Asad-Zoya FF:Zoya Proposes, Asad Disposes Thread II Chapter 22 Pg 137 - Page 73

Ayaan is behaving weirdly...
something is clearly off...

now razia entry... even rashid cant do much...
hmmm

there comes Tanveer and ijaz... i dont think
tanveer attracted towards ayaan..
only zoya think that

Shireen and humaira... she is always very stiff person
and zoya's comment about shireen
only bought asad fight
with zoya...

But is not just that...asad is getting jealous with ayaan
and zoya closeness...

Now all hell lose...

       

When are u updating 😛

Noe. Update bro... Its like a month you have not updated. Please. 

Originally posted by: najma123

Noe. Update bro... Its like a month you have not updated. Please. 

Originally posted by: treasure11

When are u updating 😛

I ended up reading last two chapters again 😛😆

And yeah your note ,it shows how passionate you are about writing and enjoy it soo much!!!

Its great whn u read each and every comment with soo much interest 😳

All the best Noe 😊

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i read the entire story as (Aish) treasure11 and Beyourself (ankie) recommended😳
really liked it!
was earlier a reader of hearbeat warfare😊
Edited by maha2012 - 9 years ago

I always found Shireen's excessive talking exasperating and wasn't unnerved by Zoe's discourteous remark in the last chapter, but I honestly have to admit, Shireen came through as a pure and liberated soul in this chapter. The moment when Zoe realizes Shireen lives in solitude despite enjoying company and decides to spend time with her pulled at heart strings. I found Shireen really very endearing and beautifully written in this chapter.

 

For obvious reasons, I'm ecstatic Ayaan and Humera are engaged and now anticipate Tanveer and Imran being explored to their culmination.

 

The void between Asad and Zoya is heart breaking, especially from Zoe's perspective of the distance between them.