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Okay i'll continue...
The next day
The next day Kripa wakes up to find Angad sleeping on the floor beside her bed.
Kripa looks angrily at Angad and she screams
Angad perks up with sudden sound of Kripa's screams
"kya hua"? Angad says worriedly
"Who the hell are you? tum yaha kya karahe ho? Kripa points towards the door"Get out", right now"
Angad looks at Kripa's expressions then goes out quietly.
Angad wonders how he will make Kripa regain her memory, first I will probably have to take advice from the doctor.
Angad calls Doctor Rai
Doctor Rai checks Kripa, and has a counseling session with a very irritated Kripa.
Doctor Rai comes out of Kripa's room
"Mr. Angad, Kripa ke seer par bohoth gheri chot laghi hai, apko badha dyaan rakhna hoga, ki woh khush rahe aur i will advice you to not tell her anything about her pastso soon, this could prove dangerous! You have to be very careful and work with patience"
Angad is crestfallen
Doctor Rai looks at his expressions
Aap bohoth pyar karthe hai inse? aapke chehre par likha hai, apko ab issi pyar ka ehsaas Kripa ko laghana hai
"ji" Angad looks at Doctor Rai sadly
dekhiye, Kripa bohoth akeli hogayi thi ine che mahino mai aur woh kisiko apne paas nahi ane dethi, aapko sirf issi doori ko meetana hai, apko Kripa ka vishvas jeethna hoga, unka pyar jeethna hoga aur phir ussi dohraan hum dheere dheere essi cheeze karenge jo Kripa pehle kiya karthi thi aur issi koshish mai hum shayad kamyaab hojaaye, Kripa ki yaardsh laane mai.
hope comes into Angad's eyes
Kripa surprised, sees a man wave the flowers accross his face
"aap mujhse dosthi karogi?" says a cheerful Angad
Kripa ignores him and carries on walking
An unpertubed and cute Angad follows her and stands in front of her
Kripa looks at him angrily
"yaha ithne saare lauk hai, aur tum mujhse kyun dosthi karna chahthe ho?" Kripa fumes at Angad for blocking her way
"dekhiye, mera koi dosth nahi hai, aur aapka bhi koi dosth nahi hai" Angad looks at her sweetly
"toh, mai kya karu, says an irritated Kripa
"toh, agar mai tumhara dosth banjau toh tumhe free ka khaana milsaktha hai
Angad scratches his head, "waise bhi tumhare paas zyada paise nahi hai, aur yeh aam churake bechne se bhi bohoth paise nahi athe hai, chori karna bhoori baath hai"
Kripa thinks thoughtfully, faayda hai, faayda hai Saavni, koi bewacoof tumhara kaam asaan karaha hai, ab to theri aash hai yaar, sirf aash
Kripa looks at him suspiciously" par, tumhara kya faayda hai?"
Angad tries to find a reason "hain na, mera paas dosth nahi hai, toh woh miljaayega na?
"teek hai, teek hai" Kripa takes the flowers from him
"mujhe bhuk laghi hai," khaana khane le chalo
Angad grins happily
Like this days pass by, Kripa and Angad become good friends
Angad and Kripa are coming from a movie house.
"essa thodi na hotha hai, kisike ek ke saath poori zindagi thodi na guzaar sakthe hai, yeh pyar vyar sab bekaar hai,"
Angad wonders, zindagi kithni ajeeb hain na, kal thak jo mai kehra tha, jo mai sochtha tha, he sees Kripa taking out a cigarette and grabs it from her aur jo mai kartha tha, aaj Kripa karahi hai, aur mai uske aadrsho par chalra hoon
"please, sirf ek baar, bohoth mann hai", Kripa pleads with Angad
"nahin yeh tumhari sehath kelliye bhoora hai aur tum kya kehri thi, haan koi apni poori zindagi kisi ek ke saath kaise guzaar saktha hai, mai batha tha hoon kaise guzaar saktha hai, pyar ek essa ehsaas hai jisme saari duniya khubsoorath laghne lagthi hai, ek essi kashish hai jo apke dil ko jode raktha hai, ek essa chera apke dil mein meetane se bhi nahi meet tha hai, andhre mai bhi roshni nazar aaye, haazaro chehro mai se sirf ek chehra nazar aaye, pyar zindagi hai, pyar sabkuch hai
Angad carries on his dream moments with Kripa, the beach scene, the car scene, the performance
Kripa looks at Angad and is attracted by what he is saying and doesn't know why she feels conscious around him, why she feels she is so close to him, why she can't stop looking into his eyes and why her heart beats around him
"samji, yeh pyar hotha hai"
Angad interrupts Kripa's thoughts
Kripa looks at him and then looks away shyly, "mujhe ghar jaana hai, bye"
Kripa quickly runs away
Angad waves his hand through his hair, watching Kripa run away
he smiles, Kripa mai jaantha hoon ki tumhe kaise mehsoos horaha hai,
Coffeehouse in Mumbai
Prithvi watches the clock tick away seconds, and looks at the door expectantly
He then sees someone in a short black skirt and a pink top and his lips break into a smile
That's it for today
hope you all like it, i'm not experienced in it, as i am still young, so please bear with me
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