Raaz- Chupaye nahi chupta KR ~Horror~ "Paused" - Page 4

finally finish read your first chapter was wonderful... the mansion picture were wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!! awesome... the chapter 1 was superb... both the sister are scare of see the criminal
scene and get scare off and both are know there strong ness and weakness...
and both had a nightmare of dream becuase of which they decided to leave this house...
and their gang member of friends are join in and are happy and fun and excited see the mansion... do continue soon and pm me

amazing update ...!

amazinggg start👏

Loved the update eshh..😛

Ress abi read ni kia..
Wl pakka unres in thodi der..

Start was sooo goood
Loved the house description
Kriya wanna know more about her
Thanks for pm

awsom updt

Osaamm didu..
Loved it.. <3

lovd the chapter...
OMG...KriShas dream...already scared me...
lovd how Rey was watching her from the rear view mirror...n Swayam telling him to concentrate in the road...

OMG...d house...
its sooo beauutiiifulll...
lovd it...
bahut bada n aacha hai...
its actually like some Shahi Darbaar...
lovd it...
jus waiting for actual horror...
do write soon...

Whoa!