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CID Written Update: May 3rd: Khatarnak Keeda

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Sorry for the late Wu.😳

Scene1-Somebody's house

Some guy comes in and carefully locks the door and watches TV(is that CID?).Some flashy little creepy crawly moves all around the room and (or Aahat).The insect is ready to stike but he moves out of the chair suddenly. It again follows him to the work desk (That bichaara insect has such blur vision).It navigates and goes inside the cup and when he takes it to drink, releases a missile type micro stuff.(How long did they have to drag this?) and the guy collapses and the insect comes out of the window.

Scene 2-  Somebody else's house

A certain wife is delighted by the flow of air by AC and the husband says it was a nice gift from their CEO Pramod and was necessary. The wife says some soapy and stupid thing like am I not necessary  and Ghanshyamji says otherwise, why would have married a second time?They sleep cause its late and  the insect is lurking on a bed lamp.

Scene 3-The First house

CID is investigating and the victims daughter is sobbing and says that it sounded like someone was strangling him and he had problems breathing. ACP consoles her and wonders how the muder happened as the door was closed and there are no signs of a break in.Kevin adds to the general wisdom saying that since the flat is in the 13th floor,its slightly impossible somebody could have climbed in. Purvi says it might be a medical allergy and her daughter agrees and says he was a BP patient.Mayur  finds I think a tiny piece.

Scene 4-Ghanshyaam's house.

That guy is dead and Dr.Salunkhe says that there is a powder kind of substance on his body.On investigation in the makeshift lab, Dr. finds it Rycin which is a very dangerous poison which within minutes chokes and causes internal bleeding.

Scene 5-The first house

Mayur shows it to ACP sir who says its a camera lens .

Scene 6-The second house

Freddy asks if any windows are open and the wife says it is cause AC is on.Daya says when everything is closed and only he was poisoned and Daya accuses the wife.

Scene 7-Lab

Dr.Salunkhe inject a huge injection which is the antidote for Rycin and Nikhil the knight carries Mayur to another room.

Scene 8-Bureau

The first guy name is Chandra.They find out that both of them work for G Gizmo electronic store.Purvi informs that a woman named Manju was murdered in Kalyan while she was alone.

Scene 9-Lab

Tarika says it is a micropin camera with no ACT129098 (Im so happy for them :')).They find traces of Rysin on the lens and Nikhil says they should find how all this happened. He finds out that two companies makes such cameras ZBright in Noida and Supervision in Bangalore.Apparently the Bangalore company is closed from a month.The sales manager says he will fax them the details.

Scene 10-G Gizmo Store

Abhijeet and others search for Rycin in the store and all the three are retired employees and the Manager is deeply distressed and prays for the soul. Freddy says there are no traces of Rycin.One girl says that these people has come the previous day to redeem them and other than these two more people Ashish , Gautam and Pramod's lives are at stake.

Scene 11-Pramod's house               

(Save me from KTG). Pramod is dead and ACP sir interrogates the servant who says only those two stay at home and he is working from five six years. Kevin says he might have killed the other two and then killed himself .They find the new cooler and decide to check the packaging.

Scene 12-Car

Daya sir reports to ACP sir that they are going to Gautam's son's anniversary party and Purvi and Dushyant are worried that Rycin might put many lives at stake and Daya says they'll protect them.

Scene 13-Ashish's house

Abhijeet and others go to Ashish's house and he fails to open the door and Abhijeet is almost about to break the door, when Ashish opens.He tells him that those four have been murdered.Shreya asks if he bought anything and he would have bought a LED TV.They check the box traces for Rycin.(oh Cool we can see all the parts of a TV). Abhijeet wonders how Rycin reached them. Sachin and Nikhil arrives on the scene and informs that Ashish had bought 1o cameras and he vehemently denys.Sachin shows the receipt for the consignment.They search for the receipt.

Scene 14-Party

They cut the cake and meanwhile their son follows his slipped ball and searches and meanwhile sights the insects and follows it.

In the car, they are worried if they did open their voucher's gifts .

Gautam ji's bahu searches for her son and simultaneously, CID team arrives.

Rahu(The son) is trying to swat the insect and his mom screams and is found dead by the CID team and they find traces of Rycin near the nose and they find the insects plastic body.

Scene 15-Ashish's house.

Shreya , Nikhil and Sachin don't find the cameras but Pankaj finds traces of Rycin.Abhijeet and Sachin question Ashish who still claims innocence.Nikhil asks if they have Abhijeet sir's permission to revive Ashish's memory and Abhijeet denies and says they'll take him to the bureau.

Scene 16- Bureau

Ashish still claims innocence and says somebody has trapped him.ACP says that the he might be not lying and the evidences are too clearly pointing to him for a man of that intelligence.Purvi asks how will they reach to him and ACP sir says from the courier delivery boy delivered the cameras.

Scene 17- Courier Company.

A guy finds the Delivery number and has been delivered by a certain Piyush.Piyush identifies Ashish as the man who received the consignment and Ashish ji protests further.Abhijeet asks him to get the signed slip.He doesn't turn up for a long time and turns out he has run away(Sorry , this was the closest smiley in expression 😆).They all chase him and he is ultimately caught.He says he is innocent and he was scared. He mentions the name of the person to whom he delivered the consignment.

Scene 18- An Electronic workshop

They trace down to the person who happens to be worker at G Gizmo store and informed CID about the vouchers.When they come in they find her missing.They seach for her but in vain and then she finally reappears.She says that she did it for revenge against those people who stifled other's rights.She says that they killed her dad who was an electronics scientist and stole all his work for machines to work independently and intelligently.and Ashish stole the research paper and designs and registered under his name and put it on washing machines.She says all of them were involved and put him out of work and he went into depression.She says she forged Pramods signature in the vouchers, sent it to these people and she inserted those bugs in the delivery boxes. She says that she will never surrender. And hundreds of glowing bugs emerge and Abhijeet asks them to see if theres a password and Nikhil find none. He covers them with his Hankie and puts it in a jar.Shreya and she have WWE style fight.http://www.sherv.net/cm/emoticons/boxing/boxing-fight-smiley-emoticon.gif" />Abhijeet says that she used her brain for wrong reasons and will be put to jail now.


Episode Verdict: Good story  except they could have dragged it a little lesser and avoided some silly  things.A must watch for some fans😉 and hence have mentioned their names. Maybe they can stop oscillating the scenes within a few minutes tough to follow story and annoying to write WU .And maybe they can give dialogues to those new cops or let them retire and introduce the characters names in first few minutes😆

Edited by nsapo - 9 years ago


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