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Yuvreen FF: Two is better than one <3 updated part 5 on page 8, 9 - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
"oyye , shut up i dont need your expert advises , chalo futo yahanse" i grinned i thought i have won the battle , par he looked at me and made a face jaise me kisi kachare ke dibbe me paida hui hun , i was about to reply but woh apni cheeteh jaisi tango ko lekar chala bhi gaya ,


calm down suvi , calm down , u have better things to do ,
i called the waiter and asked where i can meet mr.singh , .
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., i knocked on the door of mr.singh's cabin ,
"may i come in sir"
"yes you can"
huh yeh awaz jani pahchani si kyun lag rai hai?
i entered the cabin aur mujhe 440 ka jhatka laga ,
"tum ?"
"tu?"
omg , there he was , that guy who insulted me ,
"tum yahan kya kar rahe ho?"
"excuse me , yeh meri cabin hai , tum yahan kya kar rahi hai "
iska matlb yeh mr.yuvraj hai?
i stood there dumbfounded , i was in need of this job aur mera pahla impression hi itna bura tha ,
inni badi chopsy , woh bhi aajke din?
precap:
"tumse acchi toh bakri gaa sakti hai"
"o realy toh apne iss restaurant me bkriyon ko kyun nahi rakhte"

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Posted: 9 years ago
sorry friends for inna bada wait , m really sowry aur my grammar is poor , so agar galati hui toh samhallena , i knw its very chutku update , par aajseme har do din me update karungi , like and comment if u like this , all types of comments are welcomed , love u all , aur ff ka name kal post kar dungi
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Posted: 9 years ago
reswa
dariyo matt spu. Jdi ka res bi ata hi hoga. Tradition jo hai.
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Posted: 9 years ago
🀣 πŸ€£ i cant stop πŸ˜†... oye mast update cont sooon 
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Posted: 9 years ago

bwahahahaa...kya comedy hai! :D

waah spruha di...awesum start...loved it totally...ab toh jaldi update kariye...

Acha toh yeh RomEdy hai...romance+comedy...waah very gud veru gud...interesting!!!

aur names se I choose friends by chance,lovers by destiny...

superb!! continue soon...

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Posted: 9 years ago
wonderfully written Spruha..superb!!⭐️
That too on phone.😲.wow..gotta give you quite a bit of credit for that too..😊
It was super funny..loved it..πŸ˜ƒcontinue continue continue.πŸ˜ƒ.πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 9 years ago
Jerry u cracked me up wid ur dialogues 🀣

mooto, bakra... Pata ni kya kya, ambuja cement, cheetah jaisi tange 🀣

awesome update jerry...

@manu: dekh puttar i break da res tradition πŸ˜†
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Posted: 9 years ago
Jerry u cracked me up wid ur dialogues 🀣

mooto, bakra... Pata ni kya kya, ambuja cement, cheetah jaisi tange 🀣
jerry ur grammar is very fine taleast mere so to better hai

awesome update jerry...

@manu: dekh puttar i break da res tradition πŸ˜†
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part 3
Gannuji ,bacha lo
i said in my mind , he looked like a evil lauki,
kuch to bol suvi, kuch bol
"i am sorry sir"
"waah beti, bhut chalakh hai tu , pahle kya kya bola aur ab sir pe agayi"
"dekho , i am not like this, and me yahan interview dene aayi thi, woh to me"
"me kya"
"me ..."
"me me me , tujhse accha toh bakri gati hai"
"ohh really , toh apne iss restaurent me bakriyonko kyun nahi rakhte , gadhe kahike"
SUVI YEH TUNE KYA KIA
ohh teri
he was angry, dekh to aise raha tha jaise kisi pagal kutte ne kata ho
"i am sorry"
"get out"
"lekin"
"get the hell out of here"
i didn't wasted the time
koi itna rude bhi kaise ho sakta hai
i looked at him again if he change his mind, but nothing happened , a tear slipped from my eye


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Posted: 9 years ago
Yuvraj's pov :
i wanted to stop her but she ran away , seeing that tears, i felt guilty ,
i didn't want to see her like that, she was beautifull
janede yaar , thodi der me thik hojayegi
i tried to convince myself , but it was getting in my head again and again that
i banged my fist on table ,
"sir , sir bahar chaliye"
waiter came to me and started hypering
"arre kya hua?"
"koi ladaki guitar leke khadi hai kahti hai gana ganewali hai
maine usse samajhane ki bhut koshish ki sir par woh manati hi nahi
ab aap hi kuch kijiye"
"thik hai thik hai chalo"
I came outside to get shocked
she was there, she was looking so cute holding guitar ,
i stayed there still ,
i didn't know what to do

"meri baat me tera jikr sada
meri yaad me teri fikr sada"
as she started singing a shiver went through my body ,
"me joh bhi hun tum hi to ho
mujhe tumse mili apni ada"
her voice was so magical , it forced me to close my eyes and listen her sweet words ,
"kyunki tum hi ho tum hi ho meri ashiqui ab tum hi ho"