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Posted: 29 March 2014 at 9:21am | IP Logged



THIS IS AN OS DEDICATED MY DEAR SISTER ALEFIYA (ALE_TAAREY) AS ITS HER BDAY TODAY... 

Taarey were married just a week ago and were packing their bags for their HONEYMOON.

But both were hell nervous as it was an ARRANGED MARRIAGE!

Rey loved taani from the very beginning he saw her but taani was angry on her family that they simply fixed her marriage with rey and did not even allow them to talk. She believes that the more they interact with each other, the better understanding they can have.

But everything is upside down now, as she wants to be practical in her life, little did she know that rey has fallen for her. She was packing her bag putting all her necessary things like the daily things needed.

Rey's mother Kaveri Singhania entered their room and

K: saari packing ho gayi beta? (to taarey)

TR: haa maa! (at once)

Kaveri felt it cute and both were looking a bit embarrassed.

K: chaliye beta, ab jaldi khatam karke so jaao. Kal flight jaldi pakadna hai na!

TR: ji maa!

Kaveri smiled, she went to taani and kissed her forehead,

R: haan, ab bte ko bhool jaao bahu aagayi toh!

K: tujhe to purey 25 years kiss karti thi aise, ek din meri bahu ko kiss kya dedi, yeh kya baat hui?

Kaveri went and kissed rey's forehead

R: love you maa!

K: love u too beta!

Taani felt it so cute and adored rey for a while.

 

Next morning

Taani woke up at 4 AM and got ready by 4:45 and rey went into the washroom

Both got ready by 5:30 and sped off to the airport taking the blessings from rey's parents.

Soon they were in the plane, their tickets were to Paris and taani adored the Eiffel tower in one of a magazine.

Rey was lost in her dreamland; taani was so involved that she couldn't notice rey, but rey was enjoying this. Or maybe in a soft corner of her heart, she actually felt for him?

The plane landed in Paris and they both headed to their hotel

"Perishing hall"

Taani was beyond stunned to look at the interior of the hotel. It was purely ravishing!

R: taani! Taani kya hua?

T: rey, itni badi hotel kyu rey?

R: well, yeh sawaal tumhe maa se poochna hoga!

T: kuch bhi! Maa ko doosre hotels hi nahi miley kya? Issme hi booking karna tha kya?

And she was blabbering something; rey was smiling looking at her face.

Rey went to the reception and took their room keys.

The workers brought their luggage and taani was gaping her surrounding, dcor and infrastructure.

She was still in her cute irritated face.

After ages they reached their room LOL

Coz it was such a big hotel, it was pretty far from the reception.

After reaching their room, rey called to his home and,

R: mom, hum pohonch gaye!

K: very good beta! Aap 10 din ke liye waha reh rahe ho na, take care! Khud ka aur taani ka bhi!

Loudspeaker was on and taani heard that rey's mom is on line.

Taani snatched the phone,

T: maa!

K: haa beta, kaisi ho? Thak toh nahi gayi na? thodi der rest karo! (she felt so soothing now, she wanted to ask about the expenses they spent for this honeymoon but now she was not able to)

T: maa, I am fine. Aap kaisi ho?

K: main bhi theek hu beta! Aur waha waqt pe khaaya karo and rey se bhi bolo!

Rey and taani smiled at each other. And taani felt a ticklish sensation.

T: ji maa!

K: theek hai beta, main rakhti hu, have a nice time!

T: bye maa!

K: bye beta!

 

Taarey rested for some time and decided to go to the Eiffel tower.

They both got ready, taani was in pink and black suit and rey was in his dashing black and black.

Taani was lost for a second in rey's charm. Nevertheless she was caught by rey staring at him and she started to avoid his gaze.

She was walking towards the window but did not notice the short table before her; she hit her knee to the corner of the table and screamed in pain.

Rey rushed towards her and saw the concern in his eyes, and her eyes were full of tears due to that sharp pain.

R: taani, tum dekhkey chal saqti ho na, itna bada room hai fir bhi takra gayi, zyaada dard ho raha hai kya?

And started to rub her knee.

Taani was watching rey struggling to vanish her pain. She so wished to hug him right now, coz no one showed so much love for her, which made her obliged to practical life.

Rey looked at her face and

R: kya? Ab aise kya dekh rahi ho?

T: isiliye badey hotels me nahi jaana chahiye! She said cutely battering her eyelashes.

Rey gave her his killer smile and became light.

R: taani, hum aaj jayengey ya fir we will go tomorrow?

T: nahi hum aaj jaayengey na, mujhe iss hotel me rehne me ajeeb lag raha hai!

Rey laughed and taani was looking at him innocently, how he wished to kiss her hard but he can't, maybe it was against her wish!

He caught hold of her arms smoothly and made her stand, she could stand and the pain was pretty dull now.

Rey held her hand softly and brought her down all the floors to the reception.

Taani murmured under her breath "itne me India jaake aa saqte hai"

Rey was biting his upper lip to control his laughter. They booked a pretty high class cab and drove off to Eiffel tower.

Taani was exploring the beauty of the sunset. She so loved the climate there, it was purely cool and warming.  

Both got down near the Eiffel tower and went into it, soon they were on one of the top floor. And taani was so very happy and contended.

Now, hold your breaths!

There were a couple of youngsters, of course citizens of Paris, they were chasing each other for fun and dashed rey in doing so,

Rey fell down and the rod there hit his forehead making it bleed, but it was a minor cut, due to the fall on the joint of the rod and screw.

T: rey! and she went and started to dab the wound with her dupatta, as it was a cut, but there was no dripping of blood.

Now,

T: you idiots! Have you lost your sight? Don't you have minimum common sense of what to do and what not? What if something serious has happened?

Guy: Madame we are really sorry! We dint mean to hurt your boyfriend!

T: he is my husband!

Rey held her and

R: bro its fine, it was all unexpected and it's completely ok!

T: no! It's not ok! (In tears)

R: taani, relax baby!

T: what if he has fallen to the ground from this height? Who would be responsible? (A sob escaped her throat)

R: bro! If you stay here, it will aggravate, you pls leave, I will handle her!

T: handle? My foot!

R: shhh taani! Pulling her towards him, dekho this is an accident! They did not come purposefully to harm me right?

T: go to hell with the purpose rey! What if something has happened to you?

R: what will happen to me? You are there with me!

Her chin started to tremble and her sobs were much harder now.

He hugged her tightly under the moon light on the Eiffel tower in the city of Paris.

What can be better than this?

Soon there was a huge applause by the citizens of Paris looking at the love birds. Taani blushed and everyone left from there leaving the love birds alone.

One of his hands was around her waist and one under her cheek. She knew what was coming and she was ready for it, he leant forward, tilted his head and took her lower lip in his softly. Taani clutched the collar of his shirt and slowly started to melt in his warmth.

After they lost oxygen, taani was blushing furiously but still was in his arms.

R: hotel chalengey ya baaki sab yahi karne ka irada hai?

She hid her face in his chest. They both drove off to the hotel and soon they had a passionate night with each other, surrendering themselves to their love and their future.

***************

Ale, for a sec i thought me kuch bhi gift nahi kar paungi, and in one hour, i came out with only this! I hope u liked it! 

once again a very happy bday! may god bless and may all ur wishes come true! 

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hima_taarey

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Posted: 29 March 2014 at 9:25am | IP Logged

Originally posted by Ale_TaaRey

Res I will unres tomorrow pakka Cry
Unreswa Dancing
Hima Di wrote an OS that too for ME Party
Sabse pehle toh bohot bada wala sorry for commenting late Cry
Abhi coming to the OS Embarrassed
Honeymoon Blushing
Haila arranged marriage LOL
Yeh toh apka forte hai Di LOL
I love the title Embarrassed
Rey ko Taani se pyaar ho gaya Embarrassed
Kaveri Ma n Rey scene was so cute Embarrassed
Paris Day Dreaming
Mujhe bhi le jaao it's my b'day Disapprove
Koi naa I don't want to become the kabab me haddi Wink LOL
Perishing Hall is beautiful Day Dreaming
It took them ages LOL
The call scenario was nice Embarrassed
Eiffel Tower Day DreamingDancing
How romanctic Blushing
I loved Taani's dress Embarrassed
Rey in black ufff Day Dreaming
Taani got hurt n Rey scolding her awww Embarrassed
I love Rey, gosh he is just so damn perfect Day Dreaming
His smile *Faints* Embarrassed
"Itne me toh India jaake aa sakte hain" Epic ROFL
I too wanna go to Paris n Eiffel Tower Day Dreaming
Rey got hurt Cry
Un youngsters ki toh Angry
Awwhh Taani's concern Embarrassed
TaaRey hug yayeee Dancing
They kissed Blushing
Naughty Rey is my fav Wink Blushing

I loved it Di Clap
You wrote it in an hour Shocked
Thank you so much for all the love n wishes Embarrassed
I love you soo much Heart
Take care n keep writing Embarrassed
Love: Ale Cool
P.S. A big Thank You to all the people who wished me n made my day! Embarrassed
Lots of love Heart


Edited by hima_taarey - 22 April 2014 at 5:03am

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Posted: 29 March 2014 at 9:41am | IP Logged
res
me will read in a while..

now me hungryTongue


Edited by sashaz_sis - 29 March 2014 at 9:40am

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Posted: 29 March 2014 at 9:47am | IP Logged
RES
unres
awesome os hima so cute and lovely


Edited by taani.priya1997 - 29 March 2014 at 1:08pm

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Posted: 29 March 2014 at 9:56am | IP Logged
Awsum os...
Happy birthday ale :)

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Posted: 29 March 2014 at 9:57am | IP Logged
Wow cute os 
Love it

Happy birthday ale

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Posted: 29 March 2014 at 10:01am | IP Logged
perrrfect gift 4 ale , so romantic n loving os , loved it fully each n every line is so loving n photograps are really amazing its really a perrrfect gift 4 that cutr gil

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Posted: 29 March 2014 at 10:04am | IP Logged
superb os
all the pics were so beautiful
Happy Birthday Ale!!

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