#2 virman ff: journey of life season2 PT 36 PG 143 (27 Oct 2014) *NEW* - Page 6

Hashhh my baby is alright...warna teri toh aaj khair nahi thi...huh

somebody pls tell manvi ''u stupid girl, u r in love''...baki toh mast sunaya ha virat ko, achha hua meri beti ko rulaya na...huh...waise bhi mens r born to listen the womens :p nasib me hi likhawake ate he apne...poor they

wa bhai wa kya dream tha...hakikat me bhi bohot jald badal jayega...

Cont soon soon soon

Shivali that is mind blowing update but I'm ittle confuse she is dreaming that i get it but the phone was also dream or not????
otherwise I loved the update
waiting for next part
try to update soon. thank u so much for the PM

take care Tisha

thx for pm
nice upt cnt soon

Lovely...
Felt bad for meethi
N virat oh god bring him.back soon
N that dream was superb
Waiting to turn it in reality

lovely shiv i imagined the whole scene n convo n meethi woke me up :P

continue sooon n plz shiv use some other colur  black aur red would  be more fascinating reading it only if u like thanku n love u

Hey firstly congo for the 2nd thread. I must say ths story is gng fab day by day. M jst waiting for meethi real mom n her whole drama. Firstly I thought u will brng her n thn manvi will aware of her feelings but knw it seems u hv another plan. Plzz do cont fast. Waiting for another part n the pm

congrats for 2nd thread
superb update
loved it
felt sad for meethi
hope virat comes back soon
loved maanvi's dream
pls continue soon
thanks a lot for the pm

Awesome update...
Loved it...
Awww Meethi is missing her Daddy...
It was really sad for the little angel...
Hope Virat will come back soon for Meethi...
Loved the little Virman phone scene...
Awww Manvi dream...
I hope Virat will come back soon..
Update sooon...
Thanks for the PM...

Princess look I'm here to tell u what i feel after reading it

firstly I want to mention U write it very beautifully

U are queen of emotional update and u proves it always

...a big cheers for u...

now update it was mind blowing update with loads of things
> meethi part was super cute
> manvi and Virat convo was super amazing
> and last but nit the least Dreams sequence was top of the update... it works as cheery on top..


in short i fully enjoys it and loved to read it again and again.

take care Princess and tons od love

ur Barbie 🤗

nice update