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Posted: 19 April 2014 at 3:06am | IP Logged
awesome...
really loved it
keep writing such good stuffsThumbs Up

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Posted: 19 April 2014 at 3:18am | IP Logged
awesome
beautifully writen

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Posted: 19 April 2014 at 3:21am | IP Logged
awesome concept
n story was also mind blowing

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Posted: 19 April 2014 at 4:36am | IP Logged
Mind blowing
I love it

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Posted: 19 April 2014 at 5:18am | IP Logged
The OS seemed so perfect to me. 
It of course, had its own flaws n errors, but I guess thats what made it shine. 
The girl was of course heart broken, but what made her shine and the way it was knitted together are the pros of the story. Well, the main con of this story that I didn't like was that she'd move on that easily? After all moving on is the hardest thing to do. You could have written about her inner mind n feelings to make this a bit more look like reality. Otherwise, the OS was amazing. <33 
Sorry if you felt my comment, rude. It wasnt meant to be rude, just honest. Smile Sorry, again. 

Coming to the Author's Note: 
I wish you n your friend all the best of luck in your life ahead. I thank your best friend for bringing out the real n confident you, and also, for giving me my confident gaarlfraand Approve

And you know I love you, right? <33

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Posted: 19 April 2014 at 5:20am | IP Logged
Hey
I hav not read it
Msg me n remind me

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Posted: 19 April 2014 at 5:40am | IP Logged
speechless..!!

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Posted: 19 April 2014 at 5:45am | IP Logged

dear deep,
a very thanks 2 ur sweet best frnd...Clap who gav us a such bubbly bakbak Embarrassed jiski me fan hu...i  luv evrythng written by u...n sumtymes aftr readin i felt dat u wrote evrything which cums in our heart normally...LOLLOL n mny tyms i praised ur quality too TongueTongue bcz very few people has a talent lyk dat...acc. 2 me dat girl s a angel fr u ...u knw wat...ur story reminds me my lyf...i ws too a shy girl ...m still too bt nt lyk before...bt lyk ur story  situations n my frnds made me strong 2 fac d probs...2 stand fr myself n fac dose people who thinks m nerd...

fr story-
awesum story EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

 But to his surprise, she didn't even saw him. She pass him like he was never there.

dis line ws d best l9 fr me in d story...ClapClap wo kehte hei na jiski jitni care karo utna bhav khata... LOLLOL bs 1 bar apne mind ko convience kr liye phir to dusre ki band baja hi sakte Big smile LOLLOL luking forward 2 read more sumthin written lyk dat...EmbarrassedEmbarrassed...
ur story ws jus perfect...it looks lyk dere s sumwhere ur story n inner feelings too...awesum os Thumbs Up...
- priyu Embarrassed


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