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Posted: 09 April 2014 at 11:26am | IP Logged

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 I know I know people have complains I don't finish my ffs so now the new concepts an will be completed because they will be short love stories with diff concept not more than 20 to 25 epics  this is name pyaar ishq mohabbat.

   One rich cool dude flirt afraid of commitment (armaan)

  Girl belongs to conservative  joint family where girls are even not aloowed work  where she works that's her family somehow aceepted bt staying in live in relationship ????

Interested then do comments . Big smile

 part 1 pg 1

part 2 pg 3

Part 3 pg 4



Edited by mithilalovesksg - 27 April 2014 at 9:55am

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omg mithi u r back Hug
welcome back...
would love to read ur stories...Smile
hope u will update ur other ff's too...
do update soon..
take care and thanks for the pm..

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Posted: 10 April 2014 at 10:49am | IP Logged
Originally posted by amruta04

omg mithi u r back Hug
welcome back...
would love to read ur stories...Smile
hope u will update ur other ff's too...
do update soon..
take care and thanks for the pm..

i am not sure about my other FFs bt this will be updated

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Family Intros

Jeet mehra

Ridhima Father Middle class person retired very protective and conservative about her daughter and her two cousins reena and twinkle .

Ridhima has two uncle ayush and rohit ,mehra and there dauters reena and twinkle

Now comes ghar ka ladla one and only son Ridhima small Brother arish just given Board Exam Of 12th and waiting For results.

Reena 1st Yr colledge Twinkle second Year

Ridhima

Sweet simple Good looking Girls give Fy BCOm waiting For results and want to do Mba and Job as she know that his family has financial crises and more over she wants to be independent in this big world bt u know in conservative familes its difficult : )

Arti Mehra (Mother of ridhima) Ayehsa Mehra and Avanti Mehra (Aunts Of Ridhima)all are House wife

 

Now Our Hero and His family

Piyush Gupta : Armaan father Big Business Tycoon always out in Trips

Kriti Gupta : Armaan Mom Busy in Kity Parties

Armaan Gupta : Knows already has passed Fy Bcom Even knowing the results as his father has given them the money and trustee. Already has 21 Gfs and Now busy with 22nd For hoim life is party party and party ghar jana kyun hai waise bhi Koi nahi hai except his dog his companion Tommy or the servants.

Other charectors will get to know as the parts move on   



Part 1 coming stay tuned

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Part 1

 

6 in the morning 3 girls are sleeping ridhima not able to sleep today so just twisting from here to there

Twinkle: Ridhi di saari raat sone nahi diya abhi thode der sone do na plsss waise bhi hamehsa 80% sab kaam marks aapke nahi aate is baar bhi thik hoga waise bhi aaj ke din bahut kaam hoga an then she bit her tounge

Reena sleeping other side was about to slap her as she is almost about to split the secreat

Ridhima is in her own tention did not bother much and went to take bath as she in any case will not be able to sleep

Reena: pagal ho gayi thi khoti abhi di ko pata chalta to tayji kitna dandti sach kehte hai log moti itna khati hai ki pet main kuch bhi chpta nahi hai sab ugal deti hai

Twinkle : dekh Moti mat bol

Reena : to kya sandh bolun 75 kgs

Twinkle : Kya main saandh and

 there pillow fight starts then ridhi comes from bath

Ridhima: yeh dono phirse ruko tum dono warna main maa ko bulati hoon she goes oin between and tries to stop but hota kuch aur hi hain the 3 starts fighting and ridhima mom comes

All three stops

Arti : are tum teno uth gayi jaldi bahar aajao au raise ladna band kar ab warna

All three says together : sasural main yeh sab nahi chalega and starts laughing and hug her.

Scene 2

Ridhima ready for college and left without breakfast and aarti yeh ladki sabkoa khayal rakh legi apnea sevaye hey bhagwan maine isse batana hi bhul gayi ladke waale aah rahe hai aaj.

Ridhima walking fast otherwise his train of 8:30 will get miss and then again problem u know Mumbai ki aadhi life Local trains main hi depend hai

Ridhima Reach station and cath the train finally and she is use to stand on the local train gate (so am I :P)

Now about Local Trains and Ridhima toughts

The crowd of train is such that each other body is toucing and if u are having ear phone and bag have to be extreamly careful when any stop comes Ridhima was Holding her ear Phone and Bag Such than when people get inside or go outside it doesn't take her bag with them. Ek ajjeb baat hai local train main chadne ya utharne ki zarorat nahi padhti bheed apne aap karadeti hai strange amazing aapki body ke har hizze ki exercise ho jati hai and still u are so use to local trains ab itni addat pad chuki hai ki wohi acha lagta hai who thakka muki,beedh baad, samose and mudi coming in between .apne dupatte ko sambhal ke rakhna kahi chut nahi jaaye .   yeh sab ridhima ke zindagi ka hissa ban chukka hai . aur akhri station aate aate bheed thodi kaam hoti hai to dhyaan jata hai girls getting ready combing hair looking there face putting last minute make up . what upsets ridhima most girls parent sitting beside them but busy in talking in phone or playing in phone and finally her station comes then cathing Auto finnaly she reaches the colledge andbefore she entres the college get her best friend  Muskaan just hug her

Muskaan: Oye oye tu paas Ho gayi who bhi First class with 92%  Pure colledge main First aayi hai aur main 85%

Ridhima hugging her back with a smile

Muskaan : oye itni achi news aur bas aisi smile

Ridhima: Mujhe iski tention kabhie thi hi nahi Muskaan mujhe ab papa se baat karni hogi mera Interview main selection ho gaya hai aur part time Mba ke liye bhi aur tu to janti hai papa meri shadi ke peche pade hai unke pure khandaan main itna koi nahi padha jitni main

Muskaan : Jab yah taka ah gaye hai to aage bhi ho jayega tujhe to barvi ke baad hi keh rahe the padayi chod aur shadi kar lekin tune haar nahi maani to who bhi hogi chal pehle mandir jate hai phir kuch kayenge

Ridhima: nahi chal mandir phir ghar

Muskaan : Mujhe pata hai tune kal raat se kuch nahi khaya hoga to pehle mandir phir khayenge phir sochenge

Scene 3

A person is sleeping without shirt in shorts looking smoking hot as ever and its 10:30 in morning and shabzaade abhi tak so rahe hain. Phone is buzzing

Finally 25th times Phone ring has manage to break his sleep

Armaan : kaun kameena is waqt call kar raha hai and as he watch his daad and that too 25th time he knows he is dead hello

Piyush : Son r u coming ?

Armaan: coming where coming dad

Piyush: what u again did it how conveniently u forget this is 3rd time armaan u forget today will be your launch in our  business listen I have already made excuses to media last two times this time if u don't come then in media in evening I will announce I am disowning u phir rehna kisi chaul main

Armaan: dad in hindi means really pissed off dad I will reach delhi toay anyhow don't worry

Piyush Gud for u .

Scene 4

Ridhima reached home finally made up her mind to tell her father about the job and her further plans but got shock there is too much crowd in her house

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Edited by mithilalovesksg - 14 April 2014 at 8:16am

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Posted: 14 April 2014 at 10:02am | IP Logged
nice ff dear
loved it a lot 
do continue soon 

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Finally u r back
Am soo happy
Awesome concept dear
Loved it
Plz can't soon
Thanks for pm

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