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Posted: 17 May 2014 at 9:55am | IP Logged
nice start

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Posted: 17 May 2014 at 10:06am | IP Logged
Hi DayaHug
aweee such an awesome start dearHeart...aweee tara..Hug.she is too soft & believed everyoneHug...whats the reason behind her anger dear???.Shocked..She even didn't know his real name...Shocked
She is in pain...what happened???.Hug..who is he???..Confused.aweee   Daya can't wait now..Day Dreaming.you portrayed Tara's emotions very well dear..HeartClap.really superb.HeartHeart..loved the update sooo much...HeartSweetest DayaHug.Hats off to you dear.Hug..please update sooon dear..Day DreamingHug.Big teddy hugs from Lalli babyHug



  


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awesome dear looking forward thnx for pm

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Posted: 17 May 2014 at 11:03am | IP Logged
hi daya
awesome startSmile

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Posted: 17 May 2014 at 5:31pm | IP Logged

HI Daya

Loved the first part looking forward to the rest of this SS
UD next part really soon

Thanks as always take care


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Posted: 17 May 2014 at 8:14pm | IP Logged
Daya...that was a super awesome start!!WinkWink
 Love the characterization of the girl. I'm dying to know the cause of her anger. Also the guy sounds interesting.
 Lol...love the way she thinks of his 'chocolate brown eyes' even in the midst of her anger LOLLOLLOL
 Can't wait for the next part. Upload soon Smile

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oyeee baji your bhau here...
 ummhhh  what if i say your gussa ummh i mean us ediut anita ka..seems very feels very familiar to me.. me chuckling.. what's yours? and her problem?   ok.. wanting to learn more..
loved the fireball  start..  pappy ,this is my first time here in the writer's corner.. good you  got me here..
much love  roarrr.. ankhien neeche!
 hammie..
@ moni.. hello daya's buddy...

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