This content was originally posted by: DevanganaThey seem to be on the right track now. Please let Rosy be safe. Continue soon please
This content was originally posted by: _Shivani_Chapter 67...Finally...the series of confession n confrontations took place...Now Both of them are focusing on the plan...hmm..3 daysss...It would have been very hard for Rosy as well as for Arjun to stay away from eachother...Karan...I find him cutee...Rosy's Partner is playing cupid here or what...hehe...Aayeee...Hayee...Bahon ke Darmiyan...Do pyaar mil rahe h...That three magical words...That kiss on his cheeks...That laugh...goddd...blushing harder...Omg...Rosy calls Arjun "Hitler"...hihi...*giggles*...Bloody As*h*le...That bloody Daniel...How dare he touch her...Hope she is fine...Arjunnn...My dear...Sambhal lena...*sad face*..Coming to You...Miss Writer...It was truly amazing...I loved it...I was waiting for it for a long time...please continue soon...
This content was originally posted by: smanchikYAYYAYAYAYAY!! you finally updated!! Beautifully written!! Good job girl!! Keep on updating!! :)ππβ€οΈ
This content was originally posted by: ..sweetchilly..Karan playing the cupid for Rosy and Arjun.Well, that's gonna be a treat!!
Really excited for it.
That's true, Rosy hates being vulnerable that too in front of Arjun.So, she removed that bracelet.
But, Arjun wants her to be safe, he can't risk losing her once again.
Rosanna and her charms, nobody can escape from her.
Looking forward to Arjun's ways of comforting her.
Nice one..
This content was originally posted by: _Nikita_Awwwsssmmm Update
Loved It
It was Supperbbb as always
True said they had enough losses
Now they seem to be on the right track
Love the "I love you" moment Hayeee..!!!
Awww Arjun wanna lock het up and guard over her
She called him "Hitler" too cute
Hope Rosy will be fine as Arjun is there to take care of her to comfort her
Wonderfully Written
Continue Soon
Eagerly waiting for next part
Thanks for the PM
This content was originally posted by: TereLiyeMINUReally the update was exhilarating.The initial parts were bit poignant.The lines are so tender and heart touching .The idea of providing comfort to each other is just the sweetest of actions.Awaiting for the forthcoming update.π
Thanks for the pm and keep writing with unabated spirits.
This content was originally posted by: Anny90Ohh. God I am lagging behind a lot here.
Part 64
Every character has been developed so much over time and they have so much hidden deep inside them it is very difficult some time to remember that the story is a fiction. The reality of situations make this difficult.Part 65Part 66Part 67
This content was originally posted by: IshaniSinghhanother fabulous update.. briliantly written, karan is so caring, sweet, happy 2 see our love birds working together.. spcly whr he reasoned miss A, dat he cant afford 2 loose her aftr anu.. so emotional nf beautiful..
keep writing more
This content was originally posted by: kunchuRead it days back
culdn't help myself from readingand u know whybut couldnt cmntand again u know whyyaar u said it rightcouldn't have been a better time to gift me!!And again u know what I meanπ³Bolne keliye kuch bacha hi ni my GenieBecause u always outstand with every updateToo good to see Mr A and Ms A in form after all the heart breaksI am just loving Karan's role here.In between Hiroshima nad NagasakiπMy love for yr lady (and u) won't ever go down even by a notchmuaaahhhπ³
This content was originally posted by: _BlackPearl_You always leaves me with mixed emotions with each update.
Arjun wants her to be safe for him, for them.He doesn't want to repeat his actions from the past.He knows what he has lost and he doesn't want to lose it again.Loving Karan's character.
This content was originally posted by: shreya09Karan β€οΈβ€οΈ a sweet nice & caring friend. just love him.
Arohi & her Hitler π... their love care support for each other... its just wonderful & heart-touching.The chapter was was painful yet heart-warming to read.Its good to see Arjun there for his Miss A... to take care of her.great writing once again ππΌwaiting for more π³but i am missing my confused yet determined ETF team π. tell me what they are doing
This content was originally posted by: SeasonOfLeavesHolaaaπ€
Your bhootni sautan is hereπ (who is at the moment doing a happy dance on Tukur tukur and then literally flattening herself on the bed with Daayre.. and then lifting herself and.. wait I'm here for a comment!)I know I was supposed to write this a long long time ago, but I hope you didn't mind the overnight comments (you know where) πSure, I took my time, but I am really really glad I did finally read it.First of all, the chemistry between Arjun and Ro *fans self* (Remember that song?ππ)Woman, you did a marvellous job with the plot, the characters (especially that of Ro.. I already told u how much I love her... actually words wouldn't do justice.. not enough anyway).Not many stories remain longer in my mind than necessary, but I must say that this is one of those stories where certain things come back to haunt me.. like Annu's loss, her father's agony over the knowledge that he lost a child he had never known.. (the photograph, the little scene at the hospital.. it was all too poignant and real... by real, I mean real.)The little one - even though she was lost in the pages of your story a little too soon - carved out this space in my heart.. Ananya was too beautiful to be true, sautan.What they both went through as parents, it was just to much to bear.. especially Arohi had to go through all that alone.. a part of me blamed her for not letting Arjun know, but then as I read further, I could see why... it made sense and it broke my heart.Those letters... I am thankful in a way that you rarely write in first person because, God, woman! You can make me cry. I still have no clue how u wrote it, but I think I know a little, because I felt odd when I wrote those letters in PM. Anyway..Coming back to your story.. Hats off for penning the character of Rosanna - she's beautiful, she's sensuous, she's vulnerable and yet so strong at the same time.. she's ... complex. And it takes guts and skill to write such a complex character. I mean it, sautan. I mean every word.A few things you already know I loved - the masquerade ball! Jeezzz.. Raabta still rings in my ears, and that dance!
Their first meet after all those years - Ye tune kya kiya. Sighhh.. It was perfect in every way.Their flashbacks... oh, I cannot tell you how much I loved them... it's what made me fall in love with these two. They're just so pure.. their friendship is too pure.Anddd... of course the bracelet scene, the part where he gets to know about Annu, the confrontation.. I am running out of words!I couldn't tell u how much I loved it all, even if I wanted to. Here I am waiting eagerly for the next updateπ (You know what, don't u?)Thank you for such a wonderful story (that made me reach for quite a handful of tissues).. and thank you for the beautiful characters.Ab aa jao wapas.π
Tears blurred her eyes, and slowly everything began to fade away into nothingness. She could barely breathe as his rough calloused hands slowly lowered the zipper at the back of her dress.
Arjun's eyes snapped close, his hands stilled, as if silently asking for permission to undress her.
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