| Mirror Images | Drabble Series ~ Last Drabble + Note - Pg56 (24/05) - Page 4

Since I cannot write even a comment that is just 200 words, the fact you can use 150 of them and make me stare at the screen for about five minutes imagining the characters in this poignant moment, feeling these painful, emotive things shows what a talent you are. Its barely there, this dabble, less than a paragraph and yet when you use the words "companion piece: you are right. They both feel these things, and sometimes you dont have to be wordy to get that across. Its like they are two parts of one small, perfect moment when they both have exactly the same emotion, only flip-flopped to each other. Beautiful, and I hope you will consider writing more of these mirror pieces. Evocative! Edited by napstermonster - 9 years ago

Omg u're a fantastic writer.
But i'm a bit greedy - so can we have more than 100 - 150 words please :D

Originally posted by: radhikalaya

Lovely, lovely. Write more, write more. No pressure 😆

Originally posted by: napstermonster

Since I cannot write even a comment that is just 200 words, the fact you can use 150 of them and make me stare at the screen for about five minutes imagining the characters in this poignant moment, feeling these painful, emotive things shows what a talent you are. Its barely there, this dabble, less than a paragraph and yet when you use the words "companion piece: you are right. They both feel these things, and sometimes you dont have to be wordy to get that across. Its like they are two parts of one small, perfect moment when they both have exactly the same emotion, only flip-flopped to each other. Beautiful, and I hope you will consider writing more of these mirror pieces. Evocative!

Originally posted by: MissAsian

Omg u're a fantastic writer.
But i'm a bit greedy - so can we have more than 100 - 150 words please :D

This was so bhootiful
I loved it
but its not fair how you guys written such awesome pieces and then the lenght is short ... sigh
i guess something is better than nothing

As a writer it is very hard to encompass so many emotions regardless of the word count, but it is extremely hard to evoke an emotion from your readers in only 200 words. Flawless, this is flawless

i just read both , u write so well , say so much in so little .

Originally posted by: XSilentPrayersX

This was so bhootiful
I loved it
but its not fair how you guys written such awesome pieces and then the lenght is short ... sigh
i guess something is better than nothing

Originally posted by: curledup

As a writer it is very hard to encompass so many emotions regardless of the word count, but it is extremely hard to evoke an emotion from your readers in only 200 words. Flawless, this is flawless