Hamsafar; FF on RaBir Last Part (6) Updated - Page 6

Originally posted by: AnjaliPunia

u ended it i m angry i ws expecting it to be lng i just hope u cme back with another

Originally posted by: -Eris-

Wow u finally decided to try your hand on a romantic piece , am so happy 🤗 . Hee hee daily updates s also a bonus for us !! Love the setting cant wait to read what happens on this trip n yeah I really wanna see how Kabir and Dholu react to each other . I hope we get scenes in ur FF even though useless CV s wont do it 

Originally posted by: ZenerDiode

oh grr i missed this .res

Originally posted by: bollyfood

Khatam to Hona hi hei, hum sub ko.

Too much spirituality daala kya? Chod do. Aastha channel off.

Originally posted by: AnjaliPunia

spirituality aastha !!? i m a bit of fool wt did u mean by this ...mind clearing?

Originally posted by: cj-the-greatest

It was a pleasure reading this story. I personally liked the way u incorporated dolu into this. The characters were also very true to themselves. I loved it. I wish it were longer though. Hopefully u will write more. I think u should write a fanfic to portray their married life, I know its still far away in the show. But I wud love to read something like that. May be a One-shot..

Originally posted by: bollyfood

Is my understanding correct?Aastha is a channel devoted to spirituality.

Mei to phokat ka philosophy de rahi thi. (All of us have to go, someday). It went over the heads. Never mind.🤣