Joined: 23 April 2005
very nice story...plz continue...
Joined: 03 June 2005
Angad leans in closer to Kripa's face, until their lips are an inch away
The winds blow fiercely and the silent night brings to unseperable, exhilarating lovers so close with the rest of the world left behind, let these lovers live in their own world
Angad leans in closer and closer...
Kripa leans back as hard as she can, but she ends up leaning her head against the tree.
Angad touches Kripa's lips
Angad then kisses Kripa on the Neck, on the cheeks, the forehead and lets go of her
Kripa runs away deeper into the forest.
A dreamy Angad watches Kripa run away and smiles with pleasure
Kripa walks in the cold and covers herself with her scarf and keeps looking back, because she thinks Angad is following her
Angad threads in and out of trees following Kripa and sings the songDhalne Lagi Hai Raat Koi Baat Kijiye
Pighleinge Ham Is Chaandni Mein Kab Tak Khuleinge Badan Ho Pyaasaa Hai Dil Pyaasi Ye Rut Hai Chubhne Lagi Har Kiran Gungunaati Hai Kyaa Javaani Sunenge Aankhon Aankhon Mein Har Kahaani Sunenge Honton Pe Rakh Ke Haath Koi Baat KijiyeBan Kar Rahegi Baat Koi Baat Kijiye O Dhalne Lagi Hai Raat Koi Baat Kijiye Badhne Lagi Hai Baat Koi Baat Kijiye
Angad is reminded of the olden days with Kripa
It then starts to rain and they both get soaked, Angad
Kripa sees that Angad is wearing a thin vest and hands over her scarf to him, lelo tand lag jaayegi
Angad makes a funny innocent face, and pretends to
"arre yeh toh mera dialogue hai, yeh to ladke karthe
hai, aur tum mujhe hii...
Kripa interrupts him, "kya hai yeh, ab romeo math bajaana, isse chup chap lelo, aur chalo yaha se, poori raath bithani hai isse jungle mai kya? aur woh bhi isse barsaath mai
Angad thinks of Kripa dancing in the rain, but shakes the thought out and follows her.
Angad is in his room, ab mujhe Kripa ko Mumbai
lejaana hi padega, warna usse apni yaardash kaise
wapees milegi, with trickles of tears in his eyes, par
bohoth thakleef bhi toh hogi na???
Angad is helpless and looks at an irritated kripa
'Dekho, mujhe yeh shaadi baadi mai nahi parna hai,
sab bekaar ki cheeze hai
Angad remembers the time when he was with Kripa in
the mandhir and she had told him about how two souls
unite in marriage etc...
"teek hai, shaadi nahi karni na sahi, par saath tho resakthi ho na?
Kripa then thinks thoughtfully
"yeh zyada suit kartha hai, par haan waha koi mujhe yeh karne ko yaa woh karne ko kahe toh...
nahi kahega na?
mai kisi ki bakwaas nahi sunthi hoon, Kripa points a finger at Angad, samjha kya?
"mujhe tumhari saari sharkthe manzoor hai,"
The Khanna House is being decorated with flowers,
the caterers are hushing in and out of the kitchen,
guests are arriving and an ever worried Naina looks
Just then a cell rings, Naina finds it to be hers and excuses herself from Damini
Naina looks at the number and smiles in relief
"kahan the tum Angad, ithne dino se try karahi thi, aur aaj to tumhari sagaayi to phir, tum kaha ho?
Angad hushes his mother up
"don't worry mom, mai aadhe gante mai pohchjaonga,
I will be there on time"
Damini walks up to Naina
"Naina, Angad kaha hai"
Naina smiles at damini
"abhi uska hi phone tha, woh adhe gante mai araha hai, don't worry
All the guests come and everyone is waiting for Angad
Mishti dressed in a heavy decorated orange choli keeps looking at the door.
Just then Angad arrives and everyone is relieved
Naina grabs Angad's arm and drags him over to Mishti
"Angad, chalo ab aur bohoth dehr math karo, anguti
Angad is handed over the ring
A clicking sound is hearing and someone comes barging
inside wearing black shoes that's laces are untied,
faded blue ragged jeans, a long black shirt that is not tucked in properly, the sleeves are rolled up and smoke is flying in the air cause of the cigarette
the person walks in rudely
Then in a booming gunda-mawaali type of voice
"apun ka kamra kaunsa hai'?
Everyone is shocked from Naina's angered face, to a smirking karthik, to a frozen Mishti,Prithvi can't believe his eyes and a shocked Harshini looks on and so do the rest of the guests
Kripa walks in
Angad looks at her
"haan, tumhara kamraa, upar jaakar, left aur akhri kamra tumhara hai
when without a word, Kripa begins to climb the stairs,
Naina is about to say something
Kripa continues walking up, but stops as soon as she sees something, that scares the wits out of her
Angad is about to follow
"aaaaaarhgh" She screams
everyone looks at her shocked
that's it for today
hope u all liked it
lots of luv
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I loved it. It was great. Please continue. I loved the scene of Angad and Kripa in the forest and that kissing scene, locket, the song. I love that song. Thanks for putting it in.
Lots of Love from Happe.
Joined: 23 April 2005
thats was so good story....plz contiune...
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