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Posted: 10 years ago
part 4
awesome update
loved it
karan is planning something to hurt astha
continue soon
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Lovely and awesome update. Waiting for the next part😊
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PART-5

 In the college...

Karan is waiting for Aastha...

Aastha enters the college...

Karan storms and stops Aastha...

 Karan: Do you think yourself has mahaan...? What was the need to save me...? n if you really wanted to save me you might have called me...Why did you push me with such a force...sees my condition now...

Aastha: Wait...wait...it's human nature to help others in trouble...and I dont know that it was you...The truck was so near that if I didnt push you , you might have been smashed under the tyre ...

Siddhart: Hey.Karan How are you.know...?

Karan: I'm fine...actuallu I wanted to meet you...

Sid: I need to say you something...I have chosen another partner to play with me...I'm sorry Icant take any chances...I know that it will take more time for you to recover...I'm sorry...

Saying this he leaves...

Karan turns towards Aastha: It's because of you ...I'm not able to play...You know...badminton is my passion...my life everything...you spoilt everything...

Aastha: I'm sorry for you...but...

Karan leaves from there...

Gauri: chodd na yaar...he is always like this...

Aastha: No Gauri...I saw the passion in his eyes...He must play this tournament...I must help him...

Gauri:what will you do now...?

 

In the evening...

Shlok is driving the car...and sees Aastha seated silently...

Shlok: Arey FM RADIO...what happened...? no signal or what...

Aastha: Nothing...Hey wait...you know to play badminton...?

Shlok: Ya...what for that now...?

Aastha: Teach me how to play it...?

Shlok stops the car with a jerk: What...?

Aastha: I wanted to play badminton...

Shlok: You are a basketball player why you need to learn badminton...?

Aastha: For some reason...please teach me...teach me ...teach me...teach...

Shlok: Chup...ok fyn...But you have to obey all my orders...

Aastha : Ok ...fyn...(Shlok gives a cunning smile...)

 

Next morning...

Shlok pours a jug full of water over sleeping Aastha...

Aastha: Oh no ...its raining...inside...(She walks up...and unknowingly rolls down)

Shlok laughs seeing this...

Aastha: Are you mad...? What are you doing...?

Shlok: Get up...It's time for practice...

Shlok drags her to the badminton court...

Shlok shows her how to play..and tells her the rules of the game...

Aastha: Ah.it's so simple...I thought it to be difficult...

Shlok: Really...it's not so easy...

Aastha: You dont who I'm ...just play with me once...

Shlok: Are you sure...? (Aastha nods with confidence...)

Shlok starts to play...and Aastha tries to hit the ball but she fails...

Aastha misses all the balls serviced to her...Shlok stares at her...

Shlok: Oh..this is how Aastha, THE GREAT plays badminton...Come here...

Aastha goes to him...

Shlok back hugs and holds her hands along with his...Aastha feels the cold shivers running down her spine...

Shlok teaches her how to hit the ball...Aastha looks above to see him...and is lost in him...

Shlok looks at her

They share an eyelock...

Soon Shlok realizes and leaves Aastha...

Aastha looks down...

Okay it is time for college let us get ready...

In  the kitchen...

Aastha: Shlok...come here...

Shlok comes down from his room...

Shlok: What happened...?

The entire wheat flour has fallen on Aastha...Shlok couldn't control his laughter...but still he controlled...

Aastha: Shlok...please come n help me I can't see...

Shlok helped her to come near the sink...Shlok sprinkled water over her...

Aastha wiped her face...still Shlok was sprinkling water...

Aastha: Stop it...Shlok leave...

Shlok started to sprinkle more water...

They started to play with water...

Finally they both got drenched...

Aastha: Because of you I'm going to get late...

They both go to change their dress...

Shlok opens the door...and sees the opposite room...

He sees the reflection of  Aastha drying her hair in her mirror...He is mesimerised by her look...His phone rings  but he doesn't pick it...

Aastha turns to see him...Shlok...Shlok...your phone is ringing...

Shlok comes back to his senses...

Shlok: Ok...I'll do it...

Aastha: Shall we go...?

Shlok: where...? You go by yourself...

Aastha: what...why...?

Shlok comes near her...closes her eyes...

Aastha: Shlok... what are you doing...?

Shlok takes her outside...

Shlok opens his hands...Aastha sees a scooty...

Aastha: Oh...wow...Scooty...I always wanted it but when I asked Scooty...baba bought me a car...

Shlok: I know it...so only I bought this for you...when you are in Mumbai... you can drive in scooty...(he showed her the keys...)

Aastha hugged Shlok...unknowingly she kissed him in his cheeks...

Aastha: Thank you Shlok...I'll go for a small ride n come...

Aastha left...Shlok still was in a shocked state...He touched his cheeks and smiled...

In the college...

Aastha:Guys... today is my treat I got a new scooty...

Karan hears this...and smiles...

In the evening...

Aastha: Gauri  you wanted to drive na...go for a ride...Aastha shows her the keys...

Gauri: Thank you.so much..you are so sweet...

They go to the parking slot...They see Anshuman n Karan coming out...

Gauri: What are they doing here...? Okay come lets go...

Karan: You didn't do anything seriously-na nothing must happen to her...

Anshuman: Don't worry.I have only punctured the tyre...

Aastha notices that her back tyre is punctured...

Aastha: Omg...Gauri ...stop...stop...

BANGGG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11

Gauri: Aha...aai...aha...

Aastha: Are you okay...? Gauriii

Gauri: I'm ok...but I have sprain near the knee...

Aastha lifts the scooty and places it in the corner...and tells to the watchman...

Gauri: come we will go to the hospital...

Karan sees all this standing behind a tree...He stares at Anshuman...

Anshu: What did I do...?

Karan: Come we will execute our second plan...

Aastha walks on the road alone...Suddenly few men started rounding her and started to tease her...

Aastha got angry...and removed her sandals...and started to beat them...

Aastha: U cheap cats...? how dare you...?

Karan sees all these...: come let us leave...Aastha is more dangerous than I thought...

Shlok comes there...: Aastha stop what are doing ...? Leave them...

All the gundas...run from there...

Shlok makes Aastha to sit in the car...: Hey Jhansi ki rani what happened...?

Aastha: nothing...let us go...

Karan: I have no other way I must befriend her...

Next Day,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Karan: Aastha...Aastha...

Aastha turns back...

Karan: I'm sorry...I'm really sorry...Forget the past and let us be the friends...

Karan shows his hands...

Aastha smiles...and accepts his friendship...

Shlok's cabin...

Shlok: Suresh, book two tickets for evening show...SRK film...

Suresh: But you like Salman more na...

Shlok: don't ask cross questions...obey my order...

Shlok sees his marriage photo in his desktop and smiles...

To be continued...

Hope you liked it...

Do comment...

Will see you in next part...

Edited by Harshraaj - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
loved it
shlok is in love...
bt karan his revenge
waiitng for next
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow yaar... nyc updates... so, finally shlok loves astha...
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Posted: 10 years ago
ok so karan wants to take revenge 
nd shlok is planning for a film with astha 
do update soon
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                                    PART -6

Karan: So Aastha...today I'll give you treat ...I'll take you to  the best restuarant in Mumbai...😊😊
Aastha smiles and her phone rings...It's Shlok...
Aastha:Excuse me... Hello...Shlok...
Shlok: Guess what...? I have booked tickets for SRK film...
Aastha gets excited...πŸ˜›
Aastha: Really...
Shlok: Come soon...Bye...
Aastha: Karan...wo Actually...Not today..We will go another day...Plz...
Karan: Ok...fyn...(Must wait for another day...)
(Aastha goes home...)
Aastha n Shlok get ready and leave for movie...

In the theatre...
Shlok is lost in Aastha...He admires her whenever she laughs,cries watching the movie...😳.
Whereas Aastha was enjoying the movie to the core without even noticing that Shlok is looking at her...😳
After watching movie...
Aastha: No one can substitute SRK...(She admires him...) How he delivers the dialogue...how romantic...how handsome...πŸ₯±πŸ₯±πŸ₯±
Everybody were looking at Aastha as she was expressing ...She realises what she is doing...n feels embrassed😳😳😳 n drags him to the parking ...

After sometime...in the Shopping mall...
Karan: What to do with this Aastha...? ( I have to teach her a lesson such that she must not be able to show her face again...)(he started thinking...)
Anshu: That is Aastha-na...? n who is the guy with her...
(Karan turns to see...but he could see only Aastha...so he follows her...)
(they were not able to see the person...within some time they missed her...)
Karan: Who must be that guy...?
Anshu: Must be her friend...let's go...

A week passed by...
Karan acted as a good guy n become Aastha's good friend...
Shlok has developed his feelings still more deeper for Aastha...
Aastha changed her attitude towards Shlok...
She started sharing all the happenings to Shlok...
Shlok who considered her as talkative n chirpy...used to sit for hours listening to her...n also continued in his badminton's coaching...

Karan: Aastha ,, you know tomorrow is the badminton match...(he said it with much pain in his heart...)
Aastha consoled him...: Dont worry, everything will be alright...Come let us go to the class...

Next day...
Welcome to the Badminton match...
Today we are going to have the finals...and the winner will be selected as State player...
So our finalists pair are Siddhart and Mahi...and...and...Karan n Aastha...
Karan n Shlok is shocked to hear this...
Karan: What's happening here...?
Aastha: Karan...(Karan turns n sees Aastha dressed in sports dress...she shows him the bat...) Come let us play...
Karan: But...Aastha...you...
Aastha: You are my best friend...how can I see you in pain...? We will talk all these after winning the match...
Karan gets ready...
Shlok: So this is the reason she learnt badminton from me...This Aastha ...

The match begins...
Karan is shocked by Aastha's play...
Sid: Mahi...we should not lose in this match...that Kar...Karan who used to come behind me...now is playing opposite me...
Mahi: Ok...
Sid:Try to hit his right elbow...he wont be able to play...
Aastha notices that the ball is going to hit Karan...She strikes back with force...n falls...
Aastha: aa...aha...
Karan, Shlok n Gauri :Aasthaaa...
The match is stopped ...
Gauri: Are you Ok...?
Aastha: I got a sprain...
(She was not able to get up...)
Mahi: Oh my...my...poor kid...you are just a beginner...you are playing against us...
Mahi irritates them n leaves...
Aastha: I'll play this match...
Shlok: But Aastha...you are hurt...you wont be able to play...
Aastha: No...Sir...I will play...I have been thought to fight till the end...(She gets up with much strain...)
Aastha sees karan: Dont worry I wont let my friend down...

The match resumes...
Karan hits all the ball so that Aastha needn't strain more...😊😊
Gauri: Omg...both have same score...n only less time is there...
Anshu: God.please help us...
Last ball comes with much force...due to too much strain.Karan was not able to lift his right hand properly...Aastha notices this...this time she hits 
the ball much to Mahi's shock...n Mahi misses the ball...
Shlok: Oh...yes...Aastha won...😊😊😊.

The whole ground rejoiced...πŸ˜ƒ
Shlok presented the trophy to Karan n Aastha...
Aastha: This is yours...(Karan looks on...) I learnt n played badminton only for you...
Karan's eyes is filled with tears...😭😭

Gauri: Come on...Aastha...Let us go to hospital...
Everybody leave for hospital...
Shlok: I'll take care of Aastha ...you people go...
Anshu: But Sir...I'll inform to Aastha's parents...
Karan sees Aastha through the glass window...n leaves...
Dr: Dont worry Mr.Agnihotri...she is better now...Dont make her strain more...She is more tired...She needs some rest...
Shlok comes to Aastha...
Aastha: I'm alright ...its ordinary sprain...
Shlok: Shall we leave now...
Shlok was about to pick her...But Aastha refuses...She tries to stand on her own...She is about to slip n Shlok holds her...
Shlok puts his hand on her waist n puts Aastha's hand on his shoulder...😳
Shlok: Now walk...
Aastha smiles at Shlok...They reach the car...Aastha notices the trophy in frontseat...
She reads the letter inside the trophy..."This is not mine...but yours...Thank You very much...".πŸ˜­πŸ˜›πŸ˜‰

In Karan's room...
Karan: Aastha...why did you do this...? I cheated you...but you fulfilled my wish...I'm sorry...You are my really true friend...i'm 
sorry...I'll change from now onwards...I'll try to become  a good man n good friend of yours...I'm sorry Aastha...😭

In Agnihotri mansion...
Shlok: Madam ...will you get down...or should I call somebody to welcome you...
Aastha gets down n smiles seeing the trophy...
Aastha: Shlok...Shlok I won...I won in my first game...I won ...I won...(Shlok smiled at her childish act...)πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
Aastha started to dance rounding Shlok...
Shlok: Wat happened...? lakta hai pagal hogi...!!πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
Aastha felt uneasy n she lost her herself n was about to hit the ground...Shlok held her in right moment...
Shlok: Aastha...Aastha...wake up...Aasthu...what happened...?πŸ₯±

Hope you liked it...
Do comment friends...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update..whn wl astha start havng feelngs fr shlok😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
Great update
Finally they won d match
N karan changed
Do update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Loved d update..r u planning 4 a triangle love?!