Rishabala OS : Dewar-Bhabhi Duology 2 : Gentle Rogue - Page 5

Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome Lazy !! πŸ˜ƒ
I don't understand from where do u build up such wonderful stories πŸ‘
i never left the screen while i was reading it, not even for a minute πŸ˜†
It is really wonderful lazy !!
Fantastic !! πŸ˜ƒ
I admire you for balancing language, expression and the story all together πŸ˜†
You are awesome lazy πŸ˜ƒ

Now i need to go, my mom is not going to leave me for not studying. πŸ˜†

Byeee πŸ˜ƒ
Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing OS
Very beautifully written
loved it
Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing.. how can someone love so selflessly..
it was too good a story loved it😊
beautifully written and portrayed
Posted: 10 years ago
awesome os lazy...i loved it😊
Posted: 10 years ago
Such an intense story! My heart bled for Madhu in the first half the story. I wanted to kill RK and smack the living lights out of Radhaji and Pabbo. But you redeemed his beastly qualities and his heart of gold shone through. 
Both the letters from Armaan were so touching. He just knew RK was the one for his Madhu. Aww. 
Beautiful story Lazy! πŸ‘ Wonderful addition to the series. πŸ˜³
Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome n emotional os...rk was so cruel in d first half ...but then...the letter changed everything. ...he was so supportive n caring in d second half. ...
both the letters were so beautifully written. ...armaan knew that rk would marry madhu...he knows his brother so well..
loved it. ...
Posted: 10 years ago
wow lazy what an intense story !!!! 😊

Beautifully written πŸ‘. I cried for Madhu's pain 😭, her loss n her love for Armaan 😭
Armaan was indeed a true soulmate 😊. Both his letters were extremely emotional. I hated RK initially 😑 but then he redeemed his self by loving Madhu unconditionally 😳

It was wonderful, fabulous n amazing story.⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Posted: 10 years ago
i dont have any words to say dear...you are such a fantastic writerπŸ‘...
its a wonderful story... i had tears in my eyes while reading the letters...that two letters are written beautifully with lots of emotional...
lazy... be relax for some days & plz continue to write ur stories...

Posted: 10 years ago
LAZY THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST STORIES I HAVE READ
FROM THE START TO THE END IT WAS GRIPPING 
THERE WERE PLACES WHERE I HAD TEARS 
AND I FELL IN LOVE WITH ARMAAN THROUGH THE LETTERS AND THEIR TALKS ABOUT HIM
HE WAS ONE HELL OF A MAN
Posted: 10 years ago
daam good I read it twice
thanku so much pming me
if u Hv some other work plz do pm me m late here na toh old work b pm me


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