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            Heylo Friends...!!! I am not able to believe that I reached second Thread of Jaane Pehchani Si Ajnabi... Thank u so much to all my readers... I am really sorry for not able to note everyone's name here, but I do remember everyone who like and comment... Thank You so much... This thread is possible because of you people... Love You All...Hug

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Thread 1 : http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3696894

Part 17 : Below

Part 18 : http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4019183&TPN=10

Part 19 : http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4019183&TPN=13



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Part 17:

             Asad jumped out of thoughts hearing his phone ring... He opened his red eyes... Those red eyes are witness of his sleepless nights for country and those painful tears for his love... It is Arjun's call...

Asad - helloo...

            After hearing Arjun, Asad disconnected call... He drove from there...

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Delhi: IIA:

Asad - Kya hua Arjun...???

Arjun - Sir jiss gaadi se hum uss Rent a car owner ko laa rahe te, uss gaad ka accident hogaya hai... Everyone is spot dead except Mr. Sharma (Rent A Car Owner)...

Asad - In which hospital he is admitted now...

Arjun - He is under special care in Care hospital...

Asad - Kill him...

Arjun - Sir...

Asad - tu ne sahi suna, kill him...

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Shimla: 4 AM:

            Zoya stood in balcony wrapping shawl around her starring at grey tinge white clouds... Clouds are shining because of stretched moon-light with the moon hidden behind them...

Zoya - Mujhe itna bura feel karne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai... Mujhe farak nahi padta hai... Mujhe Asad mein koi interest nahi hai, agar usse mujh mein koi interest nahi hai toh koi baat nahi... uske jaise ladkon ki line laga sakti hoon...

Zoya (In her mind with broken expression) - Par uss line mein Asad nahi hoga na...

            She sensed tears burning her cheeks... She couldn't believe that she is crying... She touched her cheeks... She found her finger tips wet...

Zoya - Mein ro kyun rahi hoon...??? Mujhe ro ne ki kya zaroorat hai... Mein na Asad ke bare mein sochungi, Na meri Past ke bare mein... Mein bahot kush hoon...

               Best way of getting out of problem is to face it... Running away from it and forming world of lies only complicates problem... Zoya is doing same mistake... She started running from questions...

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Delhi:

         Asad peeped out of his hotel room at the dark sky engulfing moon in it... His state is unexpresseble as his mind is inconsiderate... He has to make his mind stable to find the solution... Solution for his country and solution for his life...

Arjun - Sir, aap teekh toh hai...??

Asad - ha... Ha mein teekh hoon...

Arjun - Sir, koi problem hai...??

             Asad nodded no...

Arjun - Sir, meri papa humesha kehte hai ki jab tak hum dil mein rakhenge, woh boj humein daba degi... Agar humein kisi se share karenge, mann halka hoga...

              There is silence for few seconds...

Arjun - Sir, aap mujhse rank mein bade hai... mein jaanta hoon, its not manners to interfere in personal matters... But I felt you need some help... Sorry sir...

                Arjun turned to leave but stopped hearing Asad's voice...

Asad - Mein isse uljhan mein hoon, jiss se nikalne ka raasta nahi hai...

             Asad narrated his past, complicated present and uncertain future...

Arjun - Aap unhe sach kyun nahi bata dete...???

Asad - nahi bata sakta...

Arjun - Kyun Sir...???

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Flash Back

Shimla:

                 Asad was back to his room after dropping zoya at her place... After coming to Shimla thi sis the first time she went to Zoya's house... In Rainbow mall some goons teased Zoya and Aashi... In that fight Zoya's leg got twisted... Asad dropped Zoya at home... He met Anwar and Zeenat... Anwar knew that Asad is in Shimla but Zeenat was shocked to see him... He dropped him there and came back to Aashi's house... (Friend's try to remember this scene, I wrote it long back) Asad got a call...

Asad - hello...

Caller - Asad, mein Zeenat... Mein tumse mila chahti hoon...

Asad - Abb...???

Zeenat - Ha...

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Place near Zoya's House:

Asad - Asalam walekum...

Zeenat - walekum asalam...

Asad - Aapne bhulaya Aapi...???

Zeenat - Tum yaha kis liye aaye ho, mein nahi jaanti... Par tum Zoya se dur raho...

Asad - Aapi mein yaha ek important kaam ke liye aaya hoon... Woh kaam pura hot hi mein chale jaunga...

Zeenat - Teekhe Asad... Par Zoya ko apni past ke bare mein yaad dilane ki koshish bhi matt karna... iss se uski zindagi ko katra hai...

                     Asad looked confused...

Zeenat - Uski brain mein clot hai... agar woh apni dimaag mein zor dalegi toh brain hamarrage ki chances hai...

Asad - Aap yeh kya keh rahe hai Aapi...???

Zeenat - jo sach mein itni dino se apne aap mein chupake rakhi hoon...

                   Zeenat broke into tears...

Zeenat - yeh baat sirf mein jaanti hoon... Mujhe pata hai Asad, tum jaisa ladka mein Zoya ke liye kahi nahi doondpaungi... Tumhare jitna pyaar usse koi nahi de payega... Tumhe yaad hai, uss haatse ke baad wo tumhare saath bitaya gaya har pal bhulgayi hai aur haatse ko bhi... Agar tum uske saath rahoge, Zoya apne bitaa hua al ko yaad karne ki koshish ki toh...

                    Zeenat stopped there... She took deep breath...

Zeenat - mein ne iss liya tumhe usse dur rakha ha Asad... Mujhe tumse koi problem nahi hai... Agar tum logh saath rahoge toh mujhse zyada koi kush nahi hoga, par mein Zoya ko katre mein nahi daal sakti...

                    Asad paniced his words... He tried to speak... He took deep breath...

Asad - Aapne yeh baat kisi ko bataya kyun nahi...???

Zeenat - mein sach jaan kar har pal mar raha hoon... Issa sach ko mein kisi ko bataoon kaise... Mein saare shikayat lene ke liye taiyaar hoon... par itna bada sach kaise batau...

                 Asad with a stone hert...

Asad - I promise you Aapi, Zoya ko kuch nahi hoga... Mein kabhi bhi usse Past yaad karne ki koshish nahi karunga...

Flash Back Ends

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            Arjun placed hand on his shoulders...

Arjun - Sir mein aapke dard ko pehchanta nahi hoon par samajh sakta hoon...

               Asad was silent... He is feeling light now... He cannot share this truth with anyone... Arjun is the only person he could... This really helped him...

Asad - Thank u Arjun...

Arjun - Sir aap apne kismat se lad rahe hai sir... Aap hero hai... Kismat aapke saath dega... Sab kuch teekh hojayega...

                 Asad just smiled...

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Delhi:

News Paper:

                       Death Captures IIA's' - Yesterday night at 11:00 three IIA agents lost there life in a road accident. Mr. Sharma, Rent - A - Car owner in IIA car was found spot dead.

         Vikranth Singh closed Paper and smiled sipping his coffee...

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Next Day: Shimla:

Zoya - Aapi, break fast...!!!

           Zoya came down jumping...

Zoya - Kya kar rahe ho sabb...???

            She came to living room... They all looked wide and surprised eyes at her... She grabbed bitter guard chips from the bowl and dumped herself in the sofa... They all together started watching some random movie in T.V... Zoya started laughing out loud watching the scene... She sensed gazes and turned her eyes to them...

Zoya - Kya hua...???

Humeira - Aapko kya hua Baji...??

Zoya - kya hua..??? Mein toh normal hoon...

Humeira - Normal nahi, Abnormal behave kar rahe hai... Aapko bitter aurd chips pasand nahi... Mein khati hoon toh aap bahot Gandhi expression banate hai, aur aap kud aaj wahi chips kha rahe hai...

                  Zoya looked at the chips...

Humeira - Aapko yeh movie bilkul pasand nahi hai... Aaj aap iss pe itna hass rahe hai... Bilkul Abnormal behave kar rahe hai...

                   Zoya looked at T.V... Whenever, person tries to suppress feelings, his behavior becomes awkward and abnormal... Whenever a person tries to hide tears, it comes out in unwanted big laughter...

Zoya - Mei... mein normal hoon...

               Zoya got up and left from there...

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Delhi:

Arjun - Sir, humein uss car se Shimla ke tickets aur Reflex college ki magazine mila... Uss ki index mein College Fest ko round up kiya gaya hai...

Asad - Shimla... Reflex college... College Fest... Arjun humein jald se jald Shimla jaana hai... We will start in next few hours...                     

Arjun - Yes sir...

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I am first !!Party

Why did zeenat said like that to Asad ?

Is that truth or lie ...

Asad coming back to Shimla

Thank god

He came back !!



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lovely updt dear
I think whatever Zeenat told Asad was a lie 2 keep him away from Zoya
just like d way she lied 2 Zoya
& this Arjun guy i m having doubts on him also
cuz person who is closest 2 u sometimes stabs on ur back
he can use Asad's past against him
Asad is coming back 2 shimla thank god 4 that
I want 2 see Asya 2gather even if they r fighting
continue soon
will wait 4 nxt part

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