Originally posted by MayurChan
Hello Ambreen , 😊
Well Iam not new to your work but commenting here is new for me... 😳
So directly starting from update 5 a,b,c...😛
This was a very wonderful , well written , long & awesome part yet it turned painful at the end... 😭
The first part was wonderful, the Dilshaad & Asad's convo...was nice...and I really felt like Dilshaad is helpless in this case as she can't do anything to help her children...
No words about the WITCH PLEASE.. 😡 😡 😡
Then Asad & Zoya's moments , their conversation , Zoya's tears & Asad's fears...their confession and Asad's resolve to make everything right & Zoya's reluctance in giving in already...were perfectly & flawlessly potrayed.. 👏
Like ASYA , I also started to feel like everything is turning out fine...but then the title at the start of this chapt kept nagging me...but then it showed its entry...and then we had again a misunderstanding neatly constructed by WITCH.😡 making Zoya the scapegoat and Asad being the only accused , blamed , and the most destroyed in all of them...🤢
I just wish the promises the put in that week the stood up to that...and Zoya doesn't leave India or K.V but still be out of Asad's room and as now i guess Dilshaad will also have a faint idea about Zoya's illness and weak health...i seriously want her take matters into her hand... 😊
How Weird may I sound...but I felt more for Asad...everytime...because he was always a prey to Kitchen & Women's politics & cruel games...
Brilliant Chapts... 👏
Continue soon... 😃
And P.M me if possible... 😳
Hey there 😳
I hope you're well and fine and I want to thank you sincerely for your beautiful comments ❤️
I simply like it when a silent reader breaks their silence. I enjoy reading my silent reader's reaction's to my writing.
I have to agree with you that Dilshaad feels pretty helpless at the moment, but that will change soon. At this stage she feels interfering in Asad and Zoya's relationship would be inappropriate, they are both quite raw at this moment, they need to figure things out for themselves. But saying that Dilshaad will definitely be there for them as soon as they trust her and open up to her.
Asad and Zoya are in the process of mending their relationship, as you rightly acknowledged during their talk that it was going to be a bumpy road. Asad and Zoya are like chalk and cheese but eventually they'll work things out.
Zoya isn't leaving India any time soon, she can't live without Asad, but for now she is leaving Asad but not K.V. Asad needs to live up to his promises.
Dilshaad has noticed Zoya's staggered and heavy walk the night she saw an upset Zoya retiring to her room, so she has some suspicion there ... hence the pressure to bring in the family doctor. She has also noticed how Asad always caresses Zoya stomach in part 4, and his accusation of being a bad mother hasn't gone unnoticed.
The storm will calm down but each time their happiness will be short lived.
I have to agree, although I don't respect what Asad had said to Zoya about being a bad mother, maybe Zoya was a little too harsh with the slap and all, I do however agree with you that he is caught up between all the women in the house, he is prey to both Zoya's and Tanveer's cruel intentions.
Thank you for your positive comments, I enjoyed reading it.
I will PM you the next time I update. 😃
Love,
Ambreen aka Fatima 🤗
