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1 .LIFE AS WE KNOW IT

Jeeman virman virika

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3200035

2.tumharay bina jana kahan

Virman ff

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3595314

3.dil nay phir yad kiya

Virman ff

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3657848

5. it's a bliss

Virman os

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3667140

 

*important note : if I am going to continue any of the above incomplete works ill update from this id thankyou !

 

 

 

"Jeeman/ virika/ virman "

 

"PROLOGUE"

 

 

 

Jeevika: rhishekesh !

 

she sighed

 

" yahan pathron main bhi bhagwan bastay hain. dil ko aek aisa sakoon milta hai jo mera mana hai kay is dunia mai aur kahin nahi milta ."

 

jeevika smiled

"  waisay maine dunia dekhi hi kahan hai? Meri dunia toh yahan ganga ki pavaan lehroon mai basti hai. Jaisay ganga apni lehron ko sath laykay chalti hai aur jitna saaf ganga ka apni lehro say rishta hai, waisay hi mai apni manvi kay sath chalti hoon, aur aisa hi rishta mera aur manvi ka hai."

 

Jeeviika closed her eyes remembering

 

Manvi and her dancing together near the ghat throwing water at eachother smiling whole heartedly

 

 

"Sabki Ragon Mein Lahun Bahein Hain
Lahun Bahien Hain..
Apni Raagon Mein

 Ganga Maiyya.. "

 

Jeevika opened her eyes while a tear made its way through her eyes , flashbacks of their happy times together kept on coming infront of her eyes, like when they use to go boating, play with water, drink bottles of soda from the stall, running around like little kids . manvi selecting churian for jeevika and jeevika selecting churian for manvi and both of them flauting the churiyan to eachother . jeevika wiped her tear as a fresh tear flow down from her eyes she closed her eyes pressing her eyelids to let out the pain as it was going to work.

 

 

" Manvi ab uskay baray main kia kahu? Behen hai meri khoon ka rishta hai humara."

Jeevika said while crying

 

" Meri ankhon ka tara, mere jeenay ka sahara, meri dunia usi say shuruh hoti hai aur usi pay khatam hoti hai. Woh jahan mai wahan, aek pal kay liye saans laina bhool sakti hoon par apni mannu ko bholna meray liye mumkin nahi . wo meray chehray ki muskurahat hai , uska dukh mujhay andar say tor daita hai. Wo hasti rehti hai aur meri dunia chalti rehti hai , wo hai toh mai hoon,"

 

Jeevika with pride

 

" mannu meri ragon main dorta hua khoon hai."

There was proudness in her voice

" Iss dunia main sabsay zada pyar mai apni mannu say karti hoon. Mera har rishta usi say shuruh hota hai , aur usi pay khatam hota hai, meray liye meri behen mera sab kuch hai."

Jeevika looked at the sky

 

 

" Sabh kuch ! mera garoor, mera ghamand, meri parchai, meri bachi, mera khoon meri behen"

 

Jeevika joined her both hands infront of ganga maiya

" ganga maiya apsay bas itna hi mangti hoon kay meri behen ko mujhsay kabhi juda mat honay daina, agar wo mujhsay dur hogai toh mai khud say dur hojaon. Kahin kho jaon gi aur shaid apnay apko kabhi dhoondh bhi na paon."

Jeevika put her hand on her heart

"mujhay takat daina kay mai apni behen ko is dunia say bacha pao, uska khyal rakh pao, uski hifazat karpaon"

 

 

FLASHBACKS

 

Jeevika came with a milk glass and put it on manvi's table where she was studying , manvi looked at the glass and

 

Manvi: ewuuu yuckh mai nahi peenay wali isko.

 

Jeevika smiled

 

Jeevika: manno mujhy teri koi bhi nautanki nahin dekhni samjhi ? chup chap peelay kabsay jag rai hai tu , teri sehat pay asar paray ga aur phir tu bemmar hogai toh?

 

Manvi pouted

 

Manvi: itna khyal hai apko mera? Toh yeh bhi toh pata hona chai na kay yeh dhoodh dekh kay mujhay ulti ati hai

 

Jeevika: hogai shuruh teri nautanki?

 

Jeevika bend towards manvi and held her chin

 

Jeevika: tu jitna khud ko nahi janti na utna mai tujhay janti hoon. Isliye

 

She showed mannu a chocolate jar

 

Jeevika: iss dhoodh mai hot chocolate mila kay

 

Manvi excitingly stood up and hugged jeevika

Manvi: dii you are the best ap mujhy itni achay say kaisay samjh jati ho?

 

Jeevika: behen hoon teri

 

Jeevika and manvi: khoon ka rishta a humara

 

And both of them hugged eachother

 

FLASHBACK

 

 

Manvi: ouch dii bohat dard horaha hai kuch karo na.

 

Jeevika whose eyes were filled up

 

Jeevika: bohat zada dard horaha hai?

 

Manvi cryingly nodded.

 

Jeevika: kitni baar tujhay kaha hai mannu dehan say chala kar, agay dekh kay chala kar par nahin tu meri sunti kahan hai? mai toh bas lecture daiti hoon meri baat ka kia matlab ab dekh lay lag gain a chot? Kitna dard horaha hai tujhay .

 

Manvi looks at jeevika and out of no where hugs her tightly

 

Manvi: mujhse zada toh dard apko ho raha hai

 

Jeevika stroked manvi's hairs and kissed her head.

 

Jeevika: bachi hai tu meri, chot tujhay lagti hai takleef mujhay hoti hai.

 

Jeevika held manvi's hand and kissed on the spot where manvi was hurt

 

Manvi: chala gaya .

 

Jeevika: kiya?

 

Manvi: dard ! ap meray har dard ki dawa ho dii. I love you dii

 

Jeevika smiled : I love you to mannuuu

 

 

 

 

 

FLASHBACK

 

Dabbu was running and manvi was running after him

 

Manvi: ruk tujhay btati hoon dabbay, beeji ko meri shikayat karta hai ? aek dum larki hai tu. Humari teesri behen kahin ki

 

Jeevika from kitchen : mannuuu zada shaitani mat kar. Bhaag mat zada gir jaye gi

 

Jeevika was making manvi's favourite allo ka paratha

 

Manvi from behind : bhooo

 

Jeevika looked back putting her hands on her waist

 

Manvi: kiya dii? Ap zara nahi dari nahi? Jaan ni nikli apki? Mujhy toh koi darata toh meri jaan toh nikal hi

 

Jeevika covered manvi's mouth : aj keh dia aj kay baad mat kehna samjhi. Aisay kaisay jaan nikal jaye gi? Meri jaan toh tujhmai basti hai aur uski hifazat karna teri zimaydari hai. Chal chal eb meri rani si mannu jakay beth ja mai bas doo minute mai teray liye naishta lay kay aai.

 Mannu dancingly went out and jeevika amusingly get back to making the parathas

 

 

 

 

 

FLASHBACK

 

Beeji: iss larki ka mai kiya karu har wakt pagalpanti har wakt avara gardi tujhay koi baron ka lehaz hai ya nahin? Bol?

 

Mannu was looking down

 

Beeji: jab dekho kuch uttpatang karti rehti hai. Eb kuch bolti ku nahin hai? Bol warna maro tujhay aek

 

Beeji said raising her hand which was immediately held by jeevika , jeevka came and stood nfront of mannu who held jeevika by her shoulders

 

Jeevika: beeji agar meri kici bhi baat ka bura lagay toh mujhay maaf kardi jaga par apni behen pay, apni bachi pay , apni mannu pay hath uthanay ka haq toh maine kici ko nai dia. Apko dantna hai? Marna hai? Kuch bhi kehna hai mujhay keh leejay par ap please mannu ko kuch mat kahiye chahy usnay jo bhi kia ho

 

Before beeji could reply back, jeevika held manvi's arm and went in her room, she left manvi's hand and without saying anything started to clean her cupboard

 

Manvi: dii ... (she called out)

 

Jeevika was still piling up the clothes

 

Manvi: dii please naa...

(manvi pleaded)

 

Manvi: dii apko jo kehna hai keh lo . marna hai beshak marlo par yeh silent treatment na do. Mai sab kuch bardasht karsakti hoon bas apki khamooshi nahi .

 

Jeevika turned around and glared at manvi: mannu jab tu apni dii ko itnay achay say samjhti hai toh tu dunia ko ku nahi samjhti haan ? lakh samjhao par teray demag mai koi baat jati hi nai hai

 

Manvi started to cry and instantly jeevika turned around closing her eyes

 

Jeevika: teray ansoo mujhay kamzor kartay hain. Mannu mujhy bilkul acha nahi lagta jab beeji ya koi bhi tujhay kuch kahay. Aj kay baad dehan rakhna. Chal ab chup hoja

 

Manvi hugged jeevika from the back

 

Manvi: I am sorry meri mama. Meri dii, meri pyari behna gusay mai aek dum angry young women lagti ho

Manvi said in a babish way and then laughed

 

Jeevika get out of manvi's hold and : angry young women aur mai? Btao tujhay?

 

And she stared to tickle manvi: dii please gudgudi naiii.. nahiii naaa... please

 

Both of them laughingly fell on the bed..

 

 

 

 

FLASHBACK

 

It was manvi's annual function. Jeevika was sitting in the audience excited for manvi. Manvi came on stage and jeevika stood up clapping mouthing : all the best mannu

Jeevika joined her hands put them under her neck and smiled praying for mannu

 

Manvi looked at jeevika and closed her eyes , she opened her chit : my topic is (she paused, jeevika nervously looked at manvi) mother

 

Jeevika eyed manvi sadly

 

Manvi : maa wo hai jo hamesha apkay sath rahay, apka khyal rakhay , apki health ki fikar karay , begair bolay apki har baat samjh jaye, jiskay paas apki har problem ka solution ho jo apni magic wand chalaein aur apki sari problems uran chu hojaein, jo hamesha aek angel ki tran apkay sath rahein apko protect karein , kabhi kabhi apko datein , kabhi kabhi apko mar bhi daein par hamesha apko itna pyar karein kay apkay liye pyar ki defination equals to perfection hojaye.. is dunia mai agar koi perfect hai toh woh hai apki maa. Jinkay galay lag kar  apko sabsay zada sakoon ata hai, itni achi neend ati hai kay uthny ka dil hi ni chahta ,maa wo hai jo begair kici faiday kay apko bara karay, jiskay liye apki khushi ki bohat ehmiat ho. Meray liye meri maa meri behen hai.

 

A tear skipped from jeevika's eyes

 

Manvi: na mainay apni maa ko dekha , na dekhna chati hoon. Ku kay meri maa meray paas hai. Mujhay toh lagta hai kay bhagwan ka chehra bhi meri dii jaisa hi hoga. Yeh sach hai kay bhagwan har jaga logo kay saath nahi chal saktay isliye unho nay is dunia mai maa bnai. Meray liye wo maa meri jeevika dii hain. And I am proud to be her daughter

 

With that manvi ran from stage straight in jeevika's arms

 

 

 

 

 

FLASHBACK ENDS

 

 

Jeevika opened her eyes smiling

" meri mannu nay pehli bar maa bhi mujhay hi kaha tha jab wo bohat choti thi. Aek saal kit hi. wo mera hi khoon hai meri hi bachi hai aur hamehsa rahay gi. Is duniya mai manvi ka naam jeevika kay sath aur jeevika ka naam manvi kay sath hi aye ga. Na mujhsay meri behen dur hogi na mai honay du gi. kismat bhagwan har cheez say larlu gi uskayliye. Wo iss dunia mai mere liye aii hai.wo meray jeenay ka sahara hai. Par aj "

Jeevika cried again

 

" Par najanay meri hasti khelti mannu ko kiski nazar laga gai? Jo mera sahara thi aj usay kadam kadam pay meray saharay ki zarorat hai , nahi dekha jata mujhsy nahi dekha jata"

 

She sobbed putting her head on her knees

 

 

   

 

 

 

"Chaudhary navas"

 

 

b.beeji: aray mai kabsay pani mang rai hoon koi toh la doo.

 

Beeji came, and handed b.beeji a glass of water

 

Beeji: ap roz shor machaye begair nahi reh sakti na ? aek tufan kum hai is ghar mai jo ap bhi

 

b.beeji: tu uss chudail ko mujhsay toh mat hi mila

 

Pinki came with a tray of snacks

 

Pinki: aray b.beeji mannu ab pehlay jaisi kahan rahi kici ki nazar hi lag gai jaisay

 

Beeji shooked her head: uski khudki hi lagi hogi

 

Madan : beeji bhool bhi jaye sab kuch

 

Beeji: itna asan nahi hai. Acha hi hua . aj jishalat mai hai wo isi kay kabil hai.

 

Beeji looked at madan

 

Jeevika: beeji

 

(jeevika said from the door in a hurt voice)

 

Jeevika: yeh ap kaisi batein kar rai hain? Ap aisa keh bhi kaisy sakti hn meri mannu kay baray mai? Bachi hai wo

 

Beeji was about to answer back when someone started to knock the store door badly. Jeevika looked at the store and then eyed beeji who turned other side. Jeevika opened her mouth in shock and ran towards the store door opened it, as soon as jeevika opened it manvi scaringly hugged jeevika.

 

Jeevika: mannuuu.. kuch nahi hua .. shh mai agai hoon teri dii gai hai..

 

Jeevika looked at beeji

 

Jeevika: beeji ap aisa kasiay karsakti hain? Apny mannu ko store mai band kardia?

 

Manvi looked at beeji and hid behind jeevika holding her dupatta

 

Beeji: toh kia karti? Iss pagal ko smabhalti

 

Jeevika: mannuu pagal nahi hai...

 

Beeji: yeh kehnay say sachai badal nahi jaye gi jeevika. Isay is ghar ki nai pagal khanay ki zarorat hai.

 

Jeevika: bsss beeji. Agr apko pagal khanay bhejwana hai toh mujhy bhi bhijwa deejay kamzkum wahan mai apni behen kay sath toh reh paon gi, meri mannu kay sath aisa bartao toh nai hoga? Beeji ap samjhti ku nai.

 

Beeji: jeevika tunay iski zimaydari li hai maine nahi . iss pagal kay peechay is ghar ka koi shaks apna wakt barbad nahi karay ga samjhi tu.

 

Jeevika: mannuu pagal nahi hai..

Beeji: aek behen demagi tor pay pagal hai aur dosri behen dheet. Khair jeevika parso larkay walay aein gay chup chap begair kici dramay kay tyar hojana jitni jaldi is ghar say jao gi utna acha hoga.

 

Jeevika smiled through her tears

 

Jeevika: theek hai beeji maine vada kia tha ap jo kahein gi woi hoga par ap meri baat shaid bhool gai mai shadi tab karu gi jab wo log meray sath meri behen ko bhi apnaye gay warna nahi. Yeh mera akhiri faisla hai.  

 

Beeji glared at jeevika and manvi, jeevika held manvi's hand

 

Manvi with a serious face

Manvi: meri doll ki shadi hai .

 

Jeevika with manvi went in her room.

 

 

Beeji: mai bhi dekhti hoon kay kaisay yeh shadi nahi hogi. Is manvi ko mai ab bech mai anay nai du gi .

 




"i miss jeeman "Cry



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Posted: 17 May 2014 at 8:22am | IP Logged
awesome update but what happen manvi how
she become mad and now what beeji will
to get jeevika married update soon and
send pm

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Posted: 17 May 2014 at 9:19am | IP Logged
Grt Concept !!
loved it !
cont soon :)

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Posted: 17 May 2014 at 1:05pm | IP Logged
AWESOME UPDATE DEAR. IT REMINDS ME OF EHHMBH SERIAL ONCE AGAIN WHICH IS MY ALL TIME FAV. SERIAL. LOVED JEEMAN BONDING. FLASHBACK IS REALLY NYC. BUT WHAT HAPPENED TO MANVI. WHY SHE BECOMES MAD. NOW JEEVIKA MARRIAGE PROPOSAL. SO WAITING 4 THE NEXT. UPDATE SOON.

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Posted: 17 May 2014 at 6:33pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by pink1

awesome update but what happen manvi how
she become mad and now what beeji will
to get jeevika married update soon and
send pm


thankyou buddy me ill pm you Smile
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Posted: 17 May 2014 at 6:33pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by millee18

Grt Concept !!
loved it !
cont soon :)

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Posted: 17 May 2014 at 6:34pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sandhYA_123

AWESOME UPDATE DEAR. IT REMINDS ME OF EHHMBH SERIAL ONCE AGAIN WHICH IS MY ALL TIME FAV. SERIAL. LOVED JEEMAN BONDING. FLASHBACK IS REALLY NYC. BUT WHAT HAPPENED TO MANVI. WHY SHE BECOMES MAD. NOW JEEVIKA MARRIAGE PROPOSAL. SO WAITING 4 THE NEXT. UPDATE SOON.

i miss jeeman and the bonding tooCryCry thankyou buddy me ill pm you Smile
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Awesome concept
Totally amazingClap
Loved it Smile
Continue soon..

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