Fought For Ur Soul..(ar ff) part ~ 16 updated 28/5/2015 - Page 17

Originally posted by: Aayu-loveKaJen-

itna fast track par bhaga diya tune toh diks...

ek sal aage...

last was that armaan ko milne jaati hain ridhima aur aab ek saal...anji and atul ko maar diya ... itna lamba jump... 

fats track.. yaar vaise hi mn kia...😉😉

bt dont wory in upcuming updates sab set kruing.. n lots of flashbacks...

Originally posted by: megha_kajen

abbey kyaa kiyaa yehh... ek saal a age kar diyaa...

sab itna confusing hai...
aur anjie ko maar diyaa...

jaldi upd8 kar mahnnn...
tu bhi naa

yo yo bs ek sal ageee...!!!

chill baby apki confution jldi se solve hogi..

is story main sab ko marne wali hn
ek bar toh AR bhi..
hahahaha...

Originally posted by: seyacandyfloss

Finally.. ek part aa hi gaya.. ! How much did I wait for this! Dude! where were you?

Anyways, now that you're back, we can expect updates sooner, right?

Coming to the part, yes I'm confused with Armaan and Ayaan's death.. But other things were all written beautifully :) Good one yaar 👏

Take care.. 

-SeyaCandyfloss

i was bsy with my examz yaarrr...
yup u guys can..😆😆

for the confution do read note b4 the part..!!!

thanks dear...😊

Originally posted by: palakajenian

oye ai ki kitta
sabse pehle to achanak yeh ridhz or armaan ka college flashback dikha diya

ar ka flash back for AR moments yaarr.. kahin toh dono ko dikhana tha.. so that u dont miss armaan

jitna mujhe yaad h last part mein ridhz armaan ko milne gyi thi
but yahan story kuch alag h

thoda sa twist dalne ko mn kia na mera...!!!

anji ko mar diya , or one year ka leap
mujhe kuch samajh nah araha

chill baby just a few upcoming updates main sara kuch set krungi... Sari guthian sulja duni...

or yeh tu baar baar har kisi ko maarti kyn ja rhi h
pehle atul , phir pari phir sapna phir ayaan or ab anji oh khuni or kitno ko maregi
had h yaar

is story sabhi marenge ek ek bar.. hahahah

anyways vo starting ka flashback bohot cute or romantic tha i love it

islie toh dala vo part...😉

but uske baad mujhe kuch samajh nah aya
so u better clear all this in next part
yes maam sab clear hogaaa

replies in red

note..  ok guys sabse pehle main thoda sa brief kuch btana chati hn.. regarding doubts
armaan - he is nt exaclty dead.. uski atma (soul evils ke kabze main hai
ayaan - so that ridhima ka re birth ho sake he sacrified his life n apni powers ridhima main trasfer ki ayaan ne..
kunki jb armaan ka soul capture hua tha ustm ridhima died..
atul anji ka upcuning parts main pta chalega.. unki death ridhima ko is new birth main bachte hue hue..

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PART ~ 16

Shilpa : ridhima come lets have lunch.. Kitna time hogya ek sath khana khaye.. Islie maine n sid ne bahar lawn main lunch ke arrangements kie hai..

Ridhima : mujhe bhok nahi hai tum log khalo..

Shilpa : aise nahi chalega.. Kitni week ho gyi hai tu..

Ridhima: maine kaha na mujhe nahi khana..

Sid : ok thik hai khana mt pr hmne compnay dene ke lie hi chal lo..

Ridhima : sid plz dont force me..

Sid : enough ridhima.. Tum smj kyu nahi rahi ho.. Istarah apne ap ko kmre main lock krne se kya hoga.. Tumhare na khane se bumi pari ya toh atul mamu vapis nahi ayengi.. Kuch thik nahi hoga..  vo log sirf tumhe protect krte hue hua.. us waqt tu ek choti bachi thi jb Atul mamu ki death bhi tumhe bachate hue tumhe is bare main tb kuch nahi pta tha N  pari that time u did nt even knew pari was there jb agg lgi thi... Balki tum is situation ko or bigad rahi ho..

Shilpa : sid calm down..

Sid : nahi.shilpa.. Aj nahi.. Aj main bolunga.. Sab mujhe chota bolke chup krvadete hai..
Ridhima listen to me.. Ye jo tumhare ander guilt hai ki sab tumhare krn hua hai.. Haan its true.. Kunki tum strong nahi ho..

Shilpa : sid ye tum..

Sid : shipla i said let me speek.. So plz..
Agar ridhima tum kudh ko protect kr pti toh ye sab na hota.. Ayan bhai ne apni life sacrifice ki taki tumhare soul ko evils caputre na kr saken.. N u are the only source jo armu se contact kr sakta once u are fully trained.. Bumi.. Kitna try kia unhone tumhe train krne ka pr tumhe smj nahi aya..
Bt yes ye mt sochna ki unhone tumhe bachaya hai coz of love or something.. Unhone bachaya hai beatian ki daughter in law ko.. Hm beatians ko bachpan se yahi sikhaya jta hai n we have in our blood sabhi relations se upar humare lie hai humara clan humanity n powers jo hmne humare ancestors se virasat main mili hai unki raksha krna hmare kie 1 st n fore most priority hai...

Ye baat ayan bhai itni choti umar main smj gye the tum kyu nahi smj sakti..

Armu ne ek aise insan se pyar kia jo shayad unke layak nahi hai.. Jo sab se jda apne ap se pyar krte hai.. Kahin kahin unhe lgta tha tum fight nahi kr paogi.. Islie shayad unhone fight pr jne se pehle tumse promise lia.. Hm sabhi pgl the jo ue soch bhete ki tum ldogi unke lie..

Ab se tumhe koi nahi kahega trainig ke lie.. Hm unhe bachane ka koi or tareka nikal lenge.. Bs ek last help kr dena humari.. Jst stay within security limits.. Kunki tumhara soul ke bina evil's armu ki powers ka mis use nahi kr sakte...

Shilpa chalo yaha se.. Let her be.. Hmne hi kuch or krna hoga...

Shilpa : bt sid.. Yahi ek rasta hai..

Sid : rasta nahi hai toh hm byange.. Or late nahi krsakte hm..

Shilpa tried to protest bt sid puled her with himself...

Ridhima was heart broken... Sids words were ringing in her ears again n again..

Was she really that wk.. Even armaan did nt trust her..??
Was she soo selfish.. She was scared to put her life in danger during fight..??
Was she nt a true betaian d.i.l she broke the oth that she took wen she was honored with crown..??
Did she really loved armaan.. She is nt able to fight for him..??
Was she really dumb.. She could nt understand wat all wanted to make her realise.. Its nt her love story.. Is a fight against evil..??

FLASH BACK...!!!
**one month ago**

After death of sapna evils were now confident about their prey "ridhima". From past 11 months they were working on thier powers n gatherimg sources to caputure ridhima's soul..!!

Ridhima n shilpa were on thier daily routine of practice.. They had a perfect schedule that begun with early morning yoga.. Gymnatics.. Followed by phycical fightung techiniques...
To col down thier body they did medidation..
And With a healhty breakfast tgey were ready to go to their colage.. After a hectice colage, asinments n study.. Later at night It was time for them to learn mantars.. To exicute thier powers...!!

From last 11 mnths their live was going smothly.. Every pasing day.. Ridhima shed less tears n became more determinant to bring back armaan...
They had least time to dicus any other thing accept their training..

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Bt their fate was nt on their side...

today was the day wen all their powers n plans of evils were to be exicuted.. Another dark day in history of betians.. Another fight.. Another death.. More destruction

Ridhima n shilpa were in colage wen shilpa felt some strange aura around her self.. She tried to call sid n anji.. Bt both of them were bsy.. Anji in a meting n sid in a seminar...  that aura wqs growing stronger n stronger with evry pasing second..

Shilpa was nt sure about her gut feling.. Bt something was tgere for sure.. So she decided to tale ridhima away...

Shilpa held ridhima's hand n asked her to folow without making any noice... Ridhima was aware if shilpa is doing something there must be a solid reason.. Shilpa made ridhima to sit in pasenger side n she herself jumped to the driver seat of their car...

Before starting the car.. Shilpa said some mnta made a wall srounding  her n ridhima's aura.. So as to stop the evils till they rrach a safer place away from the city...
She drove as fast as she could..

Shilpa tried her level best to contact sid n anji bt every time the phone cal disconted...

Shilpa headed towards the jungle n stop at a old building in deep jungle... As per intructions from anji wen ever such situation arise..

Phone networks were nt available in jungle soo the only option left with them was to use the old times technique.. Mind to mind communication.. It was posible betwen the two soul mates.. So shila decided to try n comunicate with sid... This trchnique reqired lage amt of concentration n practice..

Ridhima : shilpa koi contact hua di ya sid se...

Shilpa : nahi ridz.. Yahan signal nahi hai..

Ridhima : kaise baat kren unse..

Shilpa : ek rasta hai..

Ridhima : kya..

Shilpa : mind comunication..

Ridhima : pr abhi tk toh di ne hmne ye nahi btaya hai...

Shilpa : technique pta hai mujhe...lst wk main or sid party pr gye the sid ne mere sath baat ki tgi n next day maine iske bare pucha tha..

Ridhima : are u sure u can do it...

Shilpa : i can try..

Ridhima : shilpa dhayan se.. Rember di ne kahan tha mntra main ek glt word can lead to any disatour..

Shilpa : i know ridz bt we have no other option.. Hm dono der tk un se akele nahi bach sakte..

Ridhima : go for it shilpa..

Shilpa sat on floor.. Closed her eyes n started to chant a mntra.. N rembered her n sid happy moments...

After 5 mins she felt some conection..

Shilpa : sid.. Sid can u hear mee.. Sid plz mere baat sun.. Sidd.. Jwab do.. Its urgent... Siddd

Sid was siting in a seminar.. Felt as if shilpa was calling her.. He loked around bt shilpa was nt aroumd... He felt as if her was halusinating shilpa.. Coz he was missing her from 2 days.. Coz of the seminar he has nt shilpa..

Bt then.. He heard fear n shilpa's voice...

Sid for a while was confused.. Bt then he realised.. That shilpa was trying to comunicate..

superb part dikss jaaan...
mazaa aa gaya...
short tha... but awsume tha...
really loved it...

an toh aage read karne ka wait ni hota..
plsss jaldi update diyo...

muaahhh :*
luv u ❤️

awesome part diksss
loved loved sid outburst yaar kya insult ki ridhz hahaha
sorry but mujhe aise scenes bohot ache lagte h i just loved
actually she need a piece of mind
so to now anjy death scene show karegi tu khuni
zyada dreadful mat dikhayo i don't want to cry
now eagerly waiting for next part its really interesting
hmmm ek or baat yaar vo ar ki meet bhi dikha leap se pehle vali
tune bas bta ke chod diya
vo scene bohot best hoga usmein thoda emotion daal nd it will be the best scene yaar ar ek dusre se itnw saalon baad milega wow or tu itna interesting scene cut kardiya or leap kardiya bas mujhe vo scene chahiye mujhe nah pta *pout*
anyways next part bhi jaldi chahiye mujhe
ok bye tc
muahhh