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Posted: 01 July 2014 at 11:15am | IP Logged
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superb udSmileSmile

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Posted: 02 July 2014 at 10:13am | IP Logged
hi daya
wonderful ud
tara is hurt...its good to talk about problem
ud soonSmile

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Hi Daya
Devain isn't going to let it go...he has an explanation ready for Tara

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Posted: 03 July 2014 at 4:58pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by AzureLicht


Time would turn flames to embers. That's my favorite line. 

Also, though I don't really know why, I completely love the part about the glow-in-the-dark stars on the ceiling. It really seems like an analogy. 

I love the update, and despite not knowing the characters in any way, just by reading, it feels like I do :) 

Hiya Ridh! 

Yeah the glow-in-the-dark stars on the dark ceiling could definitely be an analogy for them..He's the dark and she's the star...and he's also the one that's making her glow...

Well, these characters are made from scratch so you aren't missing anything :)  I am glad to hear that you're liking the story...it'll be done with the next updateLOL

wasn't meant to be long and I've managed to wrap it up...

Thanks for reading and commenting Big smile
Take Care. Cheers,

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Posted: 03 July 2014 at 4:58pm | IP Logged
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Hi Tamanna, 

Thanks for reading and commenting on my story over here. I really appreciate it :) 

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Hey Uvi,

Thank you so much for reading and commenting on my SS. I'm glad you're liking it. 
Take Care. Cheers, 

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Posted: 03 July 2014 at 5:01pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by FASSBEN


HI Daya

Thumbs Up Awesome ud once again I must tell you that I really enjoy this SS I know this has nothing to with LTL but I still love reading this.

Thanks as always take care

Hiya Fassbender!

Thanks so much for reading and commenting. I appreciate you coming out of our forum over here to support my writing :D I am glad to hear you are enjoying it. I hope you like the next and final part also.

Take Care. Cheers,

Daya


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