SanDhir SS ..And they fell in love....chapter 6 pg no. 18 - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey...
Well first of all amazing concept...
I've never come across such concept in this forum...
Would love to read it further...
Well update soon...
N well plz pm me ...
Eagerly waiting 4 chapter 1 ,..

Love
Ayesha...
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Posted: 9 years ago
awww.. soo sorry dear.. I definitely consider you my friend.. but yaar you guys are too good that I was so embarrassed to share my stupid work with you .. pls don't be katti.. I will send you PM from now on.. and don't worry about Sanyukta.. hamara hero hai na.. πŸ˜‰ me? Good? 😲 THUMP. *died* 🀣 ha , pm karna varna moi wont spare u! Abhi tak toh sirf writer zoya ko dekha hai , abhi stalker zoya se bhi mil lena! 😈
 
You indeed are one of the very good writers of the forum. Ya, I will surely PM you for next time.. actually this time I just wanted to see the reaction of readers 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: mariya.kamran

Anuradha is one of my favourite writer. The concept is beautiful. I love ACS so much. So a medical related ff would be perfect. Please make Randhir the usual Egoistic MCP... more fun. Continue soon xxx

Thanks Maria.. and yaa Anu is best yaar.. I would love to see her work some day in book form. I hope some publisher have those eyes to see the potential writer in her.
 
well, to see whether Randhir will be egoistic MCP or not, you have to wait and watch.. but one thing for sure that you are in for a bigger surprise. Hope so... 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Thriller123

Hey very well written plz update next part soon and plz pm me k

Thank you. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: federized2210

Ok...where was I????

Sparky wrote her first ever prologue and I'm commenting on 2nd page?????
*Smacks herself for being offline*
*Apologizes vehemently*
 
Sparky,
U mentioned me?? That is so kind of u!!!
I love your comments on my FFs and I know you'll do perfect justice to this story!!! The prologue is very appealing like I already mentioned the other day!!! Med-related stuff is always interesting!! And this is a brand-new concept of SanDhir FF!!!
I'm looking forward to it totally!!!!
Waiting for chapter 1!!
Update soonish and do send out PMs to all your friends. Once my exams end, I'll send PMs to my friends too!! I have 200+ friends u see🀣🀣
Thank u for writing this! The forum needs more SanDhir FFs!!!!
 
Love and respect u loads!!!
Anu❀️

Ahaa my sweetest friend cum little sis Anu πŸ˜ƒis here.. and first of all pls stop apologizing.. because if I start apologizing then the whole forum will be filled with it.. you are just one page late and feeling bad and I am always more 5-6 pages late. 😳
 
Thanks dear for all sorts of appreciating words. Its only your persuasion that I could muster courage to post it.
I will do send PM but don't know if they would interested in it. πŸ˜•πŸ˜Š
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: tareyfan

amazin buddy ...

like seriously u were reluctant abt posting such an amazin piece of work ?? 

aww poor sanyu ... bound to a wheel chair πŸ˜” 

her fathers plight ...

n you should definitely continue ... i  luvd it ..❀️

i m rather curious abt  how will the story shape up ...  i mean how will RD enter her lyf ... n i guess she will make it towards the end .. bt den the main question  is how ... 

i would luv to read her journey from a wheel chair bound to a person standin on her own feet n surely the luv track as well πŸ˜³πŸ˜† 

 so plss update it ASAP ..

n plss pm me the updates ...😳 

PS - wats ur name ?? πŸ˜³

loads of luv
Aishwarya❀️

Hi Ash (I know another Ash on the forum who is also tareyfan but she is tareyforever)
 
Thanks dear for all praise. Randhir is making entry very soon and will help Sanyukta to stand on her feet... how? you will have to wait for that.
 
lots of luv u too
 
Sparky.πŸ˜ƒ
 
 
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Craziness123

Hey...
Well first of all amazing concept...
I've never come across such concept in this forum...
Would love to read it further...
Well update soon...
N well plz pm me ...
Eagerly waiting 4 chapter 1 ,..

Love
Ayesha...

Thank you so much.. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sparkling_gems

Hi Ash (I know another Ash on the forum who is also tareyfan but she is tareyforever)
 
Thanks dear for all praise. Randhir is making entry very soon and will help Sanyukta to stand on her feet... how? you will have to wait for that.
 
lots of luv u too
 
Sparky.πŸ˜ƒ
 
 

hey sparky (hope i can call u dat πŸ˜›) 
yeah i was jst enlighted on the other ash by harika πŸ˜† 
n u deserve it girl ..
waiting for the forthcoming parts ..
update soon 😊 
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Posted: 9 years ago

Chapter 1

Dr. Randhir Singh Shekhawat was going through some official papers in his hotel room at Delhi, enjoying a cup of coffee in his left hand, when receptionist informed him that he had a visitor.  His best buddy, his confidante Dr. Vishal came to see him.  After exchanging the pleasantries, Vishal asked Randhir about the purpose of his visit to Delhi and how long he will be at Delhi?  Randhir told him the about the medical conference he has to attend in Delhi and about some personal errands he needed his attention. Randhir noticed some confusion on his best friend's face.

After a lot of persuasion Vishal told him about his patient, her case history and asked if he can be needful. Dr. Randhir after checking his appointment diary and details of his departure flight agreed to see the patient next morning By now Vishal placed the case file in front of Randhir. He saw the name of the patient on file Sanyukta Agarwal.. Ohh so patient is a girl.. then I am very interested .. infact I would delay my flight if need be,  there was a sly grin on Dr. Randhir Singh Shekhawat's face. Dr. Vishal slapped on his friend's tu nahin sudhrega. You are still as flirt as you were in college days..

Few minutes later, after having a friendly chit chat, reminiscing their college days, the girls in their college etc etc. Vishal left after taking promise from Randhir that tomorrow he will be going to see Sanyukta Agarwal with him.  

As promised next day Dr. Randhir Singh Shekhawat reached at Holy Family Hospital, to see his friend Dr. Vishal Malhotra. After a while, Vishal asked Randhir, did he go through the file last night and on that Randhir nodded affirmatively and asked when can he meet the girl. Vishal fished out his mobile from his pocket and dialled Mr. Agarwal, and explained it to him that his friend who is specialist in field is interested in Sanyukta's case and if he (Mr. Agarwal) is willing, he (Dr. Randhir) would like to do some test on Sanyukta. For Mr. Agarwal, anyone who can even give a slightest hope is equal to God. And it was decided that next day Dr. Vishal Malhotra will take Dr. Randhir to Agarwal Mansion.

Next Day at Agarwal Mansion :

As decided Vishal took Randhir to Agarwal Mansion to see Sanyukta. And something stirred inside him while seeing a girl who should be walking, playing, having fun, is lying listlessly on her bed. He suppressed his desire to go and caress her forehead.

P.S. I tried sending PM to all but pls forgive me, if anyone didn't get it. Pls send me a buddy request if you want a PM. 😊
Edited by sparkling_gems - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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*Unres*
 
Sparky!
Apologies for being late!
But u know the reason already! ExamsπŸ˜†
 
Anyway, I'm glad m commenting  first on a fic written by someone who is very special to me! Yes yes, don't look surprised. M talking about u!!
What?? U think 'm flattering?? *Pouts*
Me no flatters! Me speaks the truth!!!πŸ˜†
Ok, enough of my rant!!!
 
This story...I just have an intuition that it's going to be one of the best plots in this forum!
I love this kinda plots. I mean, have u see the film "Lafangey Parindey"??? Half of the people haven't even seen it and it's one of my favs! Can u draw the parallels I'm indicating??
A disabled girl...a flirtatious guy...aaahhh blisss!!!!🀣
 
Ur RD is different than every other RD I've read so far...which is such a welcome change!πŸ‘
 
"Anyone who could give him slightest hope was like God to him"
^^^This sentence...*Feels*
 
And the last para where RD watches her lying listlessly on the bed...It was so touching..!
Hoping to read the next update soon!
This one was very well penned!!πŸ‘πŸ‘
 
-Love and regards,
Anu❀️
Edited by federized2210 - 9 years ago