The Mark of Innocence: #5 Chapter 49 Pg 112 - Page 66

Originally posted by: farz_parachute

So this is my comment proper.

Ohmy SIS!

That was hot ehhh.

Zoya in just a towel...and all that anger and anxiety and hotness!

Hayye...!

MELTING!

Thanks so much Tannu! For making them come together!

See...I told you Tannu is good for us! And Asad-Zoya! Coz she brought them even closer!

Hmmm...

HOOOTTT!!

Thank you Sis!

Mwah mwah

*STILL MAD. SOUR LOSER IN DA HOUSE*

Originally posted by: LoveOnlyAsYa

Res

Me First Me first LALALALALALALALALA

DHINKACHIKA DHINKACHIKA HEY HEY HEY HEY

NOW WILL UNRESS AFTER I READ THE UPDATE 😆

UNRES😃



SIS WHAT A BRILLIANT UPDATE 👏.

I have never said this on the forum but i want to say it now I Love Ayaan 😆. What a brilliant way to keep the billi away from Zoya Loved it ❤️

Am in love with the understanding that Asad n Zoya have and the love that they share for eachother.

Sis I just loved these lines ... "I don't like feeling like this, it scares me...I can't believe we had our first fight' 'no Zoya...this was not a fight...we will never fight...this was just two people who are madly in love with each other showing exactly how crazy they can go when one doesn't know what is happening with the other'."

Asad ignored Tanveer and took Zoya along was so well written and served the billi right.
Zoya's approach to help Tanveer was so good 😆. She simply broke the chip into two. Smart girl 😎.

Loved the update Sis and a big hug for the little Asya scene 🤗

Mwah ❤️

Lovely chapter!     😃

nice update
really bitchy tanveer
leo u want jam and toast really
asad r an asshole how will u have coffee
with that thing and just leave zoya on her own
she have so much faith in u she saw u at the pizza
place and went back to the studio knowing u would come
but u went home straight like an ass
thank god RJ was there to take her an he seem to be the good guy
he is engaged
asad guess u r in a hot mess...cant believed he is mad at her
he was late and he is mad at her
cant believed we had our first fight no it isnt a fight we r just 2 people
madly in love with each other that when we dont know what is happening
with the other we go crazy...loved naughty asad
loved how they handled tanveer tht next morning and she took her little brother with her
haha zoya going to goa nice one ayaan
really hope rj is a good guy still
loved how zoya took care of tanveer problem 😆 ad she and ayaan have a good laugh
continue soon

fantastic update!!! breaking news is that...ayaan has a functional brain !!! yayy !!!

now when asya n ayaan r as a team...there's not much to worry about...
continue soon

Hey thanks for mentioning me in the update

Dis ayaan of ur ff is so clever saima..

Nd i like him...

Loved the updt again..

Loved the trust thy bth hv on echother..

Loll tanu..
Zoya hlpd her so sweet of her..
But broke the chip..
Haha..

Thnk god..
Ayaan goa kaha..
Nai tho ek aur prblm create karti..
Ab doondo goa mein :p

continue soon..

Hey Saima fantastic update

Well written update...love the fact that they are all in it together and trust each other to work against a common enemy!

Awesome update