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Posted: 03 May 2014 at 4:08am | IP Logged
Hello Friends,

I Have An Interest In Couplets (That Became A Hobby When I Came Here, As I Met Some Of The Genius'), And Here Are Some Of Them, If Anyone Wants To Use It In Their Siggies...(You Can Post Your Creations Too If You Want To Share Them.)

Jeevan Bhar Thi Jo Bankar Raghukulvadhu Jaanaki Maithili |
"Mai Hoon SEETA" Kehkar Voh Aaj Bhoogarbh Mein Chali ||

Raghukulvadhu Pativrata Jaanaki Maithili |
'Seeta' Naam Ka Pramaan Aaj Hai Dene Chali ||

Seeta : Agle Janam Ki Man Mein Thane |
            Chali Main Raadha Bankar Aane ||


Arun Charan Ki Raj Kalyaani |
Shyaamal Varan Chitra Suhaani ||

Raadheraani Shyaam-baam-sohini |
Govind-sujaan Te Man-mohini ||

Shyaam Ki Mahima Aparampaar |
Jaise Ho Raadha Ki Prem-phukaar||

Raadhikapati Shri Ghanshyaam |
Vaidehi Ke Swaami Raam ||

Kaaragrah Mein Devaki, Krishn Yashodalaal |
Bhagya Khele Khel Anek, Ye Ko Naya Chaal ||

Vedaanta-Swaroopi Seeta |
Shri Hari-raam Ki Man-meeta ||

Seeta Ka Man Kaagaj Kora |
Vaalmiki Sang Naata Joda||

Pheenke Laage Saare Vaibhav |
Uma-Shiv Jab Kare Ho Taandav ||

Krishn-premika Krishn-jaaya |
Karika-swaroopi Shri Mahamaaya ||

Dikhe Sabko Yeh Bhola Baalak |
Par Hai Natkhat Vishwa Ka Paalak ||

Jeevan Ki Dor Bandhi Gayo Shyaam Se |
Kya Jeevan Kya Mrityu Ab Toh Keval Saanwal Naam Se ||

(Draupadi) Peeda Paane Hetu Dhari Thi Bhaarati Ne Yeh Deh |
                     Atah Devon Ne Diya Krishnaa Ko Krishn Ka Prem Aur Neh ||

Bansari Ki Dhun Mero Man Har Leenho |
Naval Kishore Chhavi Man Daari Deenho ||

Anand Se Bhar Diyo Man Nand Ke |
Chhidi Murali BAhi Pavan Mand Ke ||

Maata Teen Phooli Na Sammayo |
Saumitra-Maithili-Raghuvar Ghar Aayo ||

Raam-Siya Bhi Bhagya Se Haare |
Vyarth Hua Shakti Sukh Saare ||

A Manipulation LOL :-

Tujhe Dekha Toh Yeh Jaana Sanam |
Cuteness Hota Hai Kya Jaaneman ||

(I'll Be Updating This Everytime I Create Something New Smile)



Edited by Radhikerani - 30 May 2014 at 1:51am

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Originally posted by ro78

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Do You Want A Translation ?

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Very poetic! So Sita became Radha? What happened to Rukmini?
And I didn't understand the last part. When did Shiva Parvati come into the picture?
And so the long ones are called Dohas is it? What are the short ones called?

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Posted: 05 May 2014 at 4:55am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Surya_krsnbhakt

Very poetic! So Sita became Radha?
^^I Mentioned Na, These Are All My Own Creations...And, If Raam Became Kanha (And Raam Had Vowed To Be Loyal To Seeta Only), Then Why Can't Seeta Be Raadha ?Confused
 What happened to Rukmini?
^^As Far As I Know Rukmani, Jaamvanti, Satyabhama And All The 16108 Wives Of Krishna, In One Way Or The Other, Were Radha's Extensions Only...Embarrassed And Check, I've Added One About Rukmani In The First Post. (By Telepathy I SupposeLOL ??)
And I didn't understand the last part. When did Shiva Parvati come into the picture?
^^Actually Every Two Line Poem That Are Listed Above Are Each A Separate Doha, And Right Now, I'm Listing All That I Have Wrote Since The Time I Started Creating...And I Have Listed Them Randomly.
And so the long ones are called Dohas is it? What are the short ones called?
^^Actually, All Kinds Of Couplets Are Called Dohas...Smile





Edited by Radhikerani - 05 May 2014 at 6:21am

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These are all so beautiful, Proteeti! I didn't know you were such a poet! I love all the SitaRaam and RadheShyaam parallels! I so want to make something on them right now (crediting you, of course)

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Originally posted by AishuHiBawari

These are all so beautiful, Proteeti! I didn't know you were such a poet! I love all the SitaRaam and RadheShyaam parallels! I so want to make something on them right now (crediting you, of course)


Thank You So Much Di !!!! And There's No Need To Credit Me As The Biggest Credit To Me Will Be A Incomparable Sig From You Or Anyone Else Who Uses Them...
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OMG WOW ShockedClapClapClapClapClap You're such a chhupa rustom yaar, these are beyond beautiful!!! Each and every word is golden, worthy of preserving not only in sigs but in mythos themselves... when Magadh Productions makes its first mytho we won't have to look far for our lyricist ;) Would love to see some longer poems by you also!

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Originally posted by lola610

OMG WOW ShockedClapClapClapClapClap You're such a chhupa rustom yaar, these are beyond beautiful!!! Each and every word is golden, worthy of preserving not only in sigs but in mythos themselves... when Magadh Productions makes its first mytho we won't have to look far for our lyricist ;) Would love to see some longer poems by you also!


Thanks Di !!! You Too Are A Good Poet, I Have Stole Many Couplets From You People Too !!! BTW, hat Is Your New Mytho's Story ?? I'd Like To Start My Work ! Wink

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