BROTHERS...! ( Parrot Story for RIYA HBD Gift @ PG 137)!!! - Page 5

Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by binod.abhijeet


@dada i have completed it half and will comment after completing reading.

its Ok baccha...😊
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by start1234


thank you mujhe bohot acha laga k aap ko dp pasand aayaπŸ˜ƒ


hay hee itna Pyara DP...😳😳
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by kkkloveu


What is this dada, you not opening your new PH? WHy?😲
Dada pinched with something very deeply which cannot be healed by these pyaare pyaare bache who will always be behind her to learn and to support, i suppose this is the reason dada, It better be not..😈 (yes a dhamki)
Kya dada i know it's really hurting sometimes but what can be done if silent readers does not have access to review, haina..
Even i was a silent reader dada and you know it well that your PH and your stories brought me out of that shell...when that be done by others they will surely try na dada, abh hum sabh itne bhi dheet nahi..πŸ˜†
Agar PH nahi hoga toh how will i access your other stories...😲, chalo dada i will not say anything more as it's completely your point and your wish, what can i say (even after saying so many wordsπŸ˜›)


dekho Beta, hr baar ye kehna kay Review diya karein... acha nahi lagta na... its ffeeling like aap Bheek Maang rahy ho... πŸ˜­πŸ˜­
thatswhy I m Not Interested...🀒🀒

Now regarding the story..
I like the starting...
I always loves the way how you smoothly entered your reader in the story with keeping them hooked to it for all the time...πŸ‘

thank You...😳😳

 but somehow this time dada i feel there is very big difference in our point of views so i will not comment anything but i can just wish that it doesn't turn out into a YSPT...warna toh..😈 ahm ahm..

if U give Me that Difference of Views, its better for Me to Understand Ur point...😊😊
ye YSPT kya hota hay...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

I will be waiting for next part this time..😊
Take care dada and be always happy..
Why fear when Riya is here..πŸ˜†, bas dialogue maar rahi thi..
arre haan waise dada ek baat toh reh hi gayi, daya sir kisski gadi pe gire the, usski gadi ka insurance toh tha na...Acp sir ki toh nahi thi..πŸ˜†

Nice Dialogue...πŸ˜†
Nahi gari Uninsured thi...πŸ˜‰
Parrot ki thi na jabhi Bhai ka Wazan Bardasht kr gayii...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Thank You so much...😳😳
Posted: 9 years ago





Here Doctor Session was completed and DAYA at the end comes out from that Darkness; He feels really Shock that He was in RAJEEV car, RAJEEV look at Him, smile and say...

RAJEEV (smile): kr li Neend poori... (DAYA embarrass) (RAJEEV again) kaha tha Apna bhi Khayal rakkho, magar Tum... saara waqt ABHIJEET kay pass bethy ho gay na...

DAYA started to looking Outside and after sometime they reached at Residence and DAYA after giving Thanks to RAJEEV went inside while RAJEEV outside...

Next Morning came; DAYA freed after giving Breakfast and Medicine to ABHIJEET and after giving Him so many Instructions, leave the Residence and reached Bureau...

Here He saw from glasss wall of ACP Sir cabin that ABHIJEET already at ACP cabin while its looking that ACP Scolding Him; a Relaxing Smile present on His lips while FREDDIE after got His arrival at Bureau Main hall gave Him ACP Sir message to move inside the cabin... He went and hear...

ACP: Apnay Gussay pr Control karna seekho ABHIJEET; hr kisi ko Mujrim ki tarah Treat kartay ho; jis tarah ki harkat Tum nay DAYA aur sub kay saamny ABHIJEET kay sath ki hay; hona tou ye chahyey kay Main Tumhein isi waqt Suspend kr dun...

DAYA (who was Happy hearing all that scold which He started after DAYA parked His Vehicle at Parking as VIVEK was at Monitor room, undelibrately say): Nahi...

 ACP and ABHIJEET turned back, DAYA entered with Permission and feeling Both Stare so clear...

DAYA: Nahi Sir, bus aap nay Daant diya.. kafi hay... wesay bhi ABHI Buht Behtar hay ab...

ACP: hmm, Theek hay DAYA (to ABHIJEET) aainda Mujhy Tumhari koi Shikayet Nahi milni chahyey...

ABHIJEET quietly moved out; DAYA felt Bad as He is not that kind of a Person but He was Happy that atleast ACP Sir giving Importance to that Issue... ACP after looking at DAYA and His Stare, added...

ACP: DAYA, ab ABHIJEET ki Tabiyet kesi hay..? kub say Wo Bureau aa payey ga...??

DAYA: Sir, DR nay kaha hay kay bus thoray aaram ki zarurat hay, baaqi kal say Wo Bureau join kr lay ga...

ACP (sat with): haan, Kal HQ say kuch Orders aayey hain; Usy shayed Kal Shaam he ek Undercover Mission pr nikalna hoga...

ACP thought that it's a Good Idea to make a Move where DAYA comes close to ABHIJEET and there would be a Space between His and that Imaginary ABHIJEET came; it only Possible if ACP Sir trying Vanishing that Imaginary ABHIJEET from the Scene so He made that Plan when DAYA stare at ABHIJEET when He was leaving the Cabin few seconds earlier... DAYA look at Him in Shock and say...

DAYA (tense): pr Sir, Us ki halat...

ACP (cutting strongly): DAYA wo aik CID Officer hay... ye Baat Mut bholo Tum... (DAYA headdown, ACP added) khair Kal Wo aa jayey ga tou baat kr lein gay... ab Tum jao...

DAYA left the cabin and after that moved with FREDDIE and VIVEK for some Investigation purpose whereas ACP discussed that Plan to ABHIJEET who was little Disagree with...

ABHIJEET: Sir, Humein DR RAHEEL say discuss kr lena chahyey...

ACP: Unhun nay kaha tha na kay Tumhary aur DAYA kay beech Relation Achy banany hain; Us kay baad hee kuch ho saky ga tou ABHIJEET ye ek acha idea hay; Us kay ander Tumharay liyey Jagah hay haan usy Khas mein kesay badalna hay, bus yehi karna hay...

ABHIJEET quietly moved either Not completely Agree but there was a Spark He felt in that Plan; DAYA came back with Team and the Rest of day was moving like Usual although DAYA so many times talk to ABHIJEET on landline which was not entertained as expected so trying on Cell either He cant get that when He called on ABHIJEET cell number; automatically ABHIJEET Cell ringed and after picking it, its really Difficult for Him to play the Character of that Injured Imaginary ABHIJEET after hiding from DAYA eyes...

Next day, DAYA and ABHI moving and when reaching to Bureau Parking; ABHIJEET just getout from His Jeep; DAYA supports ABHI and when moved stopped in front of ABHIJEET who was little Confuse while seeing DAYA in a Pose of Supporting Some, He got that its Imaginary ABHIJEET but with downhead, so why He was here; Before He asked... DAYA irritative tone appear and focus would be His Left side where that Imaginary ABHIJEET stand with DAYA support...

DAYA (irritate): ab chalein...

After a Second He moved and this time He was little far from that Imaginary figure and murmuring in Anger...

DAYA (murmur): Shakal dekhi thi Us ki; Bewakoofun ki tarah Munh kholy khara tha... ye tak tou hua nahi kay Tum say Sorry kr leta... Tum ko hee Bhashan denay ka bara Shauq tha.. (looking at watch) bekaar kay 2 minute Waste kr diyey...

A Big Laugh coming out from ABHIJEET throat; RAJAT who was just entering moved towards Him and ask in Confusion...

RAJAT: Sir, aap yahan aur Akelay kharay Hanse...

ABHIJEET (walking inside with): abhi Sahab apnay ABHI ko lay kr Meray saamny kharay ho gayey, Main samjh hee Nahi paaya kay wo yun kyun khara hay Meray samny (smile) wo tou abhi Un ki Barbarahat say malum hua kay un ka Pyara ABHI Mujhy Bhashan day raha tha aur main Bewakoofun ki tarah Munh khoolay sun raha tha... (naughty eyes) che che che... Becharay ka Bhashan waste karwa diya...

Both moved inside with smile where DAYA sat on His Desk while at the Chair beside Him obviously His Imaginary ABHIJEET sitting; ABHIJEET approached and say in Apology tone...

ABHIJEET: I m sorry ABHIJEET (its really a New experience for Him to Talking to an Empty Chair, so many Movies scene flashing around His mind) (He added) Yaqeenun Aap ko Buht Chout Pohanchi hogi... Main Buht Maafi managta hun... aainda aisa nahi hoga... (after a minute as He assuming after seeing DAYA face expression where Happiness visible cleary that Invisible ABHIJEET must Replied like KOI BAAT NAHI, HO JATA HY, ITS OK kinda stuff so adds to finish the conversation as He hears some steps from Corridor mean Officers coming) Thank You so much, so Nice of U (focus to DAYA) and U too...

DAYA nodded His head like a Proud Prince which gives a Big Smile over ABHIJEET lips who controlled it and heard His Bear Happiness sharing with Invisible ABHIJEET as...

DAYA (to Invisible ABHIJEET): dekha, ACP Sir ki Dant say kesa Bheega Billa ban gaya hay (started Laughing) Bheega Billa... hahahah...

ABHIJEET really Misses these Naughty Lines, Innocent laughs, Sweet Smiles of His Beary Bhai which always Refreshes Him and gives Him a New Energy to Deal the Difficult Situation Daily...

Its Evening when ACP Sir execute His Plan by calling Invisible ABHIJEET inside through DAYA and after sometime order Him to Leave...

ABHIJEET really Appreaciate His Head as He was doing all with Great Smoothness; He knew its really Difficult to Portray the Conversation experiencing Alone but showing it as Someone also joined it...

As when ACP Sir tell that Invisible ABHIJEET to now Leave the Cabin, understand ABHIJEET that now DAYA should show some Concern as He was Restless in all those minutes where His ABHI with ACP Sir...

Here His appearance, force DAYA to come close to Him and giving so many Instruction as...

DAYA: abhi jana hay kya Boss... (after some time as He hearing Invisible ABHIJEET, now added) Theek hay, bus Tum Apna khayal rakhna, yahan ki aur Meri Fikr Mut karna Yaar; Main sub sanbhal lun ga... bus Tum...

He suddenly Hugged that Imaginary ABHIJEET which brought Tears in ABHIJEET eyes, He turned Himself and trying to show that He was Busy in His work which Hurts FREDDIE a lot; its really Good that Team was Outside so the Scene should Not create any Problems in Juniors minds who are now also coming up with some new aspects as why DAYA was not going to His Undercover Mission which had told by ABHIJEET Sir 13 days back, why He is Experimenting His Role when He was alone and in any Meeting too and this really understand ABHIJEET that in future, this aspect will create any clutter...

ABHIJEET was Not totally Agree of this Plan but He understands that its ACP effort to cover that Space comes between Both with this Problem...

He feels that DAYA looking Sad and Quiet after that Imaginary Departure, so moved to Him and say...

ABHIJEET: DAYA, Ghar nahi jao gay... raat ho gayii hay na...

DAYA (doing file work): haan chala jaon ga... (murmur) kya karun ga Ghar ja kr bhi...

ABHIJEET: Chalo, aaj Meri Jeep kharab hay, Tum Mujhy Drop kr dena aur main Tumharay sath Dinner bhi kr lun ga...  

 DAYA look at Him for few minutes which Scared ABHIJEET, but then He windup His Work and moved with Him and Both having a Good time during Dinner and Dropping session either ABHIJEET feels that DAYA little Quiet or Sad on Invisible ABHI Departure especially in that Injured condition or might be He did not like ABHIJEET presence as its Not easy to Treat the Person Normally who Hurt His Relation after so many Apologies but He was Happy that atleast DAYA takes Food and all...

ABHIJEET also happy that DAYA dropped Him at his House meant He did not Missed His Old house address in that Mental Stress... After reaching at Residence, ABHIJEET called him to ask about His Safe Reaching at Residence, which Shocked DAYA who picked the call and His Excited Voice Hurts ABHIJEET a lot...

DAYA (excited): ABHI... Tum ye wala Number lay gayey ho..?

ABHIJEET (bite His lips with OOPS and say): haan DAYA, bus yaad nahi raha... Tu nay Khana khaya na...

DAYA: haan, wo Kharos ABHIJEET (ABHIJEET feels angry, DAYA added) Us kay sath, Us ki Jeep Kharab thi na tou Main nay Usy Ghar bhi chora...

ABHIJEET: Buri Baat hay DAYA, chalo acha hua... itna Acha tou hay wo... main tou soch raha hun Us say Dosti kr lun...

DAYA (strong): Jee nahi... koi Zarurat nahi hay... main hun na Tumhara yaar... bus kafi hay...

ABHIJEET (whisper): haan, yehi Kafi hay...

DAYA: kya bol rahy ho...

ABHIJEET (realized): So jao DAYA, Darwaza Lock kr kay sona aur haan ab Main shayed Phone Na kr paon... ABHIJEET ko Meri taraf say Thanks bol dena (heard DAYA huh, smiles and added) Take care, Bye Bye Buggy...

DAYA: oye.. (heard ABHIJEET laugh and say) Tum bhi Buht khayal rakhna, Mission ko achi tarah Complete karna... Bye Bye...

ABHIJEET cuts the call and takes a Sigh and a Smile comes over His Lips; He remembers a Month Before... 

DAYA playinga Game at PS 3 in Residence, ABHIJEET came, look at Screen and started now...

ABHIJEET: DAYA kya Tu hr Waqt Aik hee Game khelta rehta hay... la idhar day, Main kuch aur Khelun ga...

DAYA: Yaar, ek minute, main is Bug ko Chirya pr tou Betha dun...

ABHIJEET look at Screen where DAYA tried to jump the Small Ant over a Flying Sparrow; ABHIJEET snatching the Joy stick with...

ABHIJEET: hun... bacchun wala Game... chal day Idhar...

In that Snatching, the ANT fell on River and the Game Over with a Voice over as BYE BYE BUGGY and after that ABHIJEET mostly pulling DAYA leg with telling Him Bye Bye Buggy rather using word BUDDY, He uses for Him as BUGGY which DAYA loves to Hear from His Bro mouth...

ABHIJEET coming to Reality with a Sigh and standup after taking off His Shoes and out His Shirt with...

ABHIJEET: najany kub Main Tujhy Tera ABHI ban kr Tang kr paon ga DAYA...

He moved inside while DAYA already Changed, Locked the Door and at His Bed with Relaxment after this call and started Playing BUGS LIFE with Smile...

 Next Morning was Same with Usual Routine, all feells DAYA Sad but except Senior's and Some Oldie Juniors nobody knows about the Reason of His Sadness; here at Evening, Mostly Officers out; ACP Sir went for a Meeting while ABHIJEET with RAJAT, FREDDIE and VIVEK went to Crime Spot...

DAYA busying doing some Updation in Statistical data so His full concern on Moniter... Juniors who presented at Bureau exchanged Glances with each other and started the Conversation to dig out something about that Mission which was Delayed as per their thoughts...

Junior: DAYA Sir, Aap Mission pr kub jayein gay..?

DAYA (in busy tone): main thorii, ABHIJEET gaya hay na Mission pr...

Juniors: pr Sir, ABHIJEET Sir tou yahein hain...

DAYA (again busy): haan haan, Mera ABHI gaya hay na, ABHIJEET Sir hain yahan...

All look at each one in Shock, they cant understand the whole Sentence so trying to make it Simple by...

Juniors: Sir, aap kay ABHIJEET aur Humaray ABHIJEET tou aik hee hain na...

DAYA (jerk head with): kya, ye Kharos ABHIJEET (all Stunned, He added with Disappointed tone) ye kahan Meray ABHIJEET jeesa ho sakta hay; Mera ABHI tou bus Aik hee hay... kya Yaar (harsh) Tum log bhi kis ko kis say Mila detay ho... kahan Boss aur kahan ye ABHIJEET...

Voice: kaun ABHIJEET..?

Juniors turned their Neck and find DCP who unexpectidely arrived and after hearing the Last few words makes the situation towards his side with...

DCP: haan DAYA, kis ABHIJEET ki Baat ho rahi hay...?

Before DAYA Replied; Juniors started to Brief DCP about ABHIJEET who went for an Undercover Mission which was completely New for all as ABHIJEET is already at Bureau... DCP started making fun of it as...

DCP: tou bhae DAYA, yani Sr. Inspector DAYA ko apny ABHIJEET ki Beemaari lug hee gayii (to Juniors) arry wo jo Sr. Inspector ABHIJEET hay na Usy Bhoolnay ki Bemaari hay, isy bhi pakar kr laga dii hogi...

DAYA (rash): Sir, plz aap is tarah...

DCP: kya is tarah (making fun) ab bhae aadmi pagal ko pagal na boly tou kya...

DAYA (angry cutting): Wo Pagal nahi hay...

DCP (tease): acha tou...

DAYA (harsh): agar Wo Pagal hota tou kya Aap log Usy Undercover Missions pr Bhejtay... haan...

Junior: pr DAYA Sir, ABHIJEET Sir kisi Mission pr Nahi gayey hain even koi bhi Officer (showing Punch Card Entry Data to DCP over Moniter and say) dekhyey Sir, aaj bhi ABHIJEET Sir nay Apna Card Punch kiya hay... yahan tak kay (picking File from His Desk and Showing ABHIJEET signature on it with date as) aaj hee Unhun nay ye File Sign kr kay Mujhy dii hay, Dekhyey...

DCP watching either DAYA approached and coming in Shock as find ABHIJEET Signature with date over File; He comes in Panic, He look at all and tell in Tense tone...

DAYA: aisa Nhai ho sakta, wo tou Kal Shaam ko...

Juniors: DAYA Sir, ABHIJEET Sir abhi RAJAT Sir aur Team kay Sath...

DAYA (complete cutting): Main us ABHIJEET ki Baat Nhai kr raha, main apnay ABHIJEET ki Baat...

DCP (funny): matlab yahan Do Do ABHIJEET hain...

DAYA: haan Sir...

This Accceptance really closed their Mouth for a moment and after that the Laugh they all bursts out gives such Mental Stress that DAYA feels Scare, His feet moving in backword direction, Tears rolling down from His Cheeks... He does not know but He wants to Hide from all those eyes having Funny Smiles for Him, Protecting His Ears from those Laughs having so many Fun and in that He went inside the Record room and closed the Door Immediately... 

ABHIJEET came Very Late, He does not want to Come here but when DAYA did not Pick any call of RAJAT, VIVEK and FREDDIE makes Him Tense and all went to Bureau, find nobody but DAYA Quillas they already see in Parking; RAJAT dialed His number and all hearing the Ringer from His Desk, the Monitor still On but showing Blank Screen; all exchanged glance and ABHIJEET calls...

ABHIJEET: DAYA... (move ahead) DAYA, kahan...

A man rushed towards Him after Opening Record room door and just grabs Him inside His arm, His whole Face turned Wet, Red and Swelled while He repeated only a Liner with that Unexpected Hug as...

DAYA (with Cry): yaar, tum... Tum plz ABHI ko Bula... do... Plz... Mujhy Us kay.. Pass... tum ABHI ko... Bula...

ABHIJEET cant Handle anything, He just Sooth His Half Soul by Patting at his back and telling Him...

ABHIJEET: Haan, main bula deta hun... Tum Ro nahi DAYA... Main Bula...

He feels the Body Heaviness and all Shifted Him at ACP Sir cabin Couch as He was turned Unconcious...

At Night, ABHIJEET have No Choice except calling ABHI, He takes DAYA with help of those Three Partners to Residence and after His regaining Concioness, telling Him...

ABHIJEET: Main nay ABHIJEET ko ACP Sir kay through Call kr kay Bulwa liya hay, ek IB Officer Us ki jagah lay lay ga; wo abhi aa jaye ga tou Main chala jaon ga... Theek...

DAYA nodded His Head in Yes while ABHIJEET giving Him Milk glass and meantime doorbell rings; ABHIJEET trying to Open as He ordered FREDDIE to move away after ringing the doorbell Instantly, but DAYA moved in rush and after opening the Door, they way He hugged that Imaginary ABHIJEET was really Painful for ABHIJEET to watch... He tried to move at Kitchen to Sooth His Heart... He feels DAYA started to Tell Imaginary ABHIJEET about that Hurtful Incident and ABHIJEET wanted to know about it so peep inside and hear...

DAYA (sobbing): Pata nahi Boss, DCP Sir (ABHIJEET fuming in anger as this Man presence never gives any Happiness to them) (DAYA added) aur sub Log na Buht... (cries) Buht Hans rahy thy... jub main nay bola... na kay Tum Mission pr gayey ho aur Wo Kharos wala ABHIJEET yahan hay... (wiping tears) wo sub na Zor Zor say Hansny lagy tou Mujhy na Buht Dar laga ... tou Main Bhag kr na room mein Chup gaya...

ABHIJEET really Pitty on His Bhai who was trying to place His head over Imaginary ABHIJEET Shoulder with Tears and added with pain...

DAYA: phir na, wo Kharos ABHIJEET aa gaya... Main nay Us ko Bola Tum ko Bula day... Wo Buht Acha hay ABHI... Us nay Tumhein Bula liya... ACP Sir tou Buht Gussa hon gay na... (after a minute) haan haan, Main Sir ko bata dun ga kay Tum Meri wajah say aayey ho aur is mein Na hee Tumhara aur na us Kha... nahi nahi... Achy waly ABHIJEET ka Qusoor hay...

ABHIJEET moving Out, DAYA standup and telling Him after placing His Hand around His ABHI shoulder and the way He was doing it showed that His ABHI was standing beside Him and say to ABHIJEET...

DAYA (teary smile): Thank you achay waly ABHIJEET (ABHIJEET loves that Cuteness) (DAYA added) ab main Theek hun...

ABHIJEET (moving): Ok, chalo Take care (giving same greets to DAYA Left side and say) Bye...

He really tried hard Not to say BYE BUGGY and moved out Instantly Not to lose Control over His Tears with Locking the Door; He was Relaxed that Tonight His Buddy takes a Sound Sleep with His ABHI Presence while RAHUL and FREDDIE waited for Him Outside as RAJAT and VIVEK Left after shifting DAYA here and there Place was filled by FREDDIE and RAHUL and now after patting over ABHIJEET Shoulder, RAHUL went to His House while ABHIJEET dropped FREDDIE at His House and moved to His one and in all Journey His Tears fell from His eyes like His Jeep moving on road...

Here ACP really angry over ABHIJEET when he was entering inside the Bureau as RAJAT and VIVEK already updated him about Last night situation either they cant tell Him about the reason of that Mental Stress and Crying of DAYA but at morning when DAYA came with Invisible ABHIJEET and Thanking ACP Sir about his gesture and also apologise him and taking all blame about that urgent call out of Invisible ABHIJEET from that Mission... He told ACP Sir as...

DAYA: Sir, aap na Achy waly ABHIJEET (ACP look at Him with questioning about that term, DAYA understand so brief him in relax) wo Jo yahan hay na Sir... Jo humaray sath Kaam karta hay (ACP nodded with sigh) (DAYA added) Haan Sir aap us ko na Bilkul nahi daatyey ga... us nay Mery liyey ye sub kiya aur...

ACP (interrupts): aur Tum nay ye sub kyun kiya...?

DAYA face turned Pale, ACP Sir clearly feels the Fear shade coming on his eyes so changed the conversation with...

ACP: Chalo ab tou Tum Khush ho na...

DAYA (happy): Haan Sir... Pr wo IB officer pr tou burden par Gaya hoga Usy Achanak Jo Mission Kay liyey Jana para...

ACP: koi baat nahi, official Missions mein sub officers ko hr waqt tayyar hee rehna parta hy... Chalo Tum ab Jao...

DAYA Left while ACP just feels that how a person faces shows so many shades of emotions... ACP Scolds ABHIJEET as He feels that there is a hope to establish a good relation between Him and DAYA with prolong that plan; but ABHIJEET now said...

ABHIJEET:  nahi Sir, Jis tarah kal us nay Mujh say Ro kr Request ki kay us kay ABHI  ko bula dun... Kitni takleef thi Sir Us Kay Lafzun say lay kr lehjy mein, shayed Main aap ko bata nahi paon... (After a sigh) aur Sir, Kuch tou relations achy huay hee hain (with smile) Main kharos ABHIJEET say Achy waly ABHIJEET mein tou Badal gaya hun...

ACP also smiles and when He wanted to Discuss further, ABHIJEET got RAJEEV call who asked in Irritative tone...

RAJEEV: Yaar Tum log DAYA ko Dobara RAHEEL Sir Kay pass session kay liye nahi lay gaye.. unhun nay Mujh say call kr kay poocha kay kya Tum logun nay kisi aur Psychiatrist say consult kr liya hay... 

ABHIJEET: nahi Yaar! Hum log darasal Relation establish karny mein hee lagy huay thy... khair Hum log Aaj Us ko lay kr jayein gay DR RAHEEL kay pass aur Tum kahan ho Aaj kal..?

RAJEEV: Yaar! Main ek Medical Diploma ka paper day raha tha, tou usi ki tayyari mein busy tha, Aaj bhi agar Sir ki call nahi aati tou Main call nahi karta... kal mera paper hay Yaar...

ABHIJEET: ohhh good luck aur Pareshan Mut ho, hum log Aaj jayein gay...

After finishing the call, ACP Sir suggested ABHIJEET to take an Appointment from DR RAHEEL so ABHIJEET did so who told Him that it's not necessary to bring DAYA with them...

At Evening when mostly Officers went to their houses including DAYA with His Invisible ABHIJEET, ACP Sir and ABHIJEET went to DR RAHEEL clinic... who after attended told them in Smile...

DR RAHEEL: Shuker, Main tou samjha, aap log ab nahi ayein gay... Isi liyey RAJEEV ko call kr Kay poocha...

ABHIJEET: aap Mujhy call kr letay, Reception pr Main nay DAYA Kay Form pr apna Number likhwaya tha...

DR RAHEEL: Main nay Pehly us say poochna Behtar samjha, khair tou batayey DAYA say Relation achy huay...

ACP and ABHIJEET told Him the whole... their Plan, DAYA reaction and all other Stuff and at the end Concluded...

ACP: Mera khayal tha ye plan kuch aur aagy tak chalta tou shayed Kuch aur achy...

DR RAHEEL (cutting): haan acha tou hua hay... ek Relation tou build up hua hay ABHIJEET aur DAYA mein... DAYA kay Dil mein ABHIJEET kay liyey ek Soft corner bana hay aur yehi Soft corner aagy Chal kr Usy ABHIJEET ki taraf khench laye ga...

Khair acha ab ye karo, (to ABHIJEET) Tum roz DAYA kay Ghar Us say milnay Jao, Yunhi raat mein... Us say bataein karo, Us kay interest ki aur haan agar is beech wo kahy kay yahan Us ka ABHIJEET bhi hay tou Us ko bhi Conversation mein Shamil karo...

(ABHIJEET exchange glances with ACP) (DR RAHEEL added) 5 din Tum roz Us say milo, aur 5 din kay baad 6th day Mut Jao, Us kay agly roz koshish karo kay Bureaue mein bhi Tumhari DAYA say mulaqat na ho, Phone pr bhi Contact nahi ho paye, aur phir Us raat koTum phir Jao Us kay Ghar aur dekho Us ka Kya reaction hota hay...

ABHIJEET: Aap ka matlab hay Main 5 roz continuously Us say milnay Us kay Ghar jaon, Us kay interest ki bataein karun... matlab Apnay liyey Us kay Dil mein jagah banaon...

DR RAHEEL: nahi, jagah jaan pao! kyunky Tumhari jagah tou Pehly say hay wahan...

ABHIJEET: aur phir ek roz ka GAP day kr Next roz jaon... (DR RAHEEL nodded, ABHIJEET added) aur Jis roz GAP dun us kay Next day Us say kisi tarah bhi contact nahi karun aur Na hee Milun balkay raat ko hee ja kr Milun...

DR RAHEEL: Haan, magar ye saara Kuch working days kay Ander ho... beech mein koi Sunday ya Holiday nahi aayey... Jesay kal Sunday hy, kal raat say Tum us say milnay Jana start karo, Thursday tak continuously Jao... Friday ko Gap karo aur phir Saturday ko Jao...

ACP: aur Us kay baad...?

DR RAHEEL: Tum Sunday ko Mujhy call kr kay Us ka reaction batana tou phir Main bataon ga aagy kya karna hay...

ACP: DR, aap nay DAYA ko koi Medicine nahi suggest ki..?

DR RAHEEL: jee RAJEEV already Mujhy Us Kay Frozen Shoulder ka Brief kr chuka hay, wo apni life kay kuch arsay Kafi Anti depressant lay chuka hay... filhaal Main nahi chahta kay Usy koi is tarah ki Medicine dun Jis say Us kay Kaam aur Rawayyun mein farq aayey... Jub Zarurat hogi... Main khud suggest kr dun ga and kuch tou wo already ly hee raha hay Mild Dose mein aur ACP Sir, (strong) wo Beemaar nahi hay...

ACP (with smile): I know, bus poocha kay kahein Aap ye na samjh bethein kay hum Us kay Ilaj mein interested nahi...

DR RAHEEL flashed a Shy smile and all moved out after that Sitting and from Next Night ABHIJEET started to work on that Plan...

RAHUL already in contact with ABHIJEET and RAJEEV, He mostly keeps checking over DAYA, His presence at Residence and all; DAYA met Him time to time and looking completely Normal; talking about His ABHI as well...

RAHUL satisfied AMAN that DAYA doing all that cz He went to play a role of Psycho Patient in his coming up Undercover Mission so AMAN satisfied and now He was busy in his semister so not much in contact with DAYA...

At Sunday Night; ABHIJEET after completing all his work... taking an Ice cream Tub and went to Residence to meet with DAYA at 10:00 PM sharp without any prior Information...

He ringed the door bell and DAYA opened the Door, look surprised and then a happy shade coming on His face... He calls him inside with...

DAYA: aao aao ABHIJEET (calling His ABHI) ABHI dekho Kaun aaya hay... (to ABHIJEET) betho betho...

ABHIJEET giving an Ice Cream tub to Him and sat with little Confusion that how will He know about that invisible ABHI presence... He keenly looking at DAYA whose eyes move from room to Lounge and ABHIJEET standup and trying to extend his Hand for hand shake purpose from that Invisible ABHIJEET... It's really his life one of most Difficult task but He succeeded and say...

ABHIJEET: Bethyey plz...

DAYA started laughing and exchange a look with that spot where in ABHIJEET idea that Invisible ABHI sat and say...

DAYA: dekha ABHI, ye Bechara Tumhein aisay deal kr raha hay jesy Tum is kay Ghar mehman aye ho...

ABHIJEET sat with Shy smile as now He confirmed his assumption that invisible ABHIJEET also sat at Sofa... DAYA takes a tray and taking out Bowls and spoons and brought that Ice cream tub with all that and showing it to Invisible ABHI during coming at Lounge as...

DAYA: dekha, saheh tarah, achy say laaya hun na... (placing Tray over Central table and tell to ABHIJEET) Yaar Boss na Mujhy hr waqt seekhata parhata rehta hy... 

ABHIJEET smiles, DAYA opened Ice Cream tub cover and the Excitment and happiness coming at his face with...

DAYA: WOW, chocolate chip... Mera fav Flavor hay...

ABHIJEET (murmur): I know...

DAYA (taking out scoop in bowls and ask ABHIJEET): Tumhein kesy pata chala..?

ABHIJEET (smiles): kyunky Mera bhi hay...

DAYA: sach (his eyes shines like Star) pata hay ABHI ka bhi yehi fav hay... (Giving bowl to Both and eating his one with) Hum teenu kitnay same same hain na...

ABHIJEET smiles and tonight they talked about so many things like some New Action movies, Games, Gadgets and all either sometime it's Difficult for ABHIJEET to grasp that either DAYA tell this to Him or that Invisible ABHIJEET but He managed quite well as He Quiets when can't understand the Scene...

After an hour He left the place after finishing His Bowl while Invisible ABHI bowl also finished by DAYA as He told ABHIJEET that ABHI did not have a Mood to eat that now so He ate His Part... ABHIJEET really happy spending some good and quality time with His BUGGY after ages...

He updated about that to ACP Sir on call when back to His house who was also happy after feeling the happiness of his Sharp shine...

The same routine moving continuously 5 days where DAYA come close to ABHIJEET as well Comfortable with him too...

Here 6th day Night coming, DAYA is waiting for ABHIJEET but ABHIJEET did not come... He tried to call him but ABHIJEET Cell was switched off... DAYA became Restless even He argues so many time with Invisible ABHIJEET who tried to calm down Him... DAYA irritates...

DAYA (irritative tone): haan haan, Mujhy malum hay koi kaam par gaya hoga... magar ABHI... phone tou On rakhna chahyey...

DAYA (after a minute showing that He was hearing Invisible ABHIJEET and added now): Tum bekar mein Us ki Side Mut lo (again trying His number and then placed the cell over table with murmur) kirpiya kr kay apna message ek beep kay baad record karwayein, dhanniwad... Hunh...

The whole night, He was Restless, even He went to check ABHIJEET on his house at Mid night without telling it to Invisible ABHI to avoid His Bhashan...

At Morning, DAYA went to Bureau with His Invisible ABHIJEET and today His all focus turned towards ABHIJEET who was Absent from there; after so many attempts to call Him, He asked RAJAT about it...

DAYA: RAJAT, ABHIJEET kahan hay...?

For a moment RAJAT confused that either DAYA asking about WHICH ABHIJEET... He looks at him Blankly so DAYA in frustrated tone...

DAYA: arry bhae, ABHIJEET ka pooch raha hun... abhi tak aaya jo nahi hay... Phone bhi band hay Us ka ... (In scare) Kuch problem...

RAJAT got that DAYA asking about REAL ABHIJEET and as per Plan He told Him that ABHIJEET went for a Sting Operation so that's why He is Absent from Bureau and Switched off his Cell... DAYA nodded although Murmuring moved towards his desk...

DAYA (rashly murmur): tou ye baat Mujhy bata kr bhi ja sakta tha... Pr nahi... Phone bhi band kr diya (to his left side chair beside him) Tum zyada Us ki favor  mut karo aur ye daant tou bilkul Mut dikhao... 

He leaves the place after fuming... Today He was not much Focusing on His Invisible ABHI although mostly expelling His Anger over ABHIJEET...

At Night, ABHIJEET came as per time and when just trying to press the door bell... Door opened and DAYA came in rash...

DAYA (angry): kahan thy Tum kal... haan... pata hay... Main kitna Pareshan ho gaya tha (He completely forgets to include that Invisible ABHIJEET with Him) (He added again) malum hay, kitna Ulta Seedha Soch raha tha Main...

ABHIJEET (enjoying His BUGGY concern but cutting): wo ek Sting Operation...

DAYA (angry cutting): tou bata kr bhi jaya ja sakta tha... pr nahi aur tou aur Phone bhi Switched off kr diya... (Sarcastically) wah wah...

ABHIJEET (with a lovely smile): acha I m so sorry, aainda aisa nahi hoga...

DAYA (harsh): hunh, bus Sorry bol diya aur ho gaya... malum hay Mujhy kal Tum say kitni saari Bataein karni thi...

ABHIJEET (smiles): tou Aaj kr lo...

DAYA (confuse): acha... Pr phir Aaj ki bataein Kub karein gay...

ABHIJEET (calm): Main kuch Der aur ruk jaon ga tou Aaj ki baat bhi kr lein gay... Theek...

DAYA (moving head with happiness): haan ye Theek hay.. Tum betho (signal at Residence terrace chairs and say while moving inside) Main lay kr aata hun...

ABHIJEET sat with Confusion with the Sentence MAIN LAY KR AATA HUN; He thought that DAYA must talking about any Food or Drinks, after a minute, DAYA came sat beside His chair and showing a Small Crystal bowl where small Chits presents and telling ABHIJEET...

DAYA: Main nay na kal wali baatein likh len theen ta kay wo Aaj wali baatun say Mix Na ho jayein...

ABHIJEET look at Him in Shock, He did not understand how to control on his tears, it's really a tough task for him now while on the other side... DAYA started to pick those chits and discussing with him about so many Issues with smiles and shine...

DAYA: kal pata hay Main nay na ek zabardast sa Game dhonda hay... haan DEAD TRIGGER... Horror game hay... Download bhi kr Liya aur pata hay Mujhy Tum say poochna tha kay Yaar wo jo aaj Forensic say Report mili hay... is ka matlab tou Qatil koi Ander ka hee hay... hain na... warna Ghar kay Us rasty ka kisi Bahar kay aadmi ko Kesy malum parta...

ABHIJEET nodded; discussing and one by one taking those Chits from DAYA hands who was totally involved on his discussion so can't think much about it and after almost 2 hours, ABHIJEET standup to leave...

Tonight, He feels really happy that in today discussion, DAYA did not take Invisible ABHIJEET name once even can't say about his presence and ABHIJEET deliberately avoid it... When He was about to leave... DAYA grabs his hand and ask with hope...

DAYA: Tum kal aao gay na ABHIJEET...?

ABHIJEET pressed his palm with Assurance Smile while DAYA suddenly told Him about Invisible ABHIJEET absence as...

DAYA: ABHI na Apny Informer say milnay gaya tha, bus aany wala hay...

ABHIJEET Smiles and after saying Him Goodnight, went to His house, opening door by His Key, taking out those Chits from his coat pocket and Bursts out in tears after sitting on His knees...

Next morning, He called DR RAHEEL and Updating him the recent who really happy as He feels that DAYA must be back in few days with ABHIJEET continuous hard work...

When ABHIJEET cuts the call; He got DAYA call and in tension picks the call with...

ABHIJEET: DAYA kya hua...? sub Theek hay na..?

DAYA (feeling Excited from His Voice): ABHIJEET, Tum Free ho na...

ABHIJEET: haan pr Tum...

DAYA (cuts and order): bus tou foran Ghar aa jao... Jaldi...

DAYA cuts the Call instantly... ABHIJEET having No Option so moved and when went to Residence; found DAYA already Ready and strolling Outside; ABHIJEET stepping Out and DAYA grabs His Arm and takes Him at Quillas Pessanger Seat which feels a Sooth inside His Buddy whole body and He occupied the Driving wheel with...

DAYA: chalo chalo, jaldi say Bhaag letay hain... Boss kay aany say pehlay...

ABHIJEET: kahan jana hay...?

DAYA (naughty): Surprise...

ABHIJEET smiles with Him and Quillas rushed and stopped at Parking of a Mall; DAYA signaled ABHIJEET to step out and after parked the Vehicle, takes ABHIJEET with Him and doing Shopping; He went to TITEN and searching any Good Watch... ABHIJEET still Confused as He reminds that might be any Team member Birthday but cant get it so after some time asked to DAYA...

ABHIJEET: Apnay liyey lay rahy ho...?

DAYA nodded in No and ask Shop keeper to taken out another Watch; ABHIJEET after sometime again ask...

ABHIJEET: kisi ko Gift dena hay kya..?

DAYA: haan (showing Him Watch and ask) batao Kesi hay..?

ABHIJEET (now alert): Achi hay, pr hay kis ki Birthday..?

DAYA (to shop keeper): koi aur dekhayein... (to ABHIJEET) kisi ki nahi... bus ABHI ko denay ka Dil kiya... is liyey...

ABHIJEET (shocked): kyun, Us ka Birthday tou October mein aata hay na...?

DAYA (confuse): Tum ko Pata hay...

ABHIJEET (clear): haan Wo Officers Database mein dekha tha tou yaad reh gaya...

DAYA: haan Birthday tou Late hay, pr main aisay hee ABHI ko Gift dun ga... phir Usy yaad aa jayey ga kay Us nay kitnay dino say Mujhy Shopping Nahi karai (ABHIJEET feels Pain in His heart, DAYA added) phir ABHI Mujhy Khub saari Shopping karayey ga... (wink) acha Idea hay na...

ABHIJEET smiles with Great Force and now started Shopping for DAYA; DAYA really Confuse so asked...

DAYA (confuse): Tum kis kay liyey Shopping kr rahy ho...?

ABHIJEET (casual): hay koi... Tum bus batao... Ye Color acha hay na...

DAYA nodded in Yes and ABHIJEET purchased so many things and after that He told ABHIJEET to move to Food Court who look at Him and say...

DAYA: Tum bilkul ABHI ki tarah sochtay ho...

ABHIJEET (smiles): acha... kesay...?

DAYA (laugh): Usy bhi foran Pata chal jata hay kay Mujhy Ghoom Ghoom kr Bhook lug jati hay...

ABHIJEET (undelibrately): haan Tumhara Pait jo Ander chala jata hay...

DAYA (stunned with): kya...!

ABHIJEET comes in panic about DAYA reaction, He tried to Excuse but before that DAYA started laughing and ABHIJEET too joined Him with that and Both went to Food Court, having good time and returned back to Residence...

Here after taking Tea, ABHIJEET standup and when DAYA see offing Him, ABHIJEET presenting all those Shoppers to Him with...

ABHIJEET: ye lo... Gifts for U...

DAYA (shock): Nahi nhai... Tum nay tou kisi aur...

ABHIJEET (cutting): Nahi, Main nay Tumhary liyey hee liya tha... dekho Size bhi Tumhara hay aur Colors bhi Saaray Tumharay Fav hain...

DAYA (hesitate): nahi, Nahi... main ye sub...

ABHIJEET: Main Dost hun na Tumhara (DAYA nodded in Yes) (ABHIJEET trapped Him) tou lay lo, warna phir main yahan nahi aaon ga...

DAYA (grab His hand with): nahi Nahi... pr main na (low tone) ABHI kay siwa kisi say bhi aisay hee Gift nahi leta...

ABHIJEET (quiets and moving back with): acha Theek hay...

Suddenly DAYA grabs those Shoppers, He had a Scare in His Heart that might be His New Friend takes it an Ego problem and never come back again, but after grabbing those Shopper; He grabs His Wrist too and say...

DAYA: Tum yahein ruko... Main aata hun...

ABHIJEET stopped grabbing Shoppers and DAYA back with that Watch He purchased for His ABHI and giving it to ABHIJEET with...

DAYA: phir Tum ko bhi ye Gift lena paray ga, warna Main kuch Nhai lun ga...

ABHIJEET look at Him and His Innocence.. He smiles and tell Him that He purchased it for His ABHI...

ABHIJEET: pr ye Tum nay ABHI kay liyey li thi na...?

DAYA: koi Baat nahi, Tum pehno ya ABHI pehnay... aik hee baat hay... magar agar Tum ye nahi lo gay tou main bhi ye sub (referring shoppers) nahi lun ga...

ABHIJEET takes that watch while DAYA grabs all Gifts Shoppers and suddenly Hugs Him with a Lovely THANKS; ABHIJEET trying to Hugs back Him but He quickly Depart and moved inside Residence after saying Him Goodbye with Smile...

Tonight ABHIJEET how many times spread His Palm over that watch, even how many times He tied and Untied it and lastly Sleep tie up over His wrist with soothing of that Quick Hug...

Next day; at Cafeteria, RAJAT talking ABHIJEET about some case in between; DAYA picked ABHIJEET Cell placed at table after entertaining a Call earlier and tell in Happiness...

DAYA: arry Tumharay pass ABHI jesa Set hay...

ABHIJEET Tense that if DAYA will check picture folder or SMS's, what he will give Reply about his queries but DAYA returned back to it to Him without further Checking... RAJAT asked...

RAJAT: DAYA Sir, aap kay pass tou ABHI ki Buht Pictures hon gii...

DAYA (happy, taken out his Cell and showing Pictures with): Bilkul, Mera tou Picture Folder Us kay Pictures say hee Bhara hay (showing) ye Dekho... awww dekho kesay So raha hay... aur ye dekho...

Suddenly He stopped and looking Keenly at ABHIJEET face and comparing it with the face having in His Cell Folder and say in Dreamy tone...

DAYA: Tum, ABHI jesay dikhtay ho...

RAJAT (added): ya shayed ABHI hee ho...

DAYA (confuse): kya matlab..?

ABHIJEET: annn, kuch Nahi... Chalo Chalo... Kaam nahi karna kiya..?

ABHIJEET dispersed them after feeling DAYA Confusion... He came close to ABHIJEET but obviously not in Speedy way, here ABHIJEET suggest RAJAT...

ABHIJEET (to RAJAT): RAJAT, itni jaldi Mut karo... Us Kay Zehn pr buht Bojh Nahi Parna chahyey...

RAJAT nodded in Yes and the day ended with such smoothness without any further Difficulties...

The week moving slowly and Smoothly; ABHIJEET spent Maximum time with Him on DR RAHEEL suggestion either ACP Sir, RAJAT, FREDDIE and VIVEK also accompanying Him and He feels that Now from DAYA Routine automatically Eliminated that Invisible ABHI but not Completely...

ABHIJEET in that Routiine roaming inside the Residence, while DAYA at Kitchen making Something either DUO already finishes their Dinner and TV is on at Lounge airing FINDING NEMO in Hindi Version; DAYA repeating the Dialogue with giving the Brief Intro to ABHIJEET about NEMO and His Wareabouts as...

DAYA (imitate the dialogues): aap nay Meray Betay NEMO ko dekha hay..!

ABHIJEET (murmur): jitni baar is Director nay Movie nahi dekhi hogi, Sahab nay dekh li hay...

DAYA (suddenly): Tum nay dekhi hay ye Movie ABHIJEET (ABHIJEET nodded in NO and that's True, He did not know that Why DAYA did not Recommend this Movie to Him in Past even He did not find it in DAYA Lappy Folder or watching in TV) (DAYA added) ye na ek Choti sii Machli ki khani hay, Us ka Naam na NEMO hay... (concern tone) Us ka aik Par na buht Munna sa hay by Birth, is liyey Usy Ternay mein problem hoti hay (irritate) wesay Ye Us kay Dad ka khayal hay (ABHIJEET smiles) (DAYA signaling His attention towards Screen and telling more) aur ye jo Blue color ki Fish hay na, is ka naam DORI hay (sad) is Becari ko na Bhoolny ki beemaari hay... ABHI ko bhi hay (ABHIJEET Shocked; DAYA adds) Us kay sath Starting kay waqt na ek Hadsa ho gaya tha, Meri wajah say (ABHIJEET takes a Deep Sigh seeing DAYA wiping His Wet eyes with) tou Main nay ye Movie kabhi Us kay sath nahi dekhi (ABHIJEET Questioning look) (DAYA said with Innocence) pata nahi yaar, Usy Dukh hota na... (ABHIJEET really look at Him in Trance) (DAYA trying to be Fresh) aur Tum SHREK ko jaantay ho...?

ABHIJEET: haan wo OGRE na...

DAYA (who was trying to cut Veggies for Frying as Oil heating in Pan over Stove say with Tease): Pata Tumhein sub hay (ABHIJEET smiles standing at kitchen with help of counter) (DAYA again) aur Wo Hathi jis kay Kaan Lamby hain...

ABHIJEET: haan, BUMBO na...

DAYA (started Laughing): arry BUMBO nahi... DAMBO...hahahaha... pata hy Mujhy Us kay Kaan Buht achy lagta hain (busying with) jub chahyey oorh lo.. Blanket ka jhanjhat hee nahi (ABHIJEET hides His Smiles) (DAYA again in happy tone) aur TOM N JERRY tou Mera Fav hay...

ABHIJEET: haan malum hay... (DAYA look at Him so He clear that confuse shade of His BUGGY face by saying) aksar logun ka Wohi Fav hota hay... Mera tou CHIP N DALE hay...

DAYA: Mujhy tou DALE kay daant Buht achy lagtay hain (smiles) Khargosh jesay aur...

The AHHH completely panic DUO inside Kitchen as Hot Oil Pan turned over DAYA, in excitement of conversation DAYA trying to move His hand and it Hits the Pan handle and that Happened...

ABHIJEET in a bit placed His hands under Cool Tap Water but the way He was Hopping; trying to be Brave but the Tears which Falling and His hands and Foot turned to Red and the Outermost Layer covering out hurts ABHIJEET a lot...

DAYA continuously taking ABHI name; He was trying to Relax Himself as He does not want that ABHIJEET thought that He is such a Stupid Person who Cried after Burning; ABHIJEET takes Him at His Bedroom and when trying to Check his Foot... Suddenly DAYA standup and rushed towards Door and opened it and trying to tell someone in Tears...

DAYA (tears): ABHI, mera hath aur pair na jal... haan haan... chalo... Mujhy Buht dard...

ABHIJEET cant understand what he is doing right now as DAYA was involved with that Imaginary ABHI who went out for Puchasing Cheese telling by DAYA to Him when He came at Residence...

ABHIJEET watching the Outer most layer, the Redness, Swell and after sometimes, He moved ahead and tell...

ABHIJEET (trying to make scene little easy with): Excuse Me ABHI (its really tough to tell this in which direction so He say without any specific direction) Main dekhun...

DAYA: haan haan, dekho Yaar... ABHI Tum Bus Meray Pass betho...

ABHIJEET first lying Him over Bed then He was taken out First Aid Box from Kitchen cabinet; DAYA was in much Panic state so cant think for a moment that How ABHIJEET knew about that;  ABHIJEET rubbing the Ointment over those portion which are Burnt; DAYA talking to His Imaginary ABHI who was Consoling Him (in ABHIJEET idea) while His Tears really Hurts Him and He with Passage of Time Wiped them Off which completely Ignored by DAYA as right now; His Healing hands with Him...

During that, DAYA feeling Drowsy; the pain still visible over His Face but the Icing Heal up takes him to Dreams either He was too Tense telling this to His ABHI as...

DAYA: ABHI, Mujhy abhi na File bhi Complete karni thi... Sir ko Kal deni hay... haan haan... Mujhy malum hay... pr... acha Tum zarur bana dena... yaar...

After all that, ABHIJEET moved out, Washed His hands; Wiped the Kitchen and First sat over DAYA Bed and started to Complete His Files which was half Completed already; He feels DAYA Restless especially when trying to change Directions.. the AHHH, OHHH and ABHI voice coming from His mouth with Pain Hurts Him More and Tonight ABHIJEET will must Stay here...   

The Cater started when between this condition of Concious and unconscious... DAYA told ABHIJEET to leave with...

DAYA (teary face): acha ABHIJEET, ab Tum bhi Ghar jao... Buht Raat ho gayii hay... ab tou...

ABHIJEET (tense): pr DAYA...

DAYA: arry kuch Nhai hoga aura b tou (grabbed Insisible Palm for His Imaginary ABHI with) ab tou ABHI bhi hay na Meray sath...

ABHIJEET have No option and with heavy heart He Left the residence as Invisible ABHI was there for DAYA take care according to DAYA...

ABHIJEET was restless whole Night, so many time he thinks to call DAYA although He knew that He bandaid well and DAYA cant feel such extreme Pain which create Difficulties but...!

He wanted to Call Him but just after thinking about his burnt fingers and the difficulty for him to pick call stopped him...

RAHUL and AMAN went to PUNE as his uncle got a minor heart attack so ABHIJEET did not take his help in that...

At early morning He went to Residence as he felt that how DAYA drove Quillas so it's better to pick Him... DAYA really happy after seeing Him as He was in Casual Wear with Chappel still His those Parts having Patches of Red and Black...

Both He and Invisible ABHI moved to takes seat in Jeep and now clutter started as DAYA opened Back door cz in his idea! Invisible ABHI should sat on Front Seat with ABHIJEET... ABHIJEET felt tense as it looking awkward and he felt that he is looking more like a driver if this will happened so he interrupted with...

ABHIJEET: DAYA, Tum aagy aa Jao, peechy Tum ko jhatkay lagein gay agar Chout lug gayii tou pareshani hogi... (Instantly just to protect from any other issue added) dekha ABHI bhi meri baat say agree kr raha hy...

DAYA look at the front Passenger Door where His invisible ABHI stand, and then come to front door! ABHIJEET takes a big sigh with opening door and DAYA sat...

ABHIJEET look at him in a Minute and then stepped out and after taking a round, checked front Passenger door where DAYA sat who look at ABHIJEET in confusion while closed the back door too as Invibe ABHI  did not close the door and for this ABHIJEET made that plan...

He really a Big Sigh and back to his position and Jeep moved on... DAYA after a minute Thanked as...

DAYA: Thank you ABHIJEET, Tum nay File complete kr di...

ABHIJEET (undelibrately): Kya tu bhi DAYA, Your welcome...

DAYA who look at him in Shock first bursts a Big Laugh and then turn his neck and enjoying with...

DAYA: dekha ABHI, ABHIJEET samjh raha hay Main Us ko Thank you Bol raha hun... (look at ABHIJEET who grasped his mistake, DAYA added) arry bhae, Main ABHI ko thanks bol raha hun...

ABHIJEET gives a faint smile and all reached at Bureau and DAYA presenting his file to ACP sir who asked after seeing light bandage over his hand with as today he us wearing Slippers rather Joggers or Shoes...

ACP: ye Kya hua DAYA..?

DAYA: wo Sir, kal Na Meray haathun aur Pair pr Gharam Oil gir gaya tha, tou is liyey... Main file bhi complete nahi kr paaya Sir, aadhi ABHI nay ki hay tou aap ko writing different mily gi...

ACP (concern): DR ko dikhaya...?

DAYA: nahi Sir, wo ABHIJEET... Am... Haan achy waly ABHIJEET nay dawa laga kr  bandage kr di thi na tou Aaram aa Gaya...

ACP: acha, Chalo khayal rakhna apna...

Here ACP talked to ABHIJEET about that as He was at higher Official meeting last night so ABHIJEET did not tell him about that... The case was reported and team busy in that...

After that Rotine; ABHIJEET tried to engage DAYA with Him More and cant give Him any minute that He will start His Conversation with His Invisible ABHI... Medicine also work Properly and DAYA frequently changed the Topic and easily turned towards ABHIJEET...

Tonight ABHIJEET went at sharp 10 at Residence as per routine... He was totally tense about DAYA condition, he moved inside and talking to him but find DAYA sad and quiet... He changed His Bandage during which feel DAYA wanted to say something to Him but Hesitant so asked after grabbing his Palm lightly...

ABHIJEET: Kya hua DAYA...?

DAYA look at him and Tears fills His eyes totally Worrying ABHIJEET who turn into panic and ask in tension...

ABHIJEET: DAYA... Tum...

DAYA (started with tears): Mujhy na Aaj ABHI nay buht daanta... Bola Main buht careless Hun... Apna Bilkul Dihaan Nahi rakhta...

ABHIJEET (feeling love about his innocence so console): koi baat nahi... Wo pareshan ho gaya ho ga na... (looking His Burnt parts) Jal bhi tou kitna gaya hay...

DAYA (after a second): ABHIJEET... Tum (ABHIJEET look at his Hesitant and DAYA told as whisper) Mujhy Khana Khila do gay... (so low tone) Main nay Subah say Kuch nahi khaya...

ABHIJEET fell in Bulk of shame... Ufff, How he forgets this Part as how's this possible that Invisible ABHI feed DAYA either ABHIJEET thought about DAYA driving but Missed that Part; DAYA just changed His Tee Shirt in Morning so its Not a Big Deal as he was using the Same trouser... ABHIJEET looked at him and tell...

ABHIJEET: Main aata hun...


Posted: 9 years ago
GD story; & me πŸ˜ƒ
Daya stressed from the starting of the story;  & me
Daya in fever; & me πŸ˜’
Daya asked Abhijeet to leave; :& me πŸ˜²πŸ˜²
And Anbhijeet left; & me πŸ˜²
Daya suicides; & me πŸ˜²πŸ˜­πŸ₯Ί
Still Abhijeet and Daya separate; & me πŸ˜­
Daya behaving weired; & me πŸ˜•
Now Daya in bad state of mind; :& me πŸ˜•
Doctor - Split Personality - Daant; & me πŸ˜΅πŸ˜”
Story to be continue; & me πŸ˜‘😑
Yar GD itna sara kese soch leti ho?πŸ˜› Well yeh upper sare toh mere expressions the while reading ur storyπŸ˜† But yeah I too agree with Abhijeet this time that it really hurts na
But jab doc ne samjaya toh me bi tora tora samaj gaye & now back to the same point that don't left him alone na yar😭 see now whats his condition πŸ₯Ί
GD what can I say other than it that I loved it & I love reading your stories😳 I really like the way you present and depict duo bonding in your stories⭐️ I really wish to see such type of bonding or atleast somewhat close to it in the show but its missing in the show and FW has totally forgotton about  it😑 that's why after reading ur story I feel likeπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜³ oh duo together πŸ€—
Ok now about the story again it awesomeπŸ‘ and with a lil different situation. How Abhijeet quietly left the house and even after suicidal attempt of daya he still not willing to live with himπŸ˜•, to some extent he is also right with his point of view because he always gets hurt, but daya bi na he can't even imagine that Abhi has just left the house and may be use bi 
What he is going through is really sad, he really has splitted Abhi's personality in two, haina?πŸ˜• This time no drama right?πŸ˜‰ Now What?😲 With the help of doc they will bring him back to the normal? But how? Jan'ne k liye wait kijye next part k update hone tak kaπŸ˜†
Hey dear me enjoyed reading your story and definitely waiting for ur next part πŸ˜‰
And yes jate jate one word for landlord toh banta hai na boss, ________ πŸ€¬πŸ˜† sare fasaad ki jaar hi yeh hai πŸ˜†
And at the last a beary hug for u πŸ€—

Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by gadhadada



yaar Choti Choti Takleefun say Insan jaldi Mar jata hay...🀒🀒

ALLAH reham kare kesi baten karti ho, don't be sad, be happy dear😊

Wow new part ah bi gaya me itna late ho gaye πŸ˜”
Ok no worries this time as tomorow is my offπŸ˜› gonna read it nowπŸ˜‰
Posted: 9 years ago

He entered in Residence; trying to search something but except Egg, Butter and some pieces of Bread; can't find anything... He called Food bar for Order as side by side making two sandwiches and used Pepsi as No juice available... might be DAYA not went for Grocery or when He was moving to DAYA room... glance at His room and thought...

ABHIJEET: shayed Paisay he na bachy hun...

Till the food come, ABHIJEET fed DAYA those Sandwiches and then some Foods too with Medicine... DAYA during eating...

DAYA (smiles): Tum Bilkul ABHI Jesy ho...

ABHIJEET: wo Kesy.?

DAYA: ABHI bhi Mujhy Bilkul aisy hee khilata hy...

ABHIJEET: hmmm ... khair Main Tumharay ABHI say Buht acha hun (in rash) ye kya Baat hui, ABHI ko Tumhein kuch tou Khilana chahyey tha...

DAYA (defend him): Wo Mujh say Gussa hay na...

ABHIJEET (angry): Gussa hona ek Alug baat hay,, magar ye tou dekhna chahyey Usy kay Tumhari Ungliyaan jali hui hain, tum khao gay kesay (after a minute) bhae chahyey Tum ko Acha lagy ya Bura... ABHI ko aisa karna nahi tha...

This is the First time ABHIJEET found only Silence from DAYA part; might be He also Hurts with His ABHI this attitude... ABHIJEET after finishing all, Left the Residence with...

ABHIJEET: Main subah ko jaldi aa jaon ga... Breakfast ki Chinta Mut karna... aur darwaza band kr lo...

DAYA (wishing him Goodnight, closing Door and defend his Boss with Strong tone): ab wo itna bhi Gussa nahi hay Mujh say...

ABHIJEET smiles and Left the Residence...  Next Morning, He fed DAYA Breakfast at Residence and side by side Confronted Invisible ABHI first time in His Life History where He angry on Someone who is Really INVISIBLE with...

ABHIJEET (looking towards here and there and started): ABHI aap ko aisa Nahi krna tha... Theek hay, Us nay thora Careless kiya pr aap ko tou Us ka Dihaan rakhna tha na...

DAYA (look at Him with Open mouth and say): Tum kis say Baat kr rahy ho ABHIJEET... (ABHIJEET confuses, DAYA adds) ABHI tou Subah hee chala gaya Apnay Informer say milnay...

ABHIJEET moved instantly after Picking Plates from table, pat over His Head and after Dumping all in the Kitchen Sink murmur...

ABHIJEET (murmur): aur karo ABHIJEET sahib... extra Efficiency... pooch tou letay wo GUPT ABHI hay bhi ya Teerath Yatra pr Nikla hua hay... huh...

DAYA (entered and tense): ABHIJEET, Tum theek ho na... (ABHIJEET look at Him, He added) Akelay Akelay Baatein kr rahy ho...

ABHIJEET (murmur): haan Sahab ka Asar ho gaya hay na... (to Confuse DAYA) arry main Practice kr raha hun kay ABHI say kesay Baat karun ga...

DAYA smiles and moved out while ABHIJEET after Switching off Light and fan, Locked Residence completely Exit where DAYA already occupied Jeep Passenger Seat...

Here ABHIJEET Two Partners who are partners on this Secret also discussing each other... when ABHIJEET entered inside as from Parking SACHIN and VIIVEK takes DAYA with the ... RAJAT after seeing ABHIJEET asked...

RAJAT: Sir, aik baat Mujhy samjh nahi aayii... (ABHIJEET questioning) (RAJAT added) Sir, DAYA Sir, ABHI Kay sath rehtay hain, chahye wo invisible hay saheh (ABHIJEET nodded, He added) tou wo itny weak kyun dekhty hain, Dull, thaky huay aur...

FREDDIE (added): haan aur 4/5 roz say tou un ka hath bhi thora swell ho raha hy...

ABHIJEET (smiles): Haan saheh kaha... Darasal Jis ABHI Kay sath wo rehta hay, wo us say baatein kr sakta hay, us ko dant sakta hay... Pr Usy Khany paka ya la kr Khila tou nahi sakta na... Us ki ungliyaan  jal gayii hain, tou us Kay Kapray tou wo ABHI press nahi kr sakta na... Isi tarah dawa ka Yaad dilana ye sub... (Sigh as both nodded to understand) (ABHIJEET again) DR RAHEEL nay isi liyey tou Mujhy aany Jany ka kaha hay... Ab Dekho Jis roz DAYA nay Mujhy roak Liya na... Samjho Main nay us Kay ABHI ki jagah lay li...

Here ABHIJEET meet with DR RAHEEL at Evening and during updating told Him that Now He wants something Speedy...

ABHIJEET: DR, wesay tou Mujhy malum hay kay is Ilaj mein Waqt zyada lagta hay, pr kya ab bhi Hum kuch Jaldi Nhai kr saktay; ab tou DAYA buht acha Reaction denay laga hay; balkay ab tou wo buht kum ABHI ki Bataein karta hay; saara Waqt tou Meray sath hee rehta hy...

DR RAHEEL: nahi, Tum Us kay sath rehtay ho... Chalo ek Kaam karo as a Experiment... Tum kisi tarah aisa karo kay Wo tum ko Ghar mein ruknay ko kahy...

ABHIJEET: haan ye Us nay kabhi Mujhy Nahi kaha...

DR RAHEEL: aur Yehi sub say zaruri hay...

ABHIJEET nodded is Yes and moved out; He cant make any Plan for that but fate gives Him such chance...

ABHIJEET feeling Dull as He had a bad Headache and for coming here from Spot; He and RAJAT had a Bad accident; Not much Injured but Both Injured and after taking Medication; Both came here and told FREDDIE to give Him any Medicine; FREDDIE provided Him and when He was about to take Medicine.. DAYA entered inside and rushed to Him after seeing Bandage on His hand and snatch Tablets with...

DAYA (tense): kya hua ABHI...?

ABHIJEET stunned; for a moment He cant get that DAYAA talked to whom; DAYA jerked His hand..

DAYA (again): kya hua..? Dawa kyun Kha rahy ho aur ye hath ko kya hua..? (extreme tense) Chout kesay lagi.. haan..?

ABHIJEET (look at RAJAT, FREDDIE and VIVEK having happiness in their face and say): yaar, Main aur RAJAT Spot say wapis aa rahy thy tou Chota sa Accident ho gaya aur...

DAYA (grabbing His arm and take Him to Rest room with): tou aaram karo; Hospital mein hee ruk jaatay... magar nahi Superman banna hay na; aisa karo (irritative one) ek Ghagra silwa lo; jesay Wo oorh kay ghomta hay...

ABHIJEET tried but bursts a Big Laugh which raise DAYA rash More; He added in Anger...

 DAYA: dekho Boss; zyada hahaha mut karo...chalo Leto (lie him and say) main aata hun...

ABHIJEET lie and after 2/3 minutes Shocked to See RAJAT also with Him; He did the Same with RAJAT and then placed Chair beside ABHIJEET and telling Him...

DAYA: Tum So jao; main abhi yahan hun... parresshan mut ho... main sub Sanbhal lun ga...

ABHIJEET: DAYA; Buht choti sii Chout...

DAYA (voice turn wet and just): Yaar Plz...

ABHIJEET completely Quiets and close His eyes; after few minutes feeling a Soft palm over His forehead pressing and He went to Sleep thinking...

ABHIJEET (thinking): ABHIJEET, ye Idea pehlay kyun Nahi aaya... Aik baar bhi abhi tak ABHI ka Naam nahi liya DAYA nay...

DAYA updating ACP Sir about that; who was Shock as well Happy after feeling the Same Concern for ABHIJEET in His whole body language...

ABHIJEET feeling that DAYA mostly Missing that Invisible ABHI as He did not remember Him; Remind Him even takes His Name so Minimum... DR RAHEEL already told them that there would be a gradually changing coming in that Routine which Team witnessed as mostly now He was with ABHIJEET but Yes Sometime He was taking Invisible ABHI name and showing His presence too...

Next Saturday, ABHIJEET moving Out after Spending time with Him as Both Enjoying a Movie at TV and when He was about to Leave; told DAYA after Seeing Him who was yawning completely...

ABHIJEET: DAYA, So jao... dekho Tum ko kitni Neend aa rahi hay na... Jamaiyyan lay rahy ho...

DAYA: haan Yaar, ABHI aa jayey tou So jaon ga... aaj Us ko HQ mein Us Undercover Mission pr Statement dena hay na... (angry) itni raat ko Bula liya; HQ kay Head ko Australia jana hay aur Un ki raat ki Flight hy...

ABHIJEET look at Him in Shock, His Mind revolving the Conversation between Him and ACP at His cabin Yesterday when He was attaching papers in Files on ACP Sir order with...

ABHJEET: lijyey Sir ho gaya... (giving Files) wesay Aap kahein ja rahy hain kya...?

DAYA just entering at that Time and giving a File to ACP Sir for Signing; ACP Sir Signing on it and Replying ABHIJEET side by side with...

ACP: arry HQ walun nay Raat ko Bulaya hay... Undercover Mission pr Statement deni hay...

ABHIJEET (confuse): raat ko...?

ACP (closing File after Signing it, give it back to DAYA and in Irritative tone): haan, GUPTA ki Flight hay Australia ki Raat 4 bajay aur Usy Hr haal mein Statements chahyey... (DAYA exit and listen) Tumhein bhi shayed chalna paray...

He completely moved out either at today Evening ACP Sir told ABHIJEET that there is No need of ABHIJEET Presence at HQ so He will move alone...

DAYA only heard the half Conversation and its moving in His mind so now He presented that Reason for His ABHI absence... DAYA again to Him...

 DAYA: pata nahi kub tak wahan say Chutti mily...

ABHIJEET (now in irritate tone after seeing DAYA heavy eyes): arry main Betha hun aur Tum... (order) Jao So jao...

DAYA (dunt bother What ABHIJEET said, just look at Him and say): acha Tum ho yahan... chalo Theek hay... Yaar jesay hee ABHIJEET aayey... Mujhy Utha dena...

ABHIJEET (nodded with closing TV and picking things from table and went to Kitchen to Dump them with): acha acha... jao na...

DAYA (moving but then coming back to ABHIJEET who was coming out from Kitchen and say): Yaar Tum jana Nhai aur ABHI kay aany pr Mujhy zarur Utha dena...

ABHIJEET look at Him and went with Him to His room and after sitting over Study Chair, told Him with Sure...

ABHIJEET: Main yahan Betha hun... jub tak ABHIJEET nahi aa jata... Tum befikr ho kr So jao...

DAYA (smiles and lay over Bed with): haan haan, pr Jub Wo aayey tou Mujhy Utha dena, phir Us kay sath Khana bhi tou khana hay...

ABHIJEET (shock): kya... pr abhi Tum nay Meray sath bhi tou Khana khaya hay na...

DAYA (with closing eyes): haan pr ABHI wala Hissa tou bacha kay rakkha hay na...

ABHIJEET (pat on His head with): aye Bhagwaan...

DAYA started laughing with Close eyes but suddenly opened them and looking at ABHIJEET, who feels His gaze and feeling Uncomfortable as He felt that this AYE BHAGWAN term really Confuses DAYA...

DAYA closed His eyes with a slow tone as GOOD NIGHT and changed His direction and after few minutes, ABHIJEET hearing His Snoring Voice... He standups, covered Him with Quilt; increase AC thermostate; closed Lighs and went out from room after pushing door with relaxment...

Yes He was Relax about DAYA Sleep as He used Sedation in His Food Tonight; its Not on DR RAHEEL suggestion but on His own behalf as He feels His Buddy need Sound sleep...

Those heisal rounded Circles around DAYA eyes now turning Darker; ABHIJEET cant understand Why but He feels that His Mind still in Working condition during Sleep so thatswhy He was Restless in His Sleeping state too either with His Invisible ABHIJEET...

He smiles after Putting Off all the Lights of Residence and when trying to Locking the Door, He feels Breeze calling Him outside, He smiles and moved out after leaving the Door opened and not sat over Residence Stairs...

ABHIJEET dipped in His trail of thoughts... Someone occupied the place of his left side quietly... ABHIJEET did not look up and that someone started with...

RAHUL: jub DAYA, Mujhy aur AMAN ko yahan lay aaya tha... DR DAAKH waly case ki wajah say tou AMAN pareshan ho gaya... Us ka Zehn isy qubol he nahi kr pa raha tha, Us nay Mujh say kaha kay ab MOM DAD yahan Kesy aayein gay (ABHIJEET look at Him in shock) (RAHUL added with Sad tone) haan Us kay Dimagh mein najany kub say ye soch ya ihsas hay kay MOM DAD ki Rohein humaray sath rehti hain...

Wo PUNE Uncle kay Ghar bhi isi liyey Aaram say chala jata hay... Reh jata hay kay Us ka khayal hay kay DAD ko wahan ka Raasta aur Uncle Kay Ghar ka address malum hay aur wo MOM ko lay kr wahan aa sakty hain kyunky wo un Kay bhai ka ghar hay... magar ab is New Ghar ka MOM DAD ko Kesy malum hoga... (After a sigh) phir Main nay DAYA say discuss kiya kyunky DAYA nay hee us time Usy deal kiya tha aur sub ko malum hay DAYA say bacchy Buhat jaldi attach ho jaty hain...

DAYA Usy aur Mujhy wahan us purany Ghar mein lay gaya.. wahan AMAN aur DAYA nay MOM DAD ki Rooh say baat ki aur Un ko LORD ki Ijazat sy yahan is waly Ghar mein lay aayey...

He was Quiet after that; ABHIJEET cant understand what type of Reaction He would Show; He knew what RAHUL told Him and His Mind and Heart understanding it Clearly... RAHUL after some time added...

RAHUL: dekho tou is waqayey mein kuch aisa nahi Jo sach ho... pr is mein sirf aik Sach hay... (loving tone) Meray Bhai ki khushi, Us ka Sukun, Itminaan... ABHIJEET agar Main abhi Usy samjhany bethun tou hazarun examples hain Meray pass... yehi nahi khud AMAN bhi Marny kay baad ki haqeeqat ko jaanta hy, samjhta hay... wo 21st century ka Baccha hay... Pr phir bhi Main Usy jhulata nahi... Usy kehta nahi kay wo apny khayalat badly ya Nikal aaye is Bharam sy... Pata hay kyun (ABHIJEET eyes ask Him that KYUN)(RAHUL adds) kyunky kahein na kahein wo is ihsas say Apnay Dil kay Us Khali hissy ko Bhar leta hay... bus... aur yehi Meray liyey sub say zyada many rakhna hy...

(grab His Palm and say) ABHIJEET kabhi kabhi Dukhun ko Kum karny Kay liyey Cheezun ko dhond kay nahi lana parta... kabhi kabhi is Kaam Kay liyey Insaan bhi liyey Jatay hain (Pressed his palm) sochna...

Without further, He left his Place... He knew that ABHIJEET now feeling Guilty but Guilt does not mean to leave all forever... Guilt should only need an Eraser...  Eraser of love,  Relation, Concern, not repeat the mistake, Support, Help, Appreciation, Accreditation and so many things which vanish that Guilt in such a way that the mark would be also Invisible...

He moved inside, closed the Door and entered in His room after 28 days feeling really Calm and Sooth...

Today He first time feels that Humans also attached with Non Living things as well; they have Some attraction with them too; He feels really happy to enter inside; look at the room and His eyes fixed over Bed; Yes His New Bed having Clean Bed sheet and FREDDIE Voice moving around that room...

After almost 15 days back, when DAYA was so much involved with His Invisible ABHIJEET and All especially ABHIJEET feeling that He was doing a Drama just to bring Him back; FREDDIE told Him with little Confusion and Fear when He was doing some work at His desk and DAYA missing from Bureau...

FREDDIE: ABHIJEET Sir, (ABHIJEET say HMMM, still involving in work) (FREDDIE added) Mujhy Aap ko ek Baat batani hay...

ABHIJEET (during working): arry tou bhae bolo na, Main Kaanun say sunta hun FREDDIE...

FREDDIE (embarrass but added): Sir, kal na Main nay DAYA Sir ko Furniture market mein dekha tha...

ABHIJEET (still busy): tou..?

FREDDIE: Sir, wo ek Bed aur wardrob khareed rahy thy...

ABHIJEET finger Tingling and the Sentence messed up which He was Writing; He moved His head up and look into FREDDIE eyes with Question which is the Q for telling further...

FREDDIE (added): Main samjha kisi aur kay liyey Khareed rahy hon gay, jub Main nay poocha tou (his voice turned low and teary) Unhun nay kaha kay ABHIJEET ka Bed toot gaya hay aur Us ki wardrob ka Lock bhi Phasta hay tou isi wajah say Wo ye lenay aayein hain ta kay ABHI ko Surprise day sakein...

ABHIJEET who was looking Him with Mixture of Emotions as He can't get that either its really a Drama or what; He asked after a minute...

ABHIJEET: kitnay ka liya...?

FREDDIE: Sir, Bed tou 50 hazar ka aur Wardrob 4 doors wali li hay tou 30 thousand ki... DAYA Sir ko shayed table bhi leni thi pr Un kay pass Paisay nahi bachy tou Unhun nay nahi li...

ABHIJEET (murmurs): 80 hazar...

FREDDIE: Jee Sir aur is mein Fitting aur Conveyence kay Paisay Included nahi hain...

Today He feels that in which type of Mental trauma His BUGGY going through with that weird Step of ABHIJEET either He knew what kind of a Person His BUGGY is but He Hurt Him Intentionally...

 He really Angry on Himself that why He did not Ignore those Silly reasons; why He was coming against DAYA to take Revenge, giving Him so much Pain; Punishment; why and these so many Why really Shattering Him that much that He takes Protection at wash room with just sitting under open Shower...

His eyes opened with a Stare; His Instincts feeling that Continous Stare from many minutes but now a Spark of Alertness forces His eyes to Open and He saw His Half Soul looking at Him with a Confuse shade over His Face...

ABHIJEET seated in Jerk; He did not remember that When He will coming after that Shower; changed His Cloths and take a Sound Sleep; He standsup hurriedly after seeing that Face and before trying to Clearifying; DAYA say...

DAYA: Main Naha kr aata hun...

ABHIJEET nodded and He left the place; ABHIJEET instantly Freshen up and started to make Breakfast even thinking in His mind about what kind of Explaination He will presented in front of DAYA about that Invisible ABHI... He started thinking aloud as...

ABHIJEET: ufff ye kya Ghalati kr dii... socha tha, Subah hee subah Nikl bhagun ga... pata nahi ab kya hoga; DR RAHEEL tou Buht Gussa karein gay aur DAYA pata nahi wo kya poochy (tense) Us kay Chehray pr kitna Confusion tha... agar kuch garbar...

His Trail of Thoughts stopped with DAYA happy Voice who was coming inside the kitchen with rubbing His hairs with towel as...

DAYA: ahahnnn... kitni mazy ki Khushboo hay... Pata hay Main nay kitni saaray Dino say Omellate Nhai khaya aur Tum...

ABHIJEET totally forgets Everything; He was always Angry when anyone doing such Messy things especially inside kitchen; He started His Scolding without thinking anything with...

ABHIJEET: hazar baar mana kiya hay kay Ye Fazul harkatein mut kiya karein Sahib... magar Nahi... wohi Kitchen mein Towel lay kr, Baal pochtay huay chaly aa rahy hain (angry) acha hay saaray Baal khany mein Gir jayein... ABHI us Khany ko Kha ly aur Baal Us kay Pait mein chala jayey; Us ka Pait phool jayey aur Wo Mar jayey aur Sahab hr ek ko bataty phirein kay Mera Bhai Pait phoolnay kay karan Mar gaya...

DAYA tried to Control but His Loud Laughing voice bring back ABHIJEET into Reality where He feels happy after Hearing that Sweetest laugh while DAYA added...

DAYA (sat on chair after throwing Towel to Sofa with): kya Boss... hahah... Baal khany say bhala koi marta hay...

ABHIJEET (again angry): Pait tou Phool sakta hay na...

DAYA who was taking Bite of Omellate with Fork after taking Plate from ABHIJEET hand started Laughing with...

DAYA: hahahah... pata nahi kahan kahan say ulti seedhi Information lay kr ...

He started Coughing as Bite struck on His throat as He was laughing and talking during eating; ABHIJEET gave Him water and rubbing His back with...

ABHIJEET: bus hahaha karwa lo, baatein karwa lo Sahab say... dus baar kaha hay na kay kahna Khatay huay Bolna Nahi chahyey... 

 DAYA (wink): pr Main tou Nashta kr raha hun na...

ABHIJEET slapped over His head and sat over next chair after taking out Tea from Kitchen counter and started taking it with...

ABHIJEET: bus Bakwas karwa lo...

DAYA did not say anything; He was completely involved in Eating either during the Whole ABHIJEET waited for any Query from Him regarding that Invisible ABHIJEET but taking a Relaxing Sigh when found nothing from DAYA's side... 

DAYA moved Quillas from the same road 3 times, ABHIJEET marked what He wanted but Ignored... When fourth time he did that and stopped the quillas at specific place for few minutes; ABHIJEET irritated so in rash...

ABHIJEET: Kya masla hay DAYA... .

DAYA (moving His eyes balls to that board and say): ye...

ABHIJEET (angry): DAYA, ye Bacchun ka Play Zone hay...

DAYA: koi baat nahi (parked Quillas, opened Passenger door, taken out ABHIJEET with force and after closing the door move with) Bacchun kay Papa bhi Khel sakty hain...

ABHIJEET (tease): kitnay bacchy hain Tumharay...

DAYA (entering and showing kids): Main in Bacchun ka chachu hun... (ABHIJEET smiles and DAYA added) aur Tum kharos mama...

ABHIJEET (convincing): DAYA kitna Bura lug raha hay, yahan sub Bacchy hain aur hum log... dekhna mana kr dein gay ye log...

DAYA showing him so many men's who are there playing with their Kids, driving cars, shooting guns and all... ABHIJEET little convinced as if it's only a Play Zone for kids, Management must stopping those men's who are playing because of their Kids can't able to grab the heavy Guns or moving the cars, so helped them by pressing accelaters even just at least trying to using those money payed for those cards...

DAYA bought Card even Management thought that they come with their kids, DAYA swap after selecting a sports car and giving Card to ABHIJEET after sitting on it...

He was very excited... He comes here with MISHA and He enjoyed that ride a lot but He always wanted to enjoy it with His Bhai...

ABHIJEET few minutes looking His happiness, Excitment to drive that car even He was too much involve, He knew DAYA driving Skills so takes a Sigh after seeing a Kid who was waiting for his turn as...

ABHIJEET (to kid in low tone): bhool Ja beta... Ye Bhaloo ab yahan say Play Zone band honay kay baad hee uthy ga...

Kid can't understand but he was also watching DAYA driving with Enthusiasm...

here ABHIJEET look another Kid who was trying to Shoot at screen but the heavy Gun troubling Him either the shoot too... He lost the game... ABHIJEET grab that Gun, feeling his heaviness, taking aim and without interest Swap the card and started Playing...

He did not think that how much time he played that game which consisted of shooting terrorist who were attacking on a train and making people Hostages...

After so many time, He feels someone place hand over His shoulder so a reflex action, his Aim cant be as Accurate and missed the Terrorest, He was angry on that and turn neck to scold that man and after turning looking Shock and somewhat embarrassed too and heard management low tone after seeing a Mob around him...

Managament Guy: Sir, wo darasal aur bhi log ye game Khelna chah rahy hain aur aap Kafi ghantun say...

ABHIJEET look at his watchman and stunned as he spent Two hours in that, he look at His right side where DAYA also struggling with same situation... Both excuses and went out in complete embarrassment...

At Gate Both look at each one and bursts out a big laugh... They  both are laughing madly and loudly... After some time DAYA managed and say...

DAYA: Chalo boss! khana khilao...

ABHIJEET feeling bulk of happiness, how many days he waits for this CALL from his Buddy, nobody can't understand... He looks at DAYA who face was bright like a moon, he still laughing and the Best thing it did not looking like that there was any roam comes between them... ABHIJEET tease...

ABHIJEET (tease): aby, 4 andun ka Omelette khaya hay Sahab nay...

DAYA (naughty smile): tou do ghanty Gari bhi tou chalai hay...

ABHIJEET punched Him and both moved towards Restaurant in Smile... DAYA gave order mostly of those items which he loves... he told ABHIJEET...

DAYA: Haa... Kitnay Dino baad hum Bahar aayey hain na, kitnay Dino baad Main Bahar ka khana kha raha Hun... Pata hay... Warna main tou Noodles, ready made khana kha kha kr Thak Gaya tha... Kitnay waqt tou main bhooka hee so jata...

ABHIJEET hurts badly, He already knew it after seeing the kitchen today morning where he finds so many noodles packets and some ready made foods wrappers, packets and all...

ABHIJEET wanted to ask him WHY, but somehow he was avoiding to take DAYA on same mental trauma by asking or remaining those weird... he did not want to lose these moments... Moments of joy! cherish, enjoyment...

Both engaged in Meal after placing at their table and after that when DAYA wanted any desert... ABHIJEET told that they will take it later as right now he wanted to take DAYA at his fav spot...

DAYA showing much Excitement... ABHIJEET takes Him the same spot which DAYA discovered and brought him after His Drug Treatment session... DAYA look at that place still with same Mesmerisation he found it First... Without any Que, He started as...

DAYA: pata hay, Main jub bhi yahan aata hun... Mujhy lagta hay main buht sukun mein aa gaya hun... Zindagi kay hangamun say Dur... un saaray Dukhun say Dur Jo kahein na kahein meray Ander bas gaye hain...

(after a minute) ye Dukh bhi Kesy aajeeb hoty hain na... Kahein Jatay hee nahi... (look at ABHIJEET and say) kabhi Akela Nahi chortay... sath sath rehtay hain... bastay hain aur Aadmi kay sath he Mar jatay hain...

ABHIJEET: Rishty bhi tou aisay he hoty hain...?

He wanted to spot his place either it's still there, still with same amount, position... DAYA replied him...

DAYA: pata nahi (smiles) Main nay tou rishty kabhi dekhy nahi... Bus Dukh dekhy hain... 

ABHIJEET (with fear): aur ABHI...?

DAYA (shock): ABHI... wo Rishta thora hay (ABHIJEET missed the Beat, he feels he lost himself in that pure heart, He tried DAYA dunt say anything further, might be He can't bear it) (DAYA added as all prayers are not to be fulfilled) wo tou Main hun...

ABHIJEET look at him without blinking his eyes either he heard right or there must be some connection He missed... Yes might be... How's this possible that a person gives same position to someone else where he stands... DAYA again...

DAYA (loving tone): wo hay tou Main hun... wo nahi tou Main nahi... Rishtun ko tou toura, Jora, banta, jiya jata hay aur ABHI nay tou Mujh ko Khud mein Samait Liya hay (lightly laugh) Kya Tum bhi... Bhala phir wo Rishta Kesy hua... Wo tou Main hee ho gaya na...

Kahein wo baadshah -e- takht nasheen, kahein kasa liyey gada dekha
Yaar ko hum nay ja baja dekha, kabhi fani kabhi wafa dekha...

ABHIJEET Quiets, he does not have words... He just looks the purity... He can't distinguish between what is more open to each one here either this Big Sea, Open Sky or his Bear Heart...

it's really Difficult to take One Name so He postponed comparison yes Comparison which really messed up everything...

Both returned to Residence where ABHIJEET waited that DAYA should say something like OK BYE, THANKS FOR THE DAY and other things but he heard a completely new thing from his mouth...

DAYA: ok ABHI... Good Night...

He went to his room without seeing his Bro whose face flashing many emotions right away... yes He is back in DAYA's Life...

He urgently shared this Happiness to all and when he was updating DR RAHEEL about that, who suggested Him...

DR RAHEEL: nahi ABHIJEET, itni jaldi Mut karo... Usy kal Meray pass Lao... Jub tak Main khud Us say session naka kr lun... Usy fit nahi keh sakta...

ABHIJEET: wo tou DR Main Usy lay aaon ga magar Aap ye bhi tou dekhein kay Us nay...

DR RAHEEL (cutting): Us nay sirf ABHI ko Mehsus nahi kiya Apnay gird... Is say ye kahein say bhi pata nahi chalta kay kya Us nay Tumhein ABHI samjh liya hay... Maan liya hay... Wo jagah, wo maan day diya hay ya Nahi... Zikr na karna ya Mehsus na karna is baat ki Zamanat nahi kay wo HY ya NAHI...

Is HY aur NAHI Kay beech hum nay na khud Jhulna hay ya Usy jhulana hay... Samjhy... Kisi aik point pr aana paray ga... Tum na sirf Usy lay kr aao balkay ACP Sahab, RAHUL, RAJEEV aur Jo log bhi is cheez say waqif hain, Un sub ko lay kr aao, balkay Un sub say Kehna kay Tumhary aur DAYA kay aany say Pehly pohanch jayein... OK...

ABHIJEET (with confuse tone): Jee acha...

DR RAHEEL: tou phir kal ek nai Umeed aur khushi Kay sath Shaam 7 bajay Clinic pr milty hain...

ABHIJEET (low tone): Hope ye Khushi qaim rahy... Bye...

He puts off the call and went to DAYA room who was sleeping like a Kid with opened mouth... ABHIJEET smiles, covered him with quilt and moving out with...

ABHIJEET: ab nahi plz...

Next day, all already at DR RAHEEL clinic before 7 Pm as per ABHIJEET order... today SALUNKHY Sir also joined them with ACP Sir, RAJAT, RAHUL, RAJEEV, FREDDIE and VIVEK...

ABHIJEET bring Him here who was little Confuse but ABHIJEET satisfied Him with that...

ABHIJEET: arry RAJEEV aaj kal Part time yahein beth raha hay... Us say Milna tha... Phone kiya tou kehnay laga yahein aa jao...

DAYA: aur Milna kyun tha...?

ABHIJEET (fumble so say): wo ABHI kay liyey kuch dawayaan leni thi...

DAYA (grab His arm and stopped): kyun Tumhein kya hua..?

ABHIJEET wanted to start dancing... He look at DAYA face who does not ask USY KYA HUA while He is asking TUMHEIN KYA HUA meant He Accepts Him as ABHI... WOW... What a Celebration moment... He tried to relax Him with...

ABHIJEET: Ufff Main bhi kya kya bolay ja raha hun... ABHIMANYU Yaar... KARTIK ka Bhai... Usy kay silsilay mein... Mian nay Tum ko bataya tha na kay Usy Heart Disease diaganosed hua hay tou RAJEEV nay yahan kay kisi DR ka Refrence diya tha...

DAYA nodded in Yes either He did not remember that ABHIJEET discuss this or Not, so jerked His head, went to Reception, tell them about their Presence and after 2 minutes Calling inside...

Here DR RAHEEL already tell the Rest what they will do and at what time... DUO entered and ABHIJEET started to talk either its Difficult but as being a Psychaitrist DR RAHEEL dealing it with ease althouth HEART is completely Not His field...

He looks at DAYA and after a Small Gaze, DAYA body Jerked and He Pauses in His Position with Opening Eyes... ABHIJEET little Tense and DR RAHEEL started...

DR RAHEEL: DAYA, aaj ABHI nahi aay Tumharay sath...?

Both and the Rest Team watching it from Monitors found so many Confusion over DAYA eyes, Yes a Confusion of Understanding Query; DAYA replied...

DAYA: wo kahan say aayey ga... Mujhy tou abhi pata chala hay kay Us kay sath ye Masla hay...

ABHIJEET mouth completely Opened while Team standup in Shock inside another room; DR RAHEEL also looking Worried but He added again...

DR RAHEEL: tou abhi Wo kahan hay..?

DAYA: Mujhy kya malum, ho ga Apnay Ghar pr ya apnay Bhai kay Ghar...

ABHIJEET (murmur): Mery Ghar...

DR RAHEEL: aur ABHIJEET kahan hay...?

DAYA: Meray sath...

ABHIJEET: magar Wo tou chala gaya na...

DAYA standup in a Bit, He was Worrying so much still He was Hyptonise but this Jerk confuses Him a lot... DR RAHEEL tells ABHIJEET to move back and Stopped after a Distance while asking DAYA again...

DR RAHEEL: ohhh, ABHI bhi ja raha hay...

DAYA (in panic extend hand with): kahan..?

DR RAHEEL trying to move but DAYA in panic hit with Chair and come back in Concious.. His hand still in Air; ABHIJEET grabs Him and in a Minute DR RAHEEL signaled on Camera and all coming out with Happy faces and trying Congratulated ABHIJEET who turned ABHI... yes they tried to give that Feeling that Now ABHI is turning to ABHIJEET and ABHIJEET to ABHI...

DAYA still in Confusion; His fingers tangled on ABHIJEET Fingers but He did not move from His place in any Direction... the Happy faces, Voices and all that Scene giving Him so many Confuse Thoughts in His Mind and He cant grab anyone of it Tightly...

ABHIJEET look at His Eyes, His Eyes telling Him so many Unspoken Words which started roaming around DAYA; ABHIJEET step by Step moving ahead, come close to Him and this time without any other thought wraps DAYA body around His Arms; His Fingers started Circular movements on those silky hair scalps and just heard a Teary tone with so many Salty drops as...

DAYA: ABHI Tum jana Nahi... Pakka...

ABHIJEET feels to Dump inside Floor; His Buddy went to that Enclosed shell, Waiting for His Buddy Reply with ASURANCE that He never ever leave Him either any Consequences...

ABHIJEET (soggy tone): Pakka...

He feels His eyes Shed so many Tears on DAYA Shoulder as well just to remind how many time His Half Soul just waited for these 5 Alphabets from His mouth as PAKKA... how much pain He was Bearing in those 30 days and still Living on that Moment... Wait... Wait and Wait...

He feels DAYA body turned Heavy; He changed His look towards Right and DR RAHEEL calling His Staff to Shift DAYA over Stretcher and DR RAHEEL gave Him Injection...

After settling all... Everyone takes Chairs with Happiness; DR RAHEEL after Congratulating them, giving some Postal Care Suggestion as...

 DR RAHEEL: ho sakta hay, shayed kabhi DAYA kuch roz achanak Baatun Baatun mein kuch Odd Behavior day ya achanak ABHI ka Naam lena start kr day... Us waqt Us ka Dihaan bata dein bus... Baat badal dein aur haan Koshish karein kay aisa dobara na ho aur Us kay Zehn pr Bojh Na paray...

He added so many things and after Half an Hour; All moved out after Thanking Doctor and taking Sleepy DAYA...

After reaching at Residence; RAHUL, ABHIJEET, RAJEEV, FREDDIE and VIVEK shifted DAYA to His room and Left the room busying in Chatting, Drinking water, searching something from Fridge...

 ABHIJEET covers DAYA with Quilt after Ruffling His hairs and just Spreading His Thumb over His Eye Circles and moved out; He went inside His room; sat on Couch which DAYA placed at His room and looking at His hands...

His hands turning Blurry and Weavy; He cant get whats Wrong and when trying to Hit them on floor started Crying Loudly; Everyone pause at its place hearing His Painful Crying Voice...

He was Crying over Himself that How much Selfish He is... His BUGGY just Wait for only a SURETY REPLY and He takes so much time for this; hang Him on a Rope of Waiting from almost 43 thousand and 200 hundard minutes...

Cant anyone believe He who gives so many Bhashan on Friendship, so many times showing His Care, Concern and Love towards DAYA from His Gestures leave Him in that Painful condition where He hanged such long time just for a Word from His Mouth... only for One Word as PAKKA...

He cant Understand How He... How many time His Buddy wanted a Drop of Water, a Bite of Food, a Fresh air for Breath just to extend that waiting which His Bhai gave Him as a Punishment...

How many time His Buddy wanted a Light; a ray; a glow just to Live that Hope in His Heart that His Pal come back and taken Him out from that Scary Darkness...

How many seconds He calls Him; a Voice; a tone; a murmur or a Whisper that His Friend come and pick that Waiting Stone from His Shoulder...

He cant get a Weight of that wait which His BUGGY bore in these 30 days and just Wait to vanish that WAIT WEIGHT, He started to Live His life with the Reason of that WAIT, Yes that Imaginary ABHI...

Someone sitting beside Him and wraps him around His arms and rubbing His palms over His arms; did not say any word and with that Rubbing, the Crying Figure does not know when He placed his head on that Chest...

When His Crying turned to Weeping; Someone presented Him a Glass of Water, He grabbed it and started Drinking either did not feel a minute Gap in that Soothing Rubbing... During drinking a statement raised...

RAJEEV: yaar Tum na DAYA ki Shadi karwa do...

A small smile comes over those Lips which are still wet with Salty Drops; He counterattack after returned the Water glass to RAHUL with...

ABHIJEET: Khud kyun Nhai kr letay..?  

RAJEEV (with sigh): haaa... aik baar Jawani mein Najomi ko hath dikhaya tha... Us nay bola Tumhari Do Shadiyaan hon gi... Mujhy itna Gussa carha kay Gussay mein keh diya, Aik bhi Nhai karun ga... bus tab say main Us najoomi ko Dhoond raha hun ta kay apnay alfaaz wapis lay sakun...

Everyone started laughing including ABHIJEET... they all started to pull each one leg regarding How much Girls are behind them; VIVEK takes Advantage of His Looks, while RAHUL about his Smartness; RAJEEV takes His Job while RAJAT His Coolness; FREDDIE was Really Pitty as He has so many Incidents like this but He knew that there are so many people who will playing Betryer role for Him in Future and gives all the News to His Wife so except taking Sad Sighs, He does not do anything...

Here ACP Sir looking all Bright faces and Enjoying their Efforts to Chill that Teary figure; they don't have any Relations with each other but they all are joined with a Strong Bond which does not need any Reason of Relations...

SALUNKHY Sir looking all Faces in Silence but He knew the Happiest Person in this room who is ABHIJEET... No... He is none other than ACP PRADYUMAN... How much a Father feeling happiness to wraps His Son around His arms and gives Him Sooth... Nobody count that happiness because of No invention of such Measuring Device...

ABHIJEET after sometime started to tell Everyone what DR RAHEEL told about DAYA for His Postal care as He completely Forgets that all were there with Him... ACP Sir started still rubbing His Son arm with...

ACP: ABHIJEET, Tumharay Ghar ki Chabi kahan hay...?

ABHIJEET gave Him the Key from His Pocket; He gave it to VIVEK and telling Him resuming His work of Rubbing as...

ACP: VIVEK, ABHIJEET ka Bedroom Saman samait Lock kr kay; saaray Home appliences bhi Switch off kr kay wahein rakh dena aur Us room ko Lock kr kay Chabi FREDDIE ko day dena (to FREDDIE) FREDDIE koi achay Kirayedaar dhondo ABHIJEET kay Ghar kay liyey; Zyada Bari Family Na ho aur Rent bhi Affordable batana...

ABHIJEET: pr Sir, Mujhy Paisun ki Zarurat Nai hay...

ACP: Chairity mein day dena... (give it a Visiting card having Account number) ye Aik account, is Ghar kay Landlord ka hay; Tum log bus is mein hr maheeny Rent jama karwatay rehna...

ABHIJEET (taking it with): Jee Sir...

ACP feeling His Body became Drowsy and if He sat there like this; ABHIJEET must Sleeps in His arms so now Ordering...

ACP: chalo ab Hum chaltay hain... (ABHIJEET standup) (ACP added) Tum bhi aaram karo (strong) kuch bhi Bekaar Sochy bina.. (ABHIJEET headdown) (ACP adds) kal Bureau mein miltay hain...

Everyone Leaving the Residence with Giving Support to ABHIJEET who after Smile; closed the Residence; checked His Bear again; puts off the Lights and went to His Room for taking a Sound Sleep and Thanking LORD to give such Lovely and caring people around Him...

Here one by one every one moved out in Different Vehicles; SALUNKHY Sir with ACP Sir in His Innova at back Seat... look at ACP Bright Happy face; grab His palm and ask...

SALUNKHY: Khush ho...

ACP (pressed palm): Buht...

A Big smiles coming over Both faces and SALUNKHY wraps His Buddy in His Soothing Shell... its really one of the Happiest day of His Friend Life...

RAJAT dropped all His Team mates and RAJEEV; they really made a Nice connection between each other and really Enjoying these moments...

RAHUL went to his House and sat over Sofa; AMAN sleeping during watching Movie; so closed TV; place His Head over His lap and started Ruffling His hairs and just thought BROTHER IS GEM OF LIFE...

SALUNKHY Sir thinking after seeing Happy Glowing face of His Buddy that Life is only based on STEPS... Yes DAYA takes Steps in backword direction to Protects His Buddy from that Pain... ABHIJEET takes Steps in Forwards direction to Asure His Bhai that He is with Him in every Hard and Happy moment and ACP takes Steps to Combined those Steps with his Unexpected Step... Yes He purchased that Residence; the Power of Attorny on DUO name and it Safe at SALUNKHY House; He never say this so DUO as usual deposited Rent at Account...

Sometime Change in Steps messing up the Life and sometime change in those messing steps makeup the Life...!!!


 

 

NOTE: the basic Concept of this Story is Dissociative identity disorder...

Dissociative identity disorder is characterized by the presence of two or more distinct or split identities or personality states that continually have power over the person's behavior.

The "alters" or different identities have their own age, sex, or race. Each has his or her own postures, gestures, and distinct way of talking. Sometimes the alters are imaginary people; sometimes Real; Sometimes they are animals. As each personality reveals itself and controls the individuals' behavior and thoughts, it's called "switching." Switching can take seconds to minutes to days. When under hypnosis, the person's different "alters" or identities may be very responsive to the therapist's requests.

Along with the dissociation and multiple or split personalities, people with dissociative disorders may experience any of the following symptoms:

Depression

Mood swings

Suicidal tendencies

Sleep disorders (insomnia, night terrors, and sleep walking)

Anxiety, panic attacks, and phobias (flashbacks, reactions to stimuli or "triggers")

Alcohol and drug abuse

Compulsions and rituals

Psychotic-like symptoms (including auditory and visual hallucinations)

Eating disorders

I dunt understand, why Some Readers thought, its YSPT... I already included Medication and I m Not using this Idea in any of My Story...

DARAAR mein bhi DUO ko Plan pata nahi tha... DARKEST HOURS mein bhi Team DAYA Sir kay Plan ko nahi janti thi, isi tarah TRUTH BEHIND SCENE mein bhi Plan sirf IB and DAYA Sir ko malum tha... so why  all think about it...

I just raise that its Better that U trying to take STEPS after telling it to Other One; when U take any Step Silently; it creates Much Trouble for the Person especially those STEPS which are Necessarily...

Important Note: So many Readers (Active or Silent) Tensed about how will they read My Stories (if I will write or Post); its so much easy...

U can easily access to all STORY WRITERS Stories from this Link made by DEBA...


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Posted: 9 years ago
Thank you for completing this story. 
Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome story GD.
I connected very well with the story though my image of Daya is different from yours...
Very well written and nice plot...

Yeh chocolate chip ice cream ka kya chakkar hai? Mera fav bhee hai, I felt so happy on reading those lines...

I thought u wd take reference of Tom n jerry scene from your old story xxx hours. Sorry don't remember the number part.

Scene where they burst out after playing in kids park was just the most cute scene 😊  
Posted: 9 years ago
1st part done!!
Beautiful, beautiful! πŸ‘ Every scene of emotions portrayed so perfectly. The scene where Dr. Rajeev trreats ABHI and ABHIJEET witnesses it all. Just too perfect.. Though Rahul had a subtle role here, it was very good. Dr. Raheel's character is well portrayed. 

Great job! Will read next part and comment soon πŸ˜ƒ

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