AvRaj SS -Dil Dhadakne Do-- In Cruise CH 4 PG 7 - Page 5

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I loved it 2 d core...AvRraj'z fighting, der dance, Avni taking care of Raj, Raj tryin to act dat Avni'z presence makes no difference to him...d flashback...Raj'z bonding wid his Father...Avni offering Chocolate and finally Avni'z revenge...everything Superb...Mind blowing...Awesum...Loved, Loved, Loved it totally❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

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chapter 4-
Hola guys 😎
Finally I am back after ages 😛
Really sorry to make you wait for long 😳
Was busy due to my studies 😊
Hope you understand 😊

I have not proof read this update so please ignore typo errors 😳

Here you go 😉
Enjoy in Dil Dhadakne Do Cruise 😃😆
Happy Reading 🤓

Raj was running after Avni to catch her...
As he was about to caught hold of her wrist..
Gang entered..
Amit: Ye Kya ho raha hai?
Avni hides behind Devika..
Devika: Tum dono (Raj-Avni) ka na Kuch samjh nai aata Kabhi aise ladte ho jaise phir Kanchi ek dusre ka face tak nai dekhoge? 😲 aur Kabhi aise behave karte ho jaise best friends ho 😕
AvRaj together whispered Best Friends? 😲 No ways 😡 infact hum abhi bhi lad rahe the 🥱
Amit: Vo toh dikh hi raha hai 😉
Raj: Kya dikh raha hai haan 😡
Varun: Guys chill...
Avni tumne toh Kaha tha ki hum Truth and Dare khelenge... par yahaan toh Mahabharat ka episode chal raha hai 🥱
Devika: Haa guys chalo na please Truth and Dare khele

*------------------------*

Gang starts playing Truth and Dare..
Varun moves the bottle..
It stops on Amit..
Gang cheers yayyy Amit 🥳
Bolo Amit Kya choose karoge Truth or Dare 😈 asks Ishita
Amit: Truth 😃
Devika: Amit se question main puchingi please.. 😳
Avni: nai bilkul nai *winks seeing Ishita* Ishita question Tu puch 😉
Devika: OK
Ishita: Amit your question is yahaan pe Vo ladki Kon hai jise dekh k tumhare dil mein Zor zor se dhak dhak hoti hai? 😉
Nakul , Raj & Varun cheers Amit.. Yo Amit Go for it 😎
Amit: Vo ladki hai..
Devika's heart beating fast..
Amit: Vo ladki hai... Vo ladki hai... Ummm Devika *blushes*
Devika's cheeks turn pink *blushes*
Gang teases them..
One by one everyone's turn came only AvRaj are left..
Devika moves the bottle and it stops on Raj..
Amit: Wohooo finally 🥳
Devika: Bolo Raj Truth or Dare 😈
Raj was about to say Dare but Avni intruppted saying ye Mr Bandar toh dare hi lega ise sach bolna thodi aata hai *giggles*
Raj: Accha aisi baat hai toh I choose Truth 😎
Avni: OK so your question Kya tum jaise flirter ko Kabhi kisi se ishq wala love I mean true wala love hua hai?
This question makes Raj furious.. His past again haunts him..

--Flashback--
And the Rockstar of all our hearts is Raj Mehrotra from Sunshine Sparkels School ... audience claps and cheers ...
After receiving trophy .. He gives speech and thanks his school, friends and family and dedicates his trophy to his dad.. While giving speech he was looking for his dad in crowd .. Suddenly his eyes witness most beautiful sight .. He sees a girl .. Who was talking with her friend and smiling... Raj was mesmerized by her beauty .. He felt as if he has fallen for an unknown girl...

Amit shakes Raj Kya hua dude answer de?
Avni giggles.. soch raha jhoot wala jhoot Bol yaa phir jhoot wala sach 🤣
Raj: Haan hua hai mujhe kisi se pyaar..
Avni wonders iss flirter ko bhi kisi se pyaar ho sakta hai Kya 🤔
Devika: Ab toh bas Avni Baki hai.. Bol Avni Truth or Dare?
Avni was about to say truth but Raj interuppted.. Himmat hai toh Dare leke dikhao.. I challenge you 😈
Avni: Avni Kundra mein toh himmat hi himmat bhari hai.. Challenge accepted 😈

Gang thinking about Avni's task..
Devika comes up with an idea..
She takes out hathkari and says she ll tie Avni's one hand on one side and Raj's one hand other side.. They both have to spend 3 hours here in room alone..
Avni: 😲
Raj: ek min ek min dare Avni ko mila hai yaa mujhe? 😡
Devika: You both have no other option 😎
Raj: I am not in for this 😡
Avni: mujhe bhi kpi shauk nai hai iss bandar k sath time spend krne ka.. Ek baar k liye main apne enemy ko apna best friend bana k uske sath akele reh lu but not with this bandar 😡
Devika: Raj bhi toh tera enemy hi hai 😉
Aur soch le ye task pura na krke tu dare toh haaregi hi uske sath sath Raj's challenge bhi haar jayegi 😛
Avni: OK m ready 🥱
Raj: but m not ready 😡
Amit: kyun dude darr gaya Kya? *giggles*
Raj: oh hello Raj kisi se nai darta 😎 I am in 🥱

Gang leaves them alone in room..

Raj: Ek toh Waise hi right hand mein pain aur ab usi ko baandh diya 🥱
Avni: Shut up 😵
Raj: Kyu shut up? 😡
Avni: Jan muj k right hand mein pain hai Bol kar mujhe guilty feel karana chahate ho na? 😡
Raj: ofcourse tume guilty feel hona bhi chahiye .. Na tum ye challenge accept karti na ye sab hota 😡
Avni: What do you mean? 😡 saari galti meri hai? 😡
Tum bhi toh mana kar sakte the na 😡 Us time toh bare hero ban rahe the Raj kisi se nai darta ab Kya hua haan 😡
Raj: Darr tum rahi ho phattu junglie billi main nai 😎 😡
Avni: Vo toh dikh raha hai Kon dar raha hai 😡
AvRaj starts Tu Tu Main Main..
After sometime Avni was about to leave in anger but handcuff pulls her back.. She bumps on Raj...
Raj loose balance.. And both falls on bed...

BG: Kabhi gardishon ka maara
Kabhi khwahishon se haara
Roothe chaand ka hai chakor
Zara se bhi samjhote se
Yeh parhez rakhta hai kyun
Maane na kabhi koi zor
Duniya jahaan ki bandishon ki
Yeh kahaan parwaah kare
Jab kheenche teri dor
Kheenche teri dor...
Manchala.. mann chala teri ore
Manchala.. mann chala teri ore

AvRaj lost in each other..
They forget where they are?
What are they doing?
Raj came too close to her..

Khamoshiyon ki sooraton mein
Dhoondhe tera shor
Dhoondhe tera shor

Avni can hear her heartbeats...
Raj came more close to her...
Raj was about to kiss her...
She closed her eyes...
He bought his lips close to her...
Manchala.. mann chala teri ore
Manchala.. mann chala teri ore

Suddenly he gained his lost sense and realized what he was going to do..
He wakes up... Handcuff pulls Avni too..
He was not able to face her..
She was blushing..
There was a moment of awkwardness..

Mujhe bahut bhukh lagi hai... Avni whispered..
Raj: Toh mujhe khaane ka irada hai Kya?
Avni: Shut up!
Chalo canteen area mein chale
Raj: haan ofcourse agar tume apna dare break karna hai toh mujhe koi problem nai hai 😉
Avni: oh yaa bahar bhi nai ja sakte
Par mujhe bahut bhukh lagi hai
Raj: Bhukh toh mujhe bhi lagi hai...
Meri right pocket mein Kuch hai
Avni: Kya hai? 😃
Raj: vo tumhe Khud hi nikal k dekhna hoga as its difficult for me yo take out something from pocket with my left hand..
Avni somehow manages to take out chocolate from his pocket..
Avni: Wow Dairy Milk Silk 😛
She opens packet and starts eating and licking 😛
Raj: oh Miss Junglie billi bhukh sirf tumhe nai mujhe bhi lagi hai 😡
Avni: Oh sorry ye lo..
She passes half chocolate to him..
Both busy eating and licking...
Together they whispered 'Chocolate my life saviour'
Realizing both uttered same thing..
AvRaj started laughing 😆

Three hours passed...
Gang comes inside room..
Devika: Lo hum aa gaye 🥳
Congo Avni Tu task mein pass hui 😃🥳
Raj: Congo shongo vongo jo bolna hai baad mein bolna pehle mujhe iss bandhan se free Karo 😡
Devika: Haan haan wait abhi karti hoon 😉
Devika opens her bag to take out key...
She searches hard but couldn't find it..
Devika: guys
Avni: Kya hua kitna time lagega? 😡
Devika: he he aa ummm vooo key mil nai rahi hai..
AvRaj: Kya? 😲
Ishita: aise Kaise nai mil rahi 😕😲
Give me your bag lemme search..
Varun and Nakul too joins Ishita in search mission..
AvRaj: 😡
Amit was standing silent..

--Flashback--
Gang drinking coffee and giggling Kya phasaya na becharo ko mazaa aa gaya..
Meanwhile Amit manages to take out key from Devika's bag..
Amit thinks.. Sorry Raj but yahi ek tarika hai tujhe tere past se nikalne ka..
Nakul: Ab toh Devika ka pura bag bhi khali krdiya par key nai mili 😛
Raj: Toh phir Ab?
Amit: ab toh shayd tum dono ko aaj puri raat saath mein hi rehna hoga.. Kal subah hum Professor Roy ki help lenge par abhi Vo bhi humari help nai kar sakte 😛
Avni: wat yaar? Devika Tu bhi na ek key nai sambhal payi
Devika: I am really sorry guys ..
Raj: sorry bolne se problem solve nai ho jayegi 🥱

Nakul brings food for AvRaj and says its already 10 PM ...They should eat and sleep..
Devika asks Ishita to sleep with her tonight as AvRaj will be staying in her room..
Gang leaves..

Chocolate was not enough..
They were still hungry..
Avni knows Raj can't eat from left hand... And his right hand is tied in handcuff..
She makes him eat from her hand
Avni: muh kholo apna
Raj eats..

BG: Beintehaa... Beintehaaa.. Yu pyaar kar.. Beintehaa...

Hum soyenge Kaise?
Raj: aankh band krke aur Kaise 🥱
Avni: Idiot I mean ye handcuffs 😵
Raj moves towards bed and lies there... Again handcuff pulls Avni and she falls on Raj..
They again share eye lock for few minutes ...

BG: Beintehaa Beintehaa...

Avni: hum aise kaise so sakte hai ek bed pe 😡
Raj: Problem kya hai 😕
Avni: Matlb? 😡
Raj: Hamesha galat sochti ho.. Tum us side so aur main iss side beech mein pillows 😎
Avni: No ways ..
Tum floor pe so aur main yahaan upar soungi 😡
Raj: Dare tumhe mila tha aur ek bed pe sone se problem tumhe hai mujhe nai.. So floor pe tum so..
Again there Tu Tu Main Main starts..
Avni: of fine main floor pe sone ja rahi hoon .. Waise bhi kal subah cruise Roseli island pe rukne wala hai.. Mujhe jaldi uthne k liye jaldi sona jaruri hai..BM's Castle wow...
Raj: BM castle wat? 😕
Avni: meri badi maa ka ghar hai wahaan Jo kisi castle se kam nai 😉
Raj: Toh tum wahaa jaogi Kal?
Avni: ofcourse kal sham tak cruise roseli island pe rukega ... After ages I am gonna meet her.. 😃
Raj thinks accha chance hai Aaj ka badla lene ka Kal main bhi iski BM se milunga 😈
Avni: Kya soch rahe ho? Anyways bad night horror dreams..
Avni lies on floor...
Raj: wish u same ... *sleeps*
Avni tries hard to sleep.. But she was not able to sleep on floor...
After sometime she comes on bed and sleep on other side as was suggested by Raj earlier..
Avni: accha hai so raha hai wrna tease krta 🥱
She finally close her eyes and sleeps peacefully..
After sometime Raj opens his eyes and smiles seeing Avni sleeping beside him 😳
He sleeps too..
All this while some unknown personality was clicking AvRaj's snaps..

Precap:
Scene 1: As Avni was about to move.. She felt someone held her duppata from back.. She turns back and finds Raj wiping tikka from his cheeks with her duppata which makes her furious and Raj winks..

Scene 2: AvRaj in kitchen..
Avni hugs Raj tightly and Raj too embrace her in his arms..



yaay finally hogyi chapter 4 ki update complete 😛
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i wonder who is that phhoto clicker.,..!!

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Abhi past story aur build up hoga dheere dheere raaz khul jayega 😳
photo clicker Kon hai ye Mainu bhi nai pata 🤔

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