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bahut badhiya update hai archu bahina😊 per next wale me gaddi thodi aage badhiyo,ee ma toh poora time kewal ghoommi karne me nikal gayaπŸ˜‰πŸ˜†
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Originally posted by: kumari27

Superb updateπŸ‘

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Wow...<font face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">Very nice update...</font>

<font face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">Quite romantic too...</font>
<font face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">The last part was so beautiful...</font>
<font face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">The beach scene and the background song were so perfectly mixed up with each other...</font>
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Originally posted by: TINAMONI

Just Beutiful M,,,! Loved it,!,,!,,

but why just sleep after dinner?.?.?.
Can go to roof top or pool side and have some romance!,,,
sorry just kidding,,,,
Loved the way the story is progressing,,,,
please update soon...Will be waiting for ur update...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Previous update on page 32

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On A Smooth Way...




Life was going on a smooth road with Tara and Mrityunjay finding good friends in each other.



One day after returning home, as usual, Tara was listening to her now favourite radio show "Dil se dil tak" when a girl called the RJ.


The RJ said, "So Ma'am what do you want to listen to and why?"


The girl said, "I want to listen to β€˜~Kaun mera tu mera kya tu lage~', and the reason is I met someone a few years ago. He is my best friend and I think I am falling for him. And this song describes my condition very well."


The RJ said, "Oh ho! Ok so let's listen to this song, and if you are falling in love you will find it describing your situation too."


~Kaun mera, mera kya tu laage

Kyun tu baandhe, mann se mann ke dhaage

Bas chale naa kyun mera tere aage

Kaun mera, mera kya tu laage

Kyun tu baandhe, mann se mann ke dhaage~


Tara closed her eyes to feel the song. Slowly she started singing this song along with the radio.


Today Mrityunjay came home early. When he was just outside his room, he heard two voices coming from inside. He slowly opened the door and saw Tara singing. The way she was singing, she was one with that moment like a free bird who was not worried about what was happening around her. Mrityunjay leaned on a nearby wall and adored her. The way she moved her hand and the curves around her red lips were enchanting.


~Chhod kar na tu kahin bhi door ab jaana

Tujhko kasam hai

Saath rehna jo bhi hai tu

Jhooth ya sach hai, ya bharam hai

Apna banaane ka jatan kar hi chuke ab to

Baiyan pakad kar aaj chal

Main doon bata sabko

Kaun mera, mera kya tu laage~



After the song finished, Tara laughed at herself thinking how silly she was and turned. Her eyes opened wide, shocked at seeing Mrityunjay standing at the door smiling. She immediately turned away embarrassed.


Mrityunjay came to her and said, "Relax Tara. You sing pretty well."


"Thanks."


"Do you like singing?"


"No, I just like this show and listen to it every day and today..."


He smiled seeing her embarrassed.


 

Tara was surprised to see Mrityunjay home early.


"Is everything ok? You are home so early."


"Oh yes, I am fine. Just my head was paining and so I thought to take rest. Can you please give me that box?" He pointed to the medicine box kept in his closet.


Tara immediately grabbed it and came near him. Seeing so many medicines in that box, she was confused and asked, "Whose medicines are these?"


"Oh...they are mine," he said taking one.


Tara wanted to ask why he needed so many medicines but thought it better to ask about it some other day.


After taking the medicine Mrityunjay wanted to sleep.


Tara asked, "May I give you a head massage? It will give you instant relief."


Seeing this might help in relieving his headache, he agreed.


The radio was still on, and playing in low volume.


~Pal do pal ki hi kyun hai zindagi

Iss pyaar ko hai sadiyaan kaafi nahi

Toh khuda se maang loon mohalat main ek nayi

Rehna hai bas yahan ab door tujh se jaana nahi

Jo tu mera humdard hai jo tu mera humdard hai

Suhana har dard hai jo tu mera humdard hai ~


Tara put his head on her lap and started massaging it, and she was right. Her massage therapy was very effective, his headache reduced in just a few minutes. Her soft fingers were playing with his long hair.


He was imagining how Tara would be looking right now, with a smile on her red lips and a spark in her eyes.

 

~Teri muskurahatein hain taaqat meri mujhko inhi se umeed mili

Chahe kare koi sitam yeh jahaan in mein hi hai sada hifaazat meri

Zindagani badi khoobsurat hui jannat ab aur kya hogi kahin

Jo tu mera humdard hai jo tu mera humdard hai

Suhana har dard hai jo tu mera humdard hai ~


To see whether his imagination was right, he half opened his eyes slowly, and he was right in the way he had imagined Tara and she was acting exactly like it. Before Tara could catch him in the act, he closed his eyes again.


Tara's head massage and music worked wonders. Mrityunjay was asleep after five minutes.



 

After Mrityunjay fell asleep, Tara started to find out about those medicines and was shocked to see the usage of those.

"These are antidepressants! Mrityunjay takes them! I need to talk to Dadaji about this." She went to Dadaji.

 

"Dadaji, I want to know something."


On hearing a slightly scared and confused Tara, Dadaji indicated her to come and sit.


"What happened Bahu? You seem a little worried. Is everything alright?"


"Dadaji, Mrityunjay….” She was not sure how to ask about those medicines.


Hearing Tara's confused tone, he got worried.

"What happened? Is he all right?"


"He is fine. He was just having a headache and now he is sleeping."

Dadaji was relieved after hearing this.


"Why did you become restless Dadaji? Is there anything that I don't know?" she asked keeping the medicines in front of him.


"Yes, Tara. I think Dr. Fahim will be a better option to explain this." Saying this, he called Dr. Fahim.

"Bahu, he is out of town but will be here tomorrow. Wait till tomorrow and you will get answers to all your questions."


Tara was a little tensed seeing Dadaji's reaction.

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Edited by Archi21 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Story isin progress.
BT who gonna told them that both falled in love for each other.
I m wating how you explain their confession.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wonderful ...loved reading it...when they confess to each other???
Update soon..
Will be waiting for the new update. ..
a big thanks for the pm..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Another lovely update... πŸ‘ πŸ‘
The head massage scene and
Tara's alone time with the radio scene were beautifully crafted by you...
The story is running in  such a brilliant way...with some ease along with the sprinkle of mysteries...
Charged up for the next chapter
Update soon...!!