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Posted: 02 June 2014 at 6:38am | IP Logged

Mrs. Kriya Reyaansh Singhnia or Mrs. Kriya Manika Rathod

Kriya was dancing in rain and Rey was looking at her from far away and staring her intensely towards her. Kriya, moves sensuously making Rey go all gaga over her. She know that Rey is watching her. She was enjoying doing this, she was enjoying Rey's reaction to her every small thing. She moved her leg and hand randomly and in sync.

Seeing her face which was full of the water droplets, Rey gulp down his saliva. When he notice a water droplet flowing down towards the narrow valley of her. He absent mindly started walking towards Kriya.

Kriya smirked seeing her victory, seeing Rey coming towards her. She quickly caught Rey's shoulder and started dancing holding them. Moving seductively. She slowly moved her hand on his broad masculine chest feeling it by her palms. she started to move away when Rey hold her wrist and twirled her and she came banging into in chest.

Rey felt her wrist and took hold of her slim waist and squeezed it lightly making shiver run down her spine. Rey slowly moved his one hand on her back and another measuring the length spinal cord of her. She arched up. and look into his eyes.

Rey too looked into her eyes and find the fire, the desire for each other. This was clearly visible on his face too. He slowly bend down and kissed her edge of the lips. He once again looked up and saw her closed eyes and smiled a little. He bend down and picked up the shivering rosy petal in his hard one. He slowly sucked lower lips. Kriya to gave in and started kissing Rey back, her hands automatically found the way into Rey's hair and started messing it up. This was driving Rey crazy to the hell. He slightly bite Kriya's lower lip and Kriya moved giving Rey an entry in her mouth. Rey snaked in his tongue and started to taste every nook and corner of her mouth. Kriya to taste every nook and corner of Rey's mouth. Soon the slow kiss turned into a wild and passionate kiss.

They broke the kiss when they were in lack of oxygen and both looked at each other breathlessly, deep into each other's eyes. There was a loud sound of thunder by hearing this sound Kriya hugged her due to fear. Rey too hugged, back her tight with all his passion. They were standing like that only for a moment or two. Both wished that the time could stop. It felt heavenly to be in each other's arms. Both broke the hug, Rey was just gazing at her making Kriya blush.

She turned to leave not being able to stand on the gaze of Rey. Rey quickly pulled her and Kriya's hand end up resting on Rey's shoulder. Rey pulled her more into himself such that he could feel the hot breath of Kriya with his. Rey bit Kriya's ear lobe to which Kriya closed her eyes and moaned out Rey's name. Rey slowly kissed Kriya's temple, then both cheeks. He moved down and kissed her neck. He moved towards her nape will kissing. He was going to go further down when.

*splash* *splash*

Rey woke up with a jolt and looked at his wet tee and then looked at the person who did it with anger ready to pounce on that person for breaking his such a beautiful umm and hawt dream.

When he looked up and saw a girl standing and laughing like a manic holding her stomach.

"Kriya!!" Rey shouted on top of his voice making Kriya giggle more, "What the hell is this..??" Rey added holding his wet tee.

"umm u don't know what's that..??" Kriya asked in serious tone, "it's your tee which is wet" saying this Kriya again started laughing.

"Kriya" Rey said removing his tee, Kriya saw it and started running away. Rey followed her. she ran to every corner of the room.

"Rey, kis ke sapne dekh raha tha..??" Kriya asked still running for her dear life.

"Kriya" Rey said chasing her.

They went outside the room towards living room. Kriya throw the pillow which was on couch. Rey carefully caught it and throw it on the couch back again. Kriya ran behind the couch they again chase over there for few minutes. Kriya again ran to another room of the house.

"Kriya, kidar bhaag rahi hai. Mein tujhe chodonga nhi rukh" saying this Rey too ran in the room.

They both were chasing each other like a tom and jerry all around the room. Suddenly Kriya leg tripped on something so she caught Rey's arms and due to imbalance both on fell on the bed in a way like Kriya on the bed and Rey above her.

"Rey utho" Kriya said trying to push Rey.

"Itnki bhi kya jaldi hai..??" Rey said by winking and took hold of Kriya's hand and hold it above her head.

"Rey" Kriya said in stern face or should I say trying to sound like that.

"So, Kriya ye koansa tarika hua kisi insaan ko uthane ka..??" Rey asked Kissing Kriya's nose.

"Kriya ka tarika" Kriya said with a light chuckle

"Badi hassi aarahi hai tumhe" Rey said bending down making Kriya's eyes wide open
"Rey chodo, koi dekhlega" Kriya said struggling

"Koi nhi dekhega" Rey said and kissed her both cheeks and then slowing her temples then fore head, he bite her ear lobe to which Kriya moaned and closed her eyes. Rey then kissed her both eyes.

And he was going to take her lips in his when they heard a voice "Kriya..?? where are you" both Rey and Kriya looked at each other.

"LO aagyi mere pyaar ki dushman" Rey said with pout, Kriya only pulled his cheeks and pushed him.

"Manika arahi ho bus 1 minute"Kriya shouted back "And Rey go and take shower" Kriya added and started leaving the room when she heard

"Universe ji mujhe kbhi kbhi doubt aata hai ki ye Mrs. Kriya Reyaansh Singhania hai ya Mrs. Kriya Manika Rathod, jab dekho uske saat hi rehti hai" Rey said cutely to which Kriya chuckle and came towards Rey and kissed his cheeks and winked at him and ran away from there, leaving a shock Rey. 


Dont ask me whts this it was going to be hawt OS..but i forgot the story line nd it changed into umm a faltu imagination. so plzz dont kill me *sply TAC* 

title credit both goes to Neha. :* thnk u.. nd one more think if u hv read Priceless Friendship my one of the OS then u must be knwing who is Manika Rathod

reviews plzzz

Edited by -reine- - 02 June 2014 at 11:34am

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Posted: 02 June 2014 at 6:41am | IP Logged
The dream was really hawt!Day Dreaming but it was a dream only :( reality mein aur hot hona tha!
The way kriya tried to wake him upROFLROFL and their chase was so cute and adorable.
Loved Rey's last dialogue...adorable KriyanshSmileEmbarrassedWink

Edited by rajeshwaribr - 02 June 2014 at 6:56am




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Posted: 02 June 2014 at 7:26am | IP Logged
Epsss its was beautifulll
Clap sweet plus hot plus romentic
Awesome Wonderfulll
abhi great work
Lovely Embarrassed




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Posted: 02 June 2014 at 8:18am | IP Logged
first of all it was nt faltu
Rey ke imagination was awosumme
Kria and rey are husbnd and wife
And who s tis manika
Do write more




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Posted: 02 June 2014 at 8:30am | IP Logged
Res Tongue

this was cutteee hott and funnyyyROFL

poor reyLOLLOL

lovedd d endinggg partThumbs Up

amazingly writtenThumbs Up

Edited by aishu3003 - 14 June 2014 at 5:30am




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Posted: 02 June 2014 at 8:41am | IP Logged
dream kafi hot tha yaar...

well loved the os..

superb abhi..

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