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nice start

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Hi Daya
aweee such an awesome start dear...aweee tara...she is too soft & believed everyone...whats the reason behind her anger dear???...She even didn't know his real name...
She is in pain...what happened???...who is he???...aweee Daya can't wait now...you portrayed Tara's emotions very well dear...really superb...loved the update sooo much...Sweetest Daya.Hats off to you dear...please update sooon dear...Big teddy hugs from Lalli baby

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awesome dear looking forward thnx for pm

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hi daya
awesome start

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HI Daya

Loved the first part looking forward to the rest of this SS
UD next part really soon

Thanks as always take care

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Daya...that was a super awesome start!! Wink

Love the characterization of the girl. I'm dying to know the cause of her anger. Also the guy sounds interesting.

Lol...love the way she thinks of his 'chocolate brown eyes' even in the midst of her anger LOL

Can't wait for the next part. Upload soon Smile

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oyeee baji your bhau here...
ummhhh what if i say your gussa ummh i mean us ediut anita ka..seems very feels very familiar to me.. me chuckling.. what's yours? and her problem? ok.. wanting to learn more..
loved the fireball start.. pappy ,this is my first time here in the writer's corner.. good you got me here..
much love roarrr.. ankhien neeche!
hammie..
@ moni.. hello daya's buddy...

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