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..Deepkriti.. IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 18 April 2014 at 7:09pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ...Sanyukta...

First of all...
This itna bada os isn't a drabble...
Didu...you wanna write this from the heart...isliye flaws are coming..which aren't good..
Only if you want..I'll point them out...coz you know,flaws are unavoidable if you talk bout sum1's life..
Tell me if you want those pointed out..Smile

See..what am I doing in mid of reading...Stern Smile

ya please do.
but stating the fact that noone is perfect, I would love to keep it with flaws. But I wanna know your opinion isliye tell me
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Posted: 18 April 2014 at 7:45pm | IP Logged
FINALLY again u r here
Not bad actually u did a fantastic job Tongue Tongue
Too good , yr every writing makes me smile
I would love to read yr these stories
Yes its not 4 taarey , but I liked them
Thanks 4 pm

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Posted: 18 April 2014 at 8:33pm | IP Logged
nice i like it 

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Posted: 18 April 2014 at 8:51pm | IP Logged
wow i must say its a wonderful thaught, reading ur small note above remind me of my past, i was also a shy, scilent girl, i never used to talk to anyone even d girls, i always occupied a small coner of my classroom all alone in one bench, bt d truth is dat i was never a persn lik dat, well smtimes we change due to sm person and smtimes emotions and situvations make us change, as ur stry above situvation chand me bt d only diff is dat it was nt a love relatn bt a friend i mean d one who actd to be my frnd broke my trust cmpltly, it was really a hell of a time in my life, bt frm d past 2 years i hv changed cmpletly into a cnfidnt girl, a happy go luck girl, which gave me a huge family of friendz, nw m a gud frnd to all nw im nt shy to talk to boys, nw i hv d guts to reject any proposals on to der faces without getting taunged.anyway im luking frward fr reading mr update soon.. : )

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Posted: 18 April 2014 at 10:29pm | IP Logged
so beautiful
luved it

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Posted: 18 April 2014 at 11:23pm | IP Logged
Awesome update...

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Posted: 18 April 2014 at 11:25pm | IP Logged
Awesome 
luved it

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Posted: 18 April 2014 at 11:36pm | IP Logged
awesome...
loved it...
thanks for d pm...

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