Those black eyes ... Hopefully her actual khushi 's ... She's been thru hell ride . But all in all I m glad she left and u closed that loop well. Her family atleast will know what Arnav thinks of her.. That said, keeping in mind the fantastic way u write and the way u tell a story, it's hard to digest this much negativity ... Even of it's fictional. I understand that all this is needed ... Hopefully it goes a little upwards for her from now. It's just too uncomfortable with my heart in my throat every single time .. And don't say don't read it cos it's just fantastic .. And I m addicted to the story ...
Every sentence u wrote, as she was walking thru those streets , it was like I could almost see it all.. That's how potent ur story is... So deep... So please don't go the filmy way .. Arnav's redemption , I m sure will happen , I m sure but does this have to be an arshi together always kinda story?? As much as I love them, this story , for me, has more meaning than just mere re union.. It's a tale of betrayal, misunderstNding , breaking, finding , yearning etc etc in which groveling also is one of ... I truly wish khushi to find her happiness in someone else and not in Arnav after his change... He could move heaven and earth for her from here, that would still not make up for the sheer torture he showed her... It would be lovely to see khushi rise from the ashes and find all kinds of happiness ... For me, right now , khushi's state towards Arnav comes across as indifference... That's not hate .. So she just doesn't care anymore.. And should stay exactly that way... And for all he did along with his family, they all should repent for the rest of their lives thinking kash... Edited by Serene77 - 10 years ago
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