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The Rollercoaster of Love - Fan Fiction (Page 2)

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  Continuing...

Angad sees a girl shaggily dressed sitting on the ground, with many beer bottles around her and smoking a cigarette

Angad knows in his heart who it is, he can never forget her face, never

Angad runs towards Kripa and hugs her

Kripa is taken by shock with Angad hugging her and does not know how to react

Kripa pushes him back, and looks at him angrily: yeh kya natak hai

Angad full of pain is and holds her hand: Kripa mai jaantha hoon jo maine kiya woh maafi ke layak nahi hai par phirbhi mai maafi mangna jaatha hoon, please

Kripa lets go of her hand: kya bakwaas kehre ho, agar sharaab jahiye tho jakar kareedlo mere peeche kyu padhe ho,

Kripa mumbles, waise bhi mere paas zyada paise nahi hai

Angad looks at her astonished, Kripa yeh tum kya kehri ho, sharaab?

Angad then looks around and realization strikes him, that Kripa was drunk looking at empty beer bottles

Savni oh Savni

Angad hears a voice he turns around to see a very old woman staring down at him

Old lady: tum kaun? savni ke saath kya karahe ho?

Angad: Savni, nahi koi galath faymi hai apko, yeh savni nahi Kripa hai

Old lady makes a face: Kripa??

 haan Kripa che mahine pehle usse pahari bridge se geeri thi aur ab mujhe meeli hai, yeh kripa hai, Angad says happily

Now it dawns on the old lady: tho iska naam Kripa hai

beta, haan shayad yeh wahi hai, kyunki yeh usse bridge se geeri thi aur gaowaale ne usse bachaya tha

par bathkismati se..

Angad worried: baskismathi se kya??

Old lady: bathkismathi se uski yaadash chali gayi thi, aur uska atha na batha tha, tho woh yehi rehne laghi aur isse bechari ko bathanahi kahase sharaab ki rath lagayi aur cigarette thab se iska yehi haal haal

Angad looks at an unconscious Kripa, tearfully he pulls her in his arms and cries

Angad: yeh sab meri wajase huwa hai, na mai Kripa ko badnaam kartha aur na usse ithni badhi chot pohchthi aur na uska yeh haal hotha

Kripa ki haalath meri wajase essi huwi, tho mai isse sudharoonga

mai Kripa ko wapas waisi banaonga jaise woh pehle thi

saying this he carries Kripa into his arms

Angad: ji, yaha mera rehna ka intezaam hosakta hai, agar apko koi thakleef na ho tho

Old lady: nahi beta, koi thakleef nahi, balki mujhe khushi hai, ke isse ladki ko ithna pyar karne waala meela hai aur ussekeliye ithni fikar kartha hai aao

Angad dreams of him and Kripa dancing to song in the haze and has tears in his eyes

maine dil se kahaa -2, ai deevaane bataa
maine dil se kahaa, ai deevaane bataa
jab se koi milaa, tu hai khoyaa huaa
ye kahaani hai kyaa, hai ye kyaa silsilaa, ai deevaane bataa
maine dil se kahaa, ai deevaane bataa

dhadkanon mein chhupi, kaisi aavaaz hai
kaisaa ye geet hai kaisaa ye saaz hai
kaisi ye baat hai, kaisaa ye raaz hai, ai deevaane bataa

mere dil ne kahaa -2, jab se koi milaa
chaaNd taare fizaa, phool bhaNvre havaa
ye hasin vaadiyaaN, neelaa ye aasmaaN
sab hai jaise nayaa, mere dil ne kahaa

maine dil se kahaa, mujhko ye to bataa
jo hai tujhko milaa, usmein kyaa baat hai
kyaa hai jaadoogari, kaun hai vo pari, ai deevaane bataa

mere dil ne kahaa
naa vo koi pari, naa koi maahjabin
naa vo duniyaaN mein sabse hai zyaadaa hasin
seedhi saadhi si hai, bholi bhaali si hai
lekin usmein adaa ik niraali si hai
uske bin meraa jeenaa hi bekaar hai

maine dil se kahaa
baat itni si hai ki tujhe pyaar hai
mere dil ne kahaa mujhko iqaraar hai
haaN mujhe pyaar hai -4
Soni

Edited by soni595 - 22 September 2005 at 7:09pm
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Please continue dear!

;-D

- Abhita

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Posted: 05 June 2005 at 1:03am | IP Logged
Thanks soni very much. Plz continue. I can't wait.
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Posted: 05 June 2005 at 1:06am | IP Logged
evrything went well in your story until u made kripa dead
but do go on with it.its interesting Smile
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Posted: 05 June 2005 at 1:17am | IP Logged
tumne bada sa twist bataya..please continue....eagerly waiting onit..Smile
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Posted: 05 June 2005 at 2:09am | IP Logged
yup... plz continue!
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Posted: 05 June 2005 at 2:32am | IP Logged
man u r too good keep going cant wait 4 the next part
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plz continue it's gr8 i hope krips ki memory wapas aajayee lolz...!!

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