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Posted: 18 May 2014 at 10:57pm | IP Logged
Dayaa   
First n foremost Where have u been all these days, missed you on ltl forum n whats this???  why you here?? Shocked  why did you have to shift base Confused    please daya come back to laagi,   you belong there n yes im behaving like say your curly locks now Big smile  remember her ? LOL

Ok, but only this one time im coming here, next time hope to see you on laagi.. with the next updateTongue
But What a brilliant start to the SS daya,   you managed to capture my attention right from the word go.  Hmm i luv drama queens n now what more can i ask if this lady in distress is baying for someone,s blood LOL    for starters here she goes with the slap,  bingo !    the guy seems to be the root cause of her rage, more fireworks to follow  Wink       Many Congrats on your latest venture Clap


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Posted: 19 May 2014 at 11:12am | IP Logged

Hi daya

Spontenous is what you say to awesome writing LOL...then u r truly giftedEmbarrassed...continue soon...liked it...opened  the inbox late...so late reply...my apology...if possible post the link to LTL forum...more member will be aware of it continue soon

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Posted: 20 May 2014 at 11:11am | IP Logged
Hi Daya
liked the teaser...Missing you on LTL forum...Ouch.just like rest of gang...continue soonSmile

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Posted: 21 May 2014 at 11:01am | IP Logged
hi daya
your immensely talented...why not a SS on LTL forum..i miss u thereOuch

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Posted: 23 May 2014 at 10:49am | IP Logged
hi daya
wonderful startSmile
but it feels like away from homeOuch
LTL is missing you

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Posted: 03 June 2014 at 9:09am | IP Logged
Originally posted by tamanna1391

nice start

Hey Tamanna,
Thanks for reading and commenting. Glad you liked the start :) 

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Posted: 03 June 2014 at 9:11am | IP Logged
Originally posted by twinkle-star

Hi DayaHug
aweee such an awesome start dearHeart...aweee tara..Hug.she is too soft & believed everyoneHug...whats the reason behind her anger dear???.Shocked..She even didn't know his real name...Shocked
She is in pain...what happened???.Hug..who is he???..Confused.aweee   Daya can't wait now..Day Dreaming.you portrayed Tara's emotions very well dear..HeartClap.really superb.HeartHeart..loved the update sooo much...HeartSweetest DayaHug.Hats off to you dear.Hug..please update sooon dear..Day DreamingHug.Big teddy hugs from Lalli babyHug



  

Hey Lalli! 
Thanks for reading and commenting. Glad you liked it. Tara's anger is justified if somewhat exaggerated. But thing is when people closest to you hurt you, the reaction is much stronger!

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Originally posted by eternity_of_luv

awesome dear looking forward thnx for pm

Hi Ranju!
Good to see you. Thanks for reading and commenting. Much appreciated.  Glad you like the start :) 

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