Beneath The Surface - An IshRa SS | Last Ch - Pg 28 - Page 4

Originally posted by: EkPaheli

 

Hey Meet 😊

@bold - yep I had so much discussions about this with you, Lucky, Sneha (metamorphmagus) that I felt why not write an SS on this 😳

@red - I dont know how will this be taken but  I chose to go with my vision here 😳

@blue -  I personally follow that quote and believe not to trust or dislike people in an instant so thats where it comes from and the next UD will be soon 😊

Originally posted by: happenstance

Res- I don't think I can get away with any more grinning in front of my boss for now will be back

Edited- glad I did wait to read this, it had me all misty eyed. That was just so beautifully written, I want more please😳

Couple of things:

And the mountains echoed is a favourite of mine and I love that quote. Loved the way you conveyed the 'lessons' that he has learnt and is now learning all over again but in a completely different fashion.

You really get into the 'nitty gritty' (for lack of a better word right word) of Raman's core and each time regardless of which OS or SS it is I feel like we as a reader also grow with Raman- and thats all down to your gift! Its a pleasure reading your work. Looking forward to the next 🤗

Originally posted by: SilverGold

AMAZING! This was so well portrayed like all of your previous SSes, I love the way you wrote that appearances can and are deceptive. It applies to both Shagun and Ishita, although they are poles apart. I LOVED it! 👏👏👏

Originally posted by: felciya

I love your writing. The title is apt . You have described Raman's past n present well. I'm waiting for your take on Ishita's side of exploration.