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Originally posted by shahbhavini

full of emotions... amazing... loved it... Jo is so cute... Are bap re ye kya kar diya jo tune... love it.. please update soon... thank u for pm...

 i m happy to know that u liked it Big smile
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Jodha ws watching his every move wid such a interest dat she failed to realize dat her frnds hv stop their chattering n were lukng at her n r asking her about something .

A snap was made in front of her that made her blink twice. One of her friends asked, "Are you listening?"

She replied, "Yea."

 Gargi said, "So what do you want?"

 Jodha was confused as she really wasn't listening. She hated lying but she sure wasn't going to let them know that she was eavesdropping on a stranger's conversation. She narrowed her eye brows showing she was thinking and making an educated guess from the question, she replied, "Pink lemonade."

She got a nod from her friends and they left her to fetch the drinks. She was about to say, "Not all four of you have to go!" But too late, they had already left her by herself. At least she was glad that she didn't get caught in her small' lie. She had managed to make it seem like she was listening all along.


Every one's head turned to the source of voice coming through the microphone. "Alright, enough of chatting, and gossips. In another 15 min it will new year so y not make it a bit more memorable in a special way for each one of us what say guys??

The room cheered woo-ho, as small smiles to big grins lit up everyone's face.

" so its dancing time. But wid a twist"

Soon the smiles on the young faces turned into a confused frown when they heard the next part.

Seeing the confusion the host continued, "so d twist is dat a spotlight will hit few random people present in this room, and each of them will be handed a token with a number written on it n who ever hv d same number get to dance together!"

"so let start dis spotlight dance". Then d light got dimmed n a spotlight started hitting random people. Jalal n Abdul were talking to each other when a bright light hit jalal interrupting their convo. Jalal took his tokan n moved towards dance floor.

Jodha watched the guy in white shirt chosen for spotlight dance. Although he ws wearing a mask bt still could make out hw handsome he is!  While she was lost in her thoughts her friends returned and were about to hand her pink lemonade but the drink only made its way till midair as spot light shined on our jodha.

Then a token ws given to her wid no 23, the first thought which came to her mind was "will he be my partner?" She sent out a silent prayer to the almighty, "I don't even know him, but please make him my partner" n she proceeded towards d dance floor. She saw him asking some about their token bt none of had dat so she decided to try her luck. So went toward d place where he was standing luking down at his token.

Jalal POV

He was luking at d token in his hand wid no 23 written on n dat's when he heard the most sweetest voice in his life so looked away frm his token to find the source of it n the first thing he saw was those deeper den ocean shining brighter than stars a pair of brown dove shape eyes !!! her eyes were so beautiful dat he wnted to get lost in it! N den his eyes went down to see her pink lips it looked so soft so juicy dat wondered what would it feel like if touch them ...n ...wat will it like to kiss them?? Though she ws wearing a mask bt he knw dat she is vry beautiful. He ws so busy in staring her dat he missed her ques wch she was askng him.

End of POV


When he didn't answered her ques 2nd tym she asked him one more tym louldly " what is no of ur token?" that's when he came back to he's senses jalal "hmm..what..waht??" he asked all embarrassed to get caught offgaurd . jodha asked him again " I want to noe d no. on ur token ." he replied " ya sure... its 23" jodha's happiness knew no bound afterall god has listen to her prayers. She's said excitedly " mine too!!!" . now it was jalal's tym to be happy he cant believe his luck.

They both went to floor and started dancing as soon as tune of the song sunno sangemarmar filled up d room , it made the spectators go in silent mode as they watched their friends dance wid stranger. Every single couple got intense as the music got high, not caring that they are dancing with stranger, just capturing the moment and enjoying the thrill as the song hit to full swing.

(Suno na sangemarmar ki yeh minaare
Kuch bhi nahi hai aage tumhaare
Aaj se dil pe mere raaj tumhaara
Taj tumhara )

Jalal pulled jodha towards him by her waist, and as his hands touched the soft satin cloth of her dress, lining the perfect curves of her body, he inhaled deeply and the drowning toxic scent of her perfume drowned him as it took over and swirled around them as their slow dance started getting intense with each passing verse of the song. He was on the verge to pull her even closer to him and drown deeply in to the enchanting fragrance but controlled himself

(Bin tere maddham maddham
bhi chal rahi thi dhadkan
Jab se mile tum humein
Aanchal se tere bandhe
Dil ud raha hai )

Every touch of his was giving mixed double feelings. Her heart was pounding so hardly that she was sure whoever she is dancing with her could hear it. It was driving her crazy, but at the same time her mind would reason and she would get more uncomfortable. His hand brushed her arm as they stood with their backs touching each other. It sent a sudden chill through out her body

(Suno na aasmaano ke yeh sitaare
Kuch bhi nahi hai aage tumhaare )


Jodha  was finding it a bit awkward to be so close to some one strange at some points of the dance while jalal just let his consciousness go and flowed along with the dance, enjoying the moment, as he was sure something this thrilling will never happen again in his life. He was finally glad to find a partner who fit to dance with him, and since he didn't knew her; he danced as if this was not only his first dance with this amazing partner, but also his last dance with her. Who knew if he would ever be able to find her again and dance with her so easily?

(Yeh dekho sapne mere
Neendon se hoke tere
Raaton se kehte hain lo
Hum toh savere hai wo
Sach gaye jo
Suno na do jahaano ke yeh nazaare
Kuch bhi nahi hai aage tumhaare
Aaj se dil pe mere raaj tumhara
Taj tumhara..
Suno na sangemarmar ki yeh minaare)

He twirled her and brought her face close to his and ran his hand on her cheek. She went behind him and came back to the front. He twirled her four times before finally pulling her close to him and her hands went around his neck as both panted hard staying in the still posture until they heard the crowd cheering and clapping.

That's when they took a step backward realizing that song is over. They both wanted to see each to knw each other bt before they can ask anything to each other ther frnds encircled them n started appreciating them.

Both of them gave a forced smile as they weren't much interested on what their friends had to say. Instead they were eager to find out who the person was with whom they were so comfortable with while dancing. They needed to give their unknown, imaginated figure a face. A face they can gaze at for time to come.

Dhwani- " wow jo wat a performance yaar"

Gargi- " it ws jst awesome"

N she thanked dem she was about to go to jalal when again they heard d host "ppl only 5 sec r left to new year. 5...4...3..2...all together 1 HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!!!!!!!!" Whole club was shouting wishing each other...smiling...cheering!!!

Jodha n jalal both got  busy wid their frnds bt their mind was thinking about each other. after somtime Jodha was scanning the club to find him when she spotted him cuming towards her she also started moving towards him whn suddenly abdul came in front of jalal n started asking him ques bt he was in no mood to answer his ques "dude can we just talk about it later, plz" asked irritated jalal to which abdul said "what's the problem talking about it right now" now jalal had, had enough "abdul!! I said we'll tlk about it later" said an angry jalal

Abdul- "fine" n goes from there jalal turns to find out that she's not there .he looked everywhere for her bt couldn't find her in the club so he went out to see if she was there. As soon as he comes out he see her going away in her car he shouts "hey stop...wait ..." but they don't stop.

He see her going away from him but he couldn't do any thing about it  . He was about to go inside whn he see her mask lying on d ground n picks it up slowly he smiles at it n says " I don't know who u r ? what's ur name? how do u look? I don't know bt I feel like its not d last time we r meeting" he keeps dat mask in his jacket n goes inside the club with a feeling n hope that he'll meet her soon.



FINISHED!!!!!!!! Do hit like n comment.Big smile Forgive me for any mistake!!! Ouch


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Edited by oshinchaudhary - 25 January 2015 at 5:48pm

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wonderful update 
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i really reaally really beutiful chapter Clap
soo dreamy Day Dreaming
i loved it Clap
thnx 4 d pmSmile
update soon Smile
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wow...its tooo cute!!!!!!  SWEET LOVE continue dear!!EmbarrassedEmbarrassed
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Originally posted by rima4ever

wonderful update 

thank you dearBig smile
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Originally posted by SHINYSHREYA

Loved the update

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