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very goood...plz continue.....
~sweta~
very goood...plz continue.....
~sweta~
it was great. thanx for continue. do write more.
loved that u added pic to the story. 😊
👏
FABUOLA STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!
DO CONTNIUE
later
goldi2
okay here i am , back to give you a headache
actually i skipped school today, so that's why i have all the time
where were we, oh yes Prithvi
Coffeehouse in Mumbai
Prithvi watches the clock tick away seconds, and looks at the door expectantly
He then sees someone in a short black skirt and a pink top and his lips break into a smile
"Tania, kaha thi, kabhse tumhara intezaar karaha tha," says Prithvi
"Sorry, Prithvi, but mom ki thabiyath phirse kharaab hogayi thi, mai kya karthi
"kya, kya hua aunty ko, kuch serious toh nahin, says a concerned Prithvi
" This is for a very beautiful lady"
Tani
accepts the rose and blushes "thank you"
"Tani, mujhe tumhe kahiin lejaana hai, chalogi," says an extremely shy Prithvi
"chalona" says Tania
Prithvi takes Tania to a small restaurant on the outskirts of Mumbai
Prithvi blindfolds Tania
he takes her in, Tania looks around her in amazement and happiness
the walls are decorated with
the table is set with
"yeh, yeh sab kya hai Prithvi," Tania spins around, yeh sab mereliye, Prithvi
Prithvi comes forward, actually mai mai tumse kuch kehna chahtha hoon, mai mai tumse
"tum mujhse pyar karne laghe ho, yahi na",, Tania finishes for him
Tania hugs Prithvi and Prithvi hugs her back😉
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Kripa is wearing tight black jeans and a white tank top, walking in a dark, lonely forest, lost in thoughts about what Angad had said about love.
Kripa is feels thin wisps of wind blowing her hair and feels as if someone is following her
She turns around but sees no one
from behind someone grabs her and pushes her against a tree
Kripa is breathless to feel Angad so close to her. Angad holds the tree behind Kripa, so she can't move
Kripa who is trying to resist Angad's intoxication on her, tries to get away
Angad leans in closer to Kripa's face, until their lips are an inch away
The winds blow fiercely and the silent night brings to unseperable, exhilarating lovers so close with the rest of the world left behind, let these lovers live in their own world
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take lots of care
bye for the moment
lots of luv
Soni😛
wowoooooooWW UR STORY ROCKS
very nice story...plz continue...
~sweta~
Continuing...
Angad leans in closer to Kripa's face, until their lips are an inch away
The winds blow fiercely and the silent night brings to unseperable, exhilarating lovers so close with the rest of the world left behind, let these lovers live in their own world
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Angad leans in closer and closer...
Kripa leans back as hard as she can, but she ends up leaning her head against the tree.
"Angad..."
Angad touches Kripa's lips
"shhhhh..."
Angad then kisses Kripa on the Neck, on the cheeks, the forehead and lets go of her
Kripa runs away deeper into the forest.
A dreamy Angad watches Kripa run away and smiles with pleasure
Kripa walks in the cold and covers herself with her scarf and keeps looking back, because she thinks Angad is following her
Angad threads in and out of trees following Kripa and sings the song
Dhalne Lagi Hai Raat Koi Baat KijiyePighleinge Ham Is Chaandni Mein Kab Tak Khuleinge Badan Ho Pyaasaa Hai Dil Pyaasi Ye Rut Hai Chubhne Lagi Har Kiran Gungunaati Hai Kyaa Javaani Sunenge Aankhon Aankhon Mein Har Kahaani Sunenge Honton Pe Rakh Ke Haath Koi Baat KijiyeBan Kar Rahegi Baat Koi Baat Kijiye O Dhalne Lagi Hai Raat Koi Baat Kijiye Badhne Lagi Hai Baat Koi Baat Kijiye
Angad is reminded of the olden days with Kripa
It then starts to rain and they both get soaked, Angad
is shivering.
Kripa sees that Angad is wearing a thin vest and hands over her scarf to him, lelo tand lag jaayegi
Angad makes a funny innocent face, and pretends to
be angry
"arre yeh toh mera dialogue hai, yeh to ladke karthe
hai, aur tum mujhe hii...
Kripa interrupts him, "kya hai yeh, ab romeo math bajaana, isse chup chap lelo, aur chalo yaha se, poori raath bithani hai isse jungle mai kya? aur woh bhi isse barsaath mai
Angad thinks of Kripa dancing in the rain, but shakes the thought out and follows her.
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Angad is in his room, ab mujhe Kripa ko Mumbai
lejaana hi padega, warna usse apni yaardash kaise
wapees milegi, with trickles of tears in his eyes, par
bohoth thakleef bhi toh hogi na???
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Next morning
Angad is helpless and looks at an irritated kripa
"par savni..."
'Dekho, mujhe yeh shaadi baadi mai nahi parna hai,
sab bekaar ki cheeze hai
Angad remembers the time when he was with Kripa in
the mandhir and she had told him about how two souls
unite in marriage etc...
"teek hai, shaadi nahi karni na sahi, par saath tho resakthi ho na?
Kripa then thinks thoughtfully
"yeh zyada suit kartha hai, par haan waha koi mujhe yeh karne ko yaa woh karne ko kahe toh...
nahi kahega na?
mai kisi ki bakwaas nahi sunthi hoon, Kripa points a finger at Angad, samjha kya?
"mujhe tumhari saari sharkthe manzoor hai,"
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Khanna House
The Khanna House is being decorated with flowers,
the caterers are hushing in and out of the kitchen,
guests are arriving and an ever worried Naina looks
depressed😕
Just then a cell rings, Naina finds it to be hers and excuses herself from Damini
Naina looks at the number and smiles in relief
"kahan the tum Angad, ithne dino se try karahi thi, aur aaj to tumhari sagaayi to phir, tum kaha ho?
Angad hushes his mother up
"don't worry mom, mai aadhe gante mai pohchjaonga,
I will be there on time"
Damini walks up to Naina
"Naina, Angad kaha hai"
Naina smiles at damini
"abhi uska hi phone tha, woh adhe gante mai araha hai, don't worry
All the guests come and everyone is waiting for Angad
Mishti dressed in a heavy decorated orange choli keeps looking at the door.
Just then Angad arrives and everyone is relieved
Naina grabs Angad's arm and drags him over to Mishti
"Angad, chalo ab aur bohoth dehr math karo, anguti
pehnao
Angad is handed over the ring
A clicking sound is hearing and someone comes barging
inside wearing black shoes that's laces are untied,
faded blue ragged jeans, a long black shirt that is not tucked in properly, the sleeves are rolled up and smoke is flying in the air cause of the cigarette
the person walks in rudely
Then in a booming gunda-mawaali type of voice
"apun ka kamra kaunsa hai'?
Everyone is shocked from Naina's angered face, to a smirking karthik, to a frozen Mishti,Prithvi can't believe his eyes and a shocked Harshini looks on and so do the rest of the guests
Kripa walks in
Angad looks at her
"haan, tumhara kamraa, upar jaakar, left aur akhri kamra tumhara hai
when without a word, Kripa begins to climb the stairs,
Naina is about to say something
Kripa continues walking up, but stops as soon as she sees something, that scares the wits out of her
Angad is about to follow
"aaaaaarhgh" She screams
everyone looks at her shocked
that's it for today
hope u all liked it
lots of luv
Sonia
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