Hai  I love you balloon   ---------I love you balloon

  Angad leans in closer and closer...

Kripa leans back as hard as she can, but she ends up leaning her head against the tree.

"Angad..."

Angad touches Kripa's lips

"shhhhh..."

Angad then kisses Kripa on the Neck, on the cheeks, the forehead and lets go of her

Kripa runs away deeper into the forest.

A dreamy Angad watches Kripa run away and smiles with pleasure

Kripa walks in the cold and covers herself with her scarf and keeps looking back, because she thinks Angad is following her

Angad threads in and out of trees following Kripa and sings the song

Dhalne Lagi Hai Raat Koi Baat Kijiye
Badhne Lagi Hai Baat Koi Baat Kijiye
Kripa walks faster
Hai Zindagi Kaa Saath Koi Baat Kijiye
Kat Jaayegi Ye Raat Koi Baat Kijiye
Angad hides behind trees and carries on singingJaane Tanhaai Ham Se Kyaa Kah Rahi Hai
Dil Ki Gahraai Ham Se Kyaa Kah Rahi Hai
Shreya: Ek Ek Pal Ke Saath Koi Baat Kijie
Ban Kar Rahegi Baat Koi Baat Kijiye
O Dhalne Lagi Hai Raat Koi Baat Kijiye
Badhne Lagi Hai Baat Koi Baat Kijiye

Jitni Hadein Hain Sab Tod Daalein
Baaton Hi Baaton Mein Ham
Ho Honton Ke Rang Se Honton Pe Likh Dein
Baatein Dilon Ki Sanam
Baat Chaahat Ki Roshni Ban Ke Aaye
Baat Sun Sun Ke Baat Bhi Muskuraaye
Yun Saadgi Ke Saath Koi Baat Kijiye
Ban Ke Rahegi Baat Koi Baat Kijiye
O Dhalne Lagi Hai Raat Koi Baat Kijiye
Badhne Lagi Hai Baat Koi Baat Kijiye
Kripa is walking and then suddenly she can't see a thing because a blindfold is being tied on her eyes, she putshands up to release it, but her hands are gripped bya pair of powerful hands. Angad slips on a locket in Kripa'sneck.Angad continuing to grip Kripa's hands, comes in frontof her and comes closer to herKripa's heart is racingKripa feels the touch of Angad's lips and closes her eyes,despite the fact, that she can't see anything becauseof the blindfoldAngad then disappearsKripa unties the blindfold and looks around and seesAngad's retreating form walking away.                       forests pictureKripa can't resist any longer and runs behind Angadhugs Angad"I like you, Angad" Angad hugs her tightly"I love you too, KrrKripa looks at himAngad handles the situation"I mean i like you, savni"singkripa2song continuing....

Pighleinge Ham Is Chaandni Mein Kab Tak Khuleinge Badan Ho Pyaasaa Hai Dil Pyaasi Ye Rut Hai Chubhne Lagi Har Kiran Gungunaati Hai Kyaa Javaani Sunenge Aankhon Aankhon Mein Har Kahaani Sunenge Honton Pe Rakh Ke Haath Koi Baat KijiyeBan Kar Rahegi Baat Koi Baat Kijiye O Dhalne Lagi Hai Raat Koi Baat Kijiye Badhne Lagi Hai Baat Koi Baat Kijiye

Angad is reminded of the olden days with Kripa

It then starts to rain and they both get soaked, Angad

is shivering.

Kripa sees that Angad is wearing a thin vest and hands over her scarf to him, lelo tand lag jaayegi

Angad makes a funny innocent face, and pretends to

be angry

"arre yeh toh mera dialogue hai, yeh to ladke karthe

hai, aur tum mujhe hii...

Kripa interrupts him, "kya hai yeh, ab romeo math bajaana, isse chup chap lelo, aur chalo yaha se, poori raath bithani hai isse jungle mai kya? aur woh bhi isse barsaath mai

Angad thinks of Kripa dancing in the rain, but shakes the thought out and follows her.

xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

Angad is in his room, ab mujhe Kripa ko Mumbai

lejaana hi padega, warna usse apni yaardash kaise

wapees milegi, with trickles of tears in his eyes, par

bohoth thakleef bhi toh hogi na???

xxxxxxxxxxxx

Next morning

Angad is helpless and looks at an irritated kripa

"par savni..."

'Dekho, mujhe yeh shaadi baadi mai nahi parna hai,

sab bekaar ki cheeze hai

Angad remembers the time when he was with Kripa in

the mandhir and she had told him about how two souls

unite in marriage etc...

"teek hai, shaadi nahi karni na sahi, par saath tho resakthi ho na?

Kripa then thinks thoughtfully

"yeh zyada suit kartha hai, par haan waha koi mujhe yeh karne ko yaa woh karne ko kahe toh...

nahi kahega na?

mai kisi ki bakwaas nahi sunthi hoon, Kripa points a finger at Angad, samjha kya?

"mujhe tumhari saari sharkthe manzoor hai,"

xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

Khanna House

The Khanna House is being decorated with flowers,

the caterers are hushing in and out of the kitchen,

guests are arriving and an ever worried Naina looks

depressedConfused

Just then a cell rings, Naina finds it to be hers and excuses herself from Damini

Naina looks at the number and smiles in relief

"kahan the tum Angad, ithne dino se try karahi thi, aur aaj to tumhari sagaayi to phir, tum kaha ho?

Angad hushes his mother up

"don't worry mom, mai aadhe gante mai pohchjaonga,

I will be there on time"

Damini walks up to Naina

"Naina, Angad kaha hai"

Naina smiles at damini

"abhi uska hi phone tha, woh adhe gante mai araha hai, don't worry

All the  guests come and everyone is waiting for Angad

 Mishti dressed in a heavy decorated orange choli keeps looking at the door.

Just then Angad arrives and everyone is relieved

Naina grabs Angad's arm and drags him over to Mishti

"Angad, chalo ab aur bohoth dehr math karo, anguti

pehnao

Angad is handed over the ring

A clicking sound is hearing and someone comes barging

inside wearing black shoes that's laces are untied,

faded blue ragged jeans, a long black shirt that is not tucked in properly, the sleeves are rolled up and smoke is flying in the air cause of the cigarette

the person walks in rudely

Then in a booming gunda-mawaali type of voice

"apun ka kamra kaunsa hai'?

Everyone is shocked from Naina's angered face, to a smirking karthik, to a frozen Mishti,Prithvi can't believe his eyes and  a shocked Harshini looks on and so do the rest of the guests

Kripa walks in

Angad looks at her

"haan, tumhara kamraa, upar jaakar, left aur akhri kamra tumhara hai

when without a word, Kripa begins to climb the stairs,

Naina is about to say something

Kripa continues walking up, but stops as soon as she sees something, that scares the wits out of her

Angad is about to follow

"aaaaaarhgh" She screams

everyone looks at her shocked

that's it for today

hope u all liked it

lots of luv

Sonia 

 



Edited by soni595 - 07 June 2005 at 8:27pm

stonex

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Posted: 07 June 2005 at 9:11pm | IP Logged
very very nice

garammaxala7726

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Posted: 07 June 2005 at 9:14pm | IP Logged
mere saath aisa kyun nahi hota...i wish i were n actress...

Rupa87

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Posted: 07 June 2005 at 9:16pm | IP Logged
dont worry, u will be an actress one day...

kool_dollie

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Posted: 07 June 2005 at 10:38pm | IP Logged
plzzz continue

happe

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Posted: 07 June 2005 at 10:47pm | IP Logged

hey soni,

I loved it. It was great. Please continue. I loved the scene of Angad and Kripa in the forest and that kissing scene, locket, the song. I love that song. Thanks for putting it in.

Lots of Love from Happe.

Angadzgirl

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Posted: 08 June 2005 at 10:26am | IP Logged

thats was so good story....plz contiune...

~sweta~

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