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Posted: 10 years ago
Epppsss thats was so funny
nd qute love to read it more
thanx for the pm
online love hmmm gud one
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Posted: 10 years ago
beautiful.. Both 1 n 2
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice stry linee
keep it coming
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Posted: 9 years ago
Sry dear. I didnt notice thus msg in my inbox.. bt this story is so beautiful. Different from what i have read before.. do continue it. Nd do pm me.
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Posted: 9 years ago
                                        Part-3


The next day I woke up in

the morning and started to look at my profile again when I saw Ayaan online

again. I checked his profile and its was written. 

NAME- AYAAN RATHORE

LIVE IN- STALKER DO NOT NEED TO KNOW

BIRTHDAY- STOP STALKING ME DUDE.

ABOUT ME- Hey I said stop stalking me what will you

do by knowing bout me.

That's what I only got when I checked his profile.

There was not even his pic and I doubt it was his real name.At night I was

writing the next chapter of my story when suddenly Ayaan popped into my mind. I

saw his profile and his stautus was... "Cleaning my message board it was got

strawberry fingertips.

He had to be kidding me.. cud he not just let it

go? I instantly touched the private message and typed in

Me: Cant you just let it go?

He replied instantly. God this guy was fast I

opened the message

Him: nops

Me: what is you problem?

Him :you are my problem.

Me: y?

Him: because.

I growled in frustration and was about to type

another message when he sent another message.

Him: what are you doing?

Me: like I wud tell you that.

Him: its late where you live,

At that point of tym I got frozen like hw did he

knw were I lived. Omg

Me: how do u knw?

Him: u wrote it in ur profile... u r not really

bright are you?

Me: whatever.

Him: strawberry girl.

Me: stop that.

Him: make me.

Me: god you are impossible.

Him: thnks

Me: oh god that was NOT A COMPLIMENT

Him: it was fr me..

Curiosity filled my vains so I thought of asking

him that.

Me: what is you name?

Him: Y shud I tell you?

Me: just asking.

Him: stalkerish.

Me: I am just asking however I do not need to know

bye.

Before I cud shove my phone into my pocket I got a

message.

My name is Ayaan Rathore. Night sweet Shanaya.. um

rather strawberry girl 

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Posted: 9 years ago

                                                     Part 4:

 

"Shanaya get up" I heard my

moms voice and woke up in a second cause this coice was really scary.

" I am up mom" I said.

Then I got up and prepared for college and the journey to school was a silent

one whick was rare at that time I don't know why but I started to think of

Ayaan.

Suddenly I got a message in that site.

Him: cant remove ur smell frm my wall.

Ahh his message made me smile a little.

Me: You cant really stay without messaging me

right?

And we started talking a lots of stuff dayd and

months passed but we still used to continue with our daily fights. But one

thing I noticed and that was this guy ws really A mystery he nvr said anything

about himself. When ever I asked him he used to just ignore the topic and log

off.

oNe sudden day I was bored sitting in home and he

messaged me I was not in a mood to talk because I was scrolling his profile and

in his message BOARD I saw him flirting with another grl openly nd so I was not

happy nd evn idk y.

I was repliying him all sort of short repliest such

as hmm nd ok when he suddenly he got my mood change.

He: something wrong?

Me: nops

:him: then y talking like this strawberry?

Me; nah nthing. Nd stop calling me that.

Him: spit it out.

Me: nothing is wrong.

Him: ...

Me: umm so u like a girl huh? 

I tried to seem casual but I suck at it.

him: what do u mean?

Me: don't play the fool I saw ur msges in the

message board.

Him: you are jealous?

Me: pfft nooo...

Him:no u are.

Me: nops I am not.

Him: prove it.

Me: how?

Him: help me with her simple 

Me: huh I do not know her.

Him: neither do I but she looks hot in her dp.

My stomach clenched a bit. Wait no was I jealous?

Me: sure I will help u.

Him: u r so silly Shanaya...

Me: huh y?

Him: never mind 

Me: can I ask u something?

Him: yupz

Me: were r u frm?

Him: again??? Hahaha stalker.

Me: plss

Him: what will u do?

Me : IDK...

Him : give me ur house phn no.

Me: what?

Him: do it 

I don't know y but I gave my land line number to a

random stranger irritating rude idiot stupid guy... A whole lot of wrds I knw...I

typed the number my heart was hammering. What was he up to?

Me: Ayaan?

He did not reply when suddenly my house phone rang.

It cud nt be him right???

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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow how could i miss such a great story.
though not Kriyaansh but still love it. it is awesome.

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Posted: 9 years ago
Part 2

OMG is that Ayaan mad..??

why was he so rude..but anyways i loved it..

arr strawberry nice name btw just loved it sims

nd loved that cute fight to

so what are you thinking one more comment..??😲

well i decided to give sperate comments for all so loved the update

sims i hate u..😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part 3:

Oh man i so loved this Ayaan..god

he has all the thinks which will makea girl go angry on him..u knw ur this chat reminds me of someone..

well finally at last he took her name with that strawberry too well its a cute name..

sims i want updates of this soon i mean it..

anyways awsum update pagal loved it..

nd i hate u..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Its such a sweet and adorable love story! ❤️

Nyc update!They are slowly growing closer! 😳