Hello GDπ
The last part awesome hai π
I was feeling bad for daya na he was in bad mental state naππ even feeling bad for abhijeet kitna bi naraz ho but he too can't see his half soul like this, in this condition π
I like doc raheel's character, his plan was too good ππΌ
Yar wo scene where daya hugs abhi and crying that call his abhi back was so sweet and I really feel for thatπ³
Hey wo when he daya tell him to stay and left after his abhi came back, yaad aya? Han han wohi wala GD uff kitni jaldi bhool jati hoπ yar wahan jab daya lied on the bed and abhi in front of him said hey bagwan and then worried but daya just smiled and drifted to sleep, I feel that it ended now from where it started, hmmm samaj aya? Nai na, pata tha but mje samjana nai ata na yar I feel k jab he slept after the suicidal attempt in his home and asked abhi not to leave him bas wahin wale scene pe pir start hoa and he is back to normal, may be its just my view and I connected this part to that one of ur storyπ€ sorry yar kuch zada dimag chalane ki koshish kr rahi hoon bs yeh mera hi point of view ya imagination hai plz don't mind and sorry π³
Han toh woh playing scene was just awesome me too love to play these games in kids gaming zoneπ and they laughing after that wow
How it ended was awesome, abhi, daya and doc too good ππΌ
And after that 'pakka' love it β€οΈ
'One step' is a beautiful and superb story by u and u r rite dear taking steps silently sometimes creates big trouble for u, we must share to atleast someone close to us may be pir koi problem hi na ho π³
And thnx for the info at the end, really nice of u and helpful for usπ
Lovely story it was, enjoyed it alot πβοΈπ
Edited by Veena.. - 9 years ago