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The Rollercoaster of Love - Fan Fiction (Page 4)

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Posted: 06 June 2005 at 3:23pm | IP Logged

it was great. thanx for continue. do write more.

loved that u added pic to the story. Smile



Edited by happe - 06 June 2005 at 3:53pm
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FABUOLA STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!
DO CONTNIUE
later

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 okay here i am ,  back to give you a headache

 actually i skipped school today, so that's why i have all the time

  where were we, oh yes Prithvi

Coffeehouse in Mumbai

 Prithvi watches the clock tick away seconds, and looks at the door expectantly

 

 He then sees someone in a short black skirt and a pink top and his lips break into a smile

"Tania, kaha thi, kabhse tumhara intezaar karaha tha," says  Prithvi

"Sorry, Prithvi, but mom ki thabiyath phirse kharaab hogayi thi, mai kya karthi

"kya, kya hua aunty ko, kuch serious toh nahin, says a concerned Prithvi

" This is for a very beautiful lady"

 

Tanipicture of a red rose on a stem accepts the rose and blushes "thank you"

"Tani, mujhe tumhe kahiin lejaana hai, chalogi," says an extremely shy Prithvi

"chalona" says Tania

Prithvi takes Tania to a small restaurant on the outskirts of Mumbai

Prithvi blindfolds Tania

he takes her in, Tania looks around her in amazement and happiness

the walls are decorated with

       the table is set with

    pink heart balloon     I love you balloon

"yeh, yeh sab kya hai Prithvi," Tania spins around, yeh sab mereliye, Prithvi

Prithvi comes forward, actually mai mai tumse kuch kehna chahtha hoon, mai mai tumse

"tum mujhse pyar karne laghe ho, yahi na",, Tania finishes for him

Tania hugs Prithvi and Prithvi hugs her backWink

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 Kripa is wearing tight black jeans and a white tank top,  walking in a dark, lonely  forest, lost in thoughts about what Angad had said about love.

Kripa is feels thin wisps of wind blowing her hair and feels as if someone is following her

She turns around but sees no one

from behind someone grabs her and pushes her against a tree

Kripa is breathless to feel Angad so close to her. Angad holds the tree behind Kripa, so she can't move

Kripa who is trying to resist Angad's intoxication on her, tries to get away

Angad leans in closer to Kripa's face, until their lips are an inch away

The winds blow fiercely and the silent night brings to unseperable, exhilarating lovers so close with the rest of the world left behind, let these lovers live in their own world

Kaisa Ye Pyar Hai  I love you balloon   ---------I love you balloon

take lots of care

bye for the moment

lots of luv

SoniTongue

   



Edited by soni595 - 06 June 2005 at 6:37pm
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Posted: 06 June 2005 at 6:54pm | IP Logged
very nice loved the last part w/ anagd n kripa! keep it up!
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Posted: 06 June 2005 at 7:20pm | IP Logged
thanks alot its great writting.
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Posted: 06 June 2005 at 7:39pm | IP Logged
thanks so much for liking it
SaNjAnA_xoxo Newbie
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Posted: 06 June 2005 at 8:13pm | IP Logged
wow sonia...im already loving it.....keep on going cuz its a great
start!!!

man thats only emotionally intense story....
Wink   
- sanju
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wowoooooooWW UR STORY ROCKS

 

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