Originally posted by: IsleOfCapri
simply superb
loved it
Originally posted by: Veebafan
Wow, it was beautiful 😳
So romantic, loved reading it,Thanks for the pm, vibha😊
Originally posted by: manishasatpathy
nice though very unusual of baldev to forgive veera so easily for the slap and that too agree for the marriage i tought he wud be thinking what will happen to babli but i liked baldev's sweet nature and not having grudges against veera 😊
do write again and lemme know when u do so 😳
Originally posted by: princy48
it is jusss beautiful...dear..sumthng new...different...cute,romantic,i luvd the way u showed the HAQ of veeba towards eachother..totally..totally..an amazing os..
keep up the gud wrk...expecting more wrkz from u..tfs...
Originally posted by: sunny303
I loved how Veera was such a Sherni about it all...how she went to him and asked him for the puppiyan...how freakin bad ass?!! And he of course obliged...sweet sweet Ballu!!!
I loved your story...I will look forward to more of your writing. Of course concentrate on your studies...but then hurry back LOL!!!
Also bud you should write because you're awesome, which you are!!! not because of the response from others (that's always nice of course)...a lot of the time people are silent readers or are too shy to write!!
So having said that I hope you do continue writing no matter what 😃
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