This content was originally posted by: zeylanicaThat was superb!
loved itThanks for d PM n continue soon
This content was originally posted by: zeylanicaThat was superb!
loved itThanks for d PM n continue soon
This content was originally posted by: shwetartisthello! how are you and how was your trip?So our raya are in viraj-mallika paradise.Good very nice waise yeh show mein toh segment ka kabada๐ญ kar diya tha but you and other writers make them a imp.part.I think you need to send a packet of stomach pain pill and a tissue box as was laughing like hell while reading this part.Waise yeh diff.hai mom dad bacho ki jaasusi karte hai but yeha toh ulta hai baccha mom dad ki jaasosi kar rehe hai๐.Nice progress .Waiting for update and keep healthy and always smile๐ big waali๐
This content was originally posted by: sinalbestnice wrk...
thanks for pm...
sry for late
update soon
This content was originally posted by: anupam_dilthis is such an awesome story to readโค๏ธ...lovely...how I don't I missed the first part though you did pm to me...I am sorry...but now I read both very very nice and very well written ๐๐
thanks for pm๐continue ASAP
This content was originally posted by: lalmadhuHayee...Awesome dear.
Enjoyed their blissful romance. The shopping part is soo good. Everyone's expression explained well.๐ ๐Waiting for Priya's answer.๐Thanks for the pm.
This content was originally posted by: TVserialfreakAwesome update!!..sorry for late comment๐ณ๐ณ...keep rocking...๐๐๐
This content was originally posted by: sandhyasnPart 2
lovely updateLoved this Viraj and mallika partalso everybody is against Pihu and Juhi...Loved Sammy's dialogues...and here pihu hates Sammy๐ thank god Sammy bach gaya.๐Nuts, pari myra kush all went for shopping but met with Raya. loved the scene very much...and the best part is when they caught...U penned down beautifully this scene.Raya is embarrassed. ...lets see kya kehte hai Viraj aur mallika ke bare mein๐I want raya to be back to their KM..and continues with their romance ...and jealous Juhi and Peehu.thanks for PM..and sorry for late reply...my like button is not working...
This content was originally posted by: neemalstLoved this Viraj and mallika part
Enjoyed their romance.The shopping part is good tooThanks for the PM
Recap
" i heard some one calling viraj n mallika."
Ram swallowed a lump down his throat, scratching his temple he looked at worried priya who is struggling to give an answer.
In the Mall.
" Haan , woh " both tried to skip the answer, tried fabricating the truth. Priya stared at him for answer. Ram who was not able to say what to tell them just pleaded her through his eyes to say something. She smiled at him only thought in her mind is "golu", Hitlers mind is empty too, by the unexpected query . she raised her eye brow, scratching her temple, stared at him hinting to convince them, she saw him shrugging his shoulder blades in helplessness conveyed her the message- "what shall I say baby?" He thought of diverting the topic. He flashed a smile to her a pleasant victorious smile. She felt relief that he will do some thing and for a second was so proud of the man.
" arrey guys , come will go to the cafe am damn hungry"
She dazed, not even a second I was proud of this golu handle this situation and look at him he thinks of food now? And he thinks his kids are interested in food. She is disgusted with his response. She thought - what do he think? They will be convinced? Awful Ram what have u done. Myra n pari are least interested in food these days these teenagers like to keep lean , nuts n kush are smiling they have surmised the situation by now.. and ram thinks of food here too. Priyaa ... kuch kar..
She came out of her short span trance
" what ! ram . u ate full stil, u feel hungry again."
Nuts caught that they were hiding things. Sammy nudged nuts to see. He said ram uncle is too worst in lying dad is better[ he winked]. They shared smiles. They became alert when they heard raya's argument.
" haan my appetite is big. Don't u know? I have to eat now or else i will faint here"
Nuts laughed out.
" bhai! Are u serious ! u will faint .. hahahah" nuts laughed. Seeing ram she kept quite.
" haan chalo, we can't handle 2 catastrophes at a time!" priya said
" what do u mean priya ?" ram sulked.
" sacchayi . we can't handle u fainting and this building quake same time " she flashed her teeth. He gritted his teeth saying " priya" undertone.
They all head to cafe. Ram is busy relishing Pizza, he almost finished huge pizza. Priya is simply looking at him thinking- Uff! Ram .. totally engrossed in eating, if some one ask him now about viraj he will say it. God please let no one arise the same topic. Pari asked again, dad u dint tell us who is viraj and malika.
" haan viraj na.. aap ki mummy ki boy friend aur mallika meri girld friend" he spilled it out , and then realized sherni looks fell on him. he bite his tongue.OOPS!
Every one said WHAT! In disbelief. He tried to speak , priya dint give a change to fabricate. She is confused and shocked at his sudden verdict. Thinking what can i do with this GOLU. Her heart responded PRIYA, PAYAR kar isse , itna innocent hai tumara pati. Cant even lie HE IS SO CHWEET, MERA GOLU. Her mind took control aww u shut up, dont rule me now! Look at what this golu has done. He almost spilled our affair shut up and let me take control .
" what Mr. Kapoor .. I dont believe this u had a girl friend and what did u say" she asked him to hide through eyes.
" arrey yaar, itna gussa mat karo ! i just said it, pari this is so stupid question how do we know who are they ?"
" even then Mr. Kapoor ! Are u cheating on me?" priya started crying.
" oh madam, how can u think of me having an affair! Haan see my size its only u can handle me i cannot think of anyone else. Priya common" .. he acted as if convincing her. she acted upset.
Girls felt sorry for their stupid question made their parent fight .
"mom, dad sorry ... we are really sorry." Priya wiped her tears , Its not u both and hugged them .
Nuts who has seen this all though something is fishy. Priya left the issue simple, uff she does know who is mallika. She pulled kush aside as she saw him hiding his smile.
" kush sach sach bata mujhe.. I know tum neha and priya ka best trained jasoos ho. Tell me what's going on!"
"bua! Aap bhi na. Mujhe pata hai! But dont let mom dad know this. Ok I suspect, mallika is mom n viraj is dad. And they have a secret affair or they call them self with the names I dont know"
Nuts in disbeleif "what"
" i think bua, i tried to ask mom but she always said dont be jasoos to parents. I saw mallika's name in dad's mobile and I noted the number called to it then mom lift the call."
" omg ! bhai, that means they have a serious affair... accha , ok this is our secret let them be happy. This is the thing they are doing for themself. Let them enjoy"
" please bua . u dont tell any one, or else am in great trouble. MOM may stop talking to me. "
" promise."
In the time Priya came there. ..
" what promise" she inquired... "nuts what's going on, why u both looked tense now?"
Nuts n kush were not sure about what happened, did priya heard? When she came there! They looked at each other with knitted eyebrows.
Woh priya... haan kush ki GF ke bari mein.
Kush is shocked my GF oh noo.. now mom will never leave me. Pakka neha aunty will be behind me, Bua what have u done to me- cried kush in his heart.
What is this GF- girl friend?. Kush ! ka Girl friend bhi hai. Aur kush u dint share with me but with youre bua. Very bad. Secret hai kya. Let me find out who it is! Priya spoke leaving kush in much more trouble.
With a question mark face kush thought- marr gayi . ab maa wont leave me in any way! Am finished. Buaaa, where shall I get my GF, Man shit i have none in my life.
" chalo na, Mr. Kapoor is calling u both" priya said.
All of them had a splendid time. Priya lived the moment with grown up kids. She felt sad that she missed 7 yrs of her twin children, & most beautiful years . she missed to see them turning teens. She felt a strange pain when she thought of she cannot relive the days.
At the end of the day, the time to wave bye. Myra pari wants raya to return to KM with them . Ram gave kush to take good care of them. Nuts too consoled them saying let RAYA have some time after all what happened. Ram promised if they be good he will do what ever they want. Myra asked to take her to disco. She named the club too. Hearing the name natasha kush and sammy were shocked.
Unknowingly ram said yes to it. he promised he and priya will accompany them. The strange expression didn't went unnoticed by priya. she caught their expression. Inquired abt it.
What's wrong.! With the place.
Dad, not there will go else where . sammy knows some exotic clubs. Myra pari . will go to disco but not there.. Kush said sternly .
Why bhai! We heard pihu di making plans to go there. She said it was a nice place. And juhi maa let her go! Pari asked
Sammy interrupted, myra pari u want to enjoy disco that's it done .. sammy is here na, will have best fun ... woh bhi if ram uncle allows. He winked at kush.
Ram became curious y these boy are saying no to the place I have to find out. If it is a bad place then pihu will go there? With the thoughts he waved bye to all and walked to his car with priya. he turned to priya and suddenly a scarf fell on priya. they heard a car rashed the roads and one girl enjoying the drive open arms to the sky with bright amber colored bottle in hand and shouting. Priya looked back to see the girl and the scarf. Mom can identify their child in seconds. It clinched her heart. She crushed the scarf near to her heart, tears rolled down her eyes. She felts his arms catching her by shoulder. She rested her head on his shoulder while he was rubbing her arm. Saying it might not be pihu . ...
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