Jodha Akbar


Jodha Akbar
Jodha Akbar

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aisha.....11110 IF-Rockerz

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Lets start with a brief characterisation of the characters, there will be more in the upcoming chapters

So. the main lead is ofcourse, JALAL, he is an actor in this story, and so  his mates, that is ruqaiyah, salima, maan and mirza.
Santram is a movie director, and elder brother of jodha.
Coming to the female lead, Jodha!!! she is in Paris from the last few years and is coming to Mumbai at his brother's place to complete her internship
 their parents died when she was young, from that day, santram is her family.
Piya is the assistant of santram.
(summary of 14 chapters is given below)


summary of the 14 chapters!

so here i am giving summary of the 14 chapters which are in this thread, 

as this will be more convenient to the new readers.

So, the story begins with a movie director named, santram, who  was over excited when he came to know that his little sister jodha, is going to come!! his happiness knew no bound and why not, his little princess was coming after 4 years, it was kinda emotional and very auspicious day for him, his assistant piya sharma, came to him and got to know that jodha is coming back, she suggested to throw a surprise party for jodha's arrival to which santram happily agreed, meanwhile between their conversation, the producer and the main leads of santram's upcoming movie arrived his mansion, jalal being the main lead of the movie, too was there, and between the talking session, santram invited jalal and the group to be a part in the surprise party, as they all are favourites of his little princess- jodha, after listening so much about jodha from others, a kind of curiosity settled inside jalal, and the last sentence of piya -  "beware of jodha, as the bundle of naughtiness, is going to come" made him more curious to meet the little princess of santram.

As the time for jodha's arrival came, all were getting excited and specially the brother, as he was going to meet his little princess after 4 years, jodha was in paris so as to complete her fashion designing course, and was coming to india for 1 year for her internship, after waiting for a hour or so, jalal got irritated as he haven't waited for anyone in his life, while on the other side, jodha and her bestest pal, moti arrived india, being unknown of the fact that their are lots of people waiting for her. She was told that santram was not at home and was busy in his shooting, and she would have to spend the day alone, so she took a quite long time for buying some snacks and sweets for her dinner.

As soon as she entered her home, there was darkness all around, and having achluophobia , she feared and bumped into jalal, who came there as he forgot his phone there only, Jalal saved her from falling, jodha was trying to figure out the person, jalal looked at her face, as some dim light was falling on her face, and for him the world stopped, he was just looking at her without blinking his eyes, her face was beyond beautiful, her eyes, big in shock but still looking so cute, reflecting everything as a mirror, crystal clear, her lips,slightly opened in shock, pink, attractive, succulent, but soon her lips formed pouty, she was saying something, her eyes became wider, she was blinking her eyes, and her nose turned red, she was saying something, but jalal was busy in her heavenly kissable lips. But suddenly his thoughts broke when she pushed him, he shook his head so as to confirm that it was not a dream, he looked at her, she was wearing, a pink colour dress, noo!! it was a night suit with a cartoon printed on the top, further going down, her slippers were too pink, over all she was a pink fairy, jodha was still not able to see his face, she looked at him and then at his hand, which was holding some silver thing, it was shining, she was saying something pointing towards his hand, but jalal was busy gaping her,  her long, wavy hairs were disturbing her to talk, after every second she was putting her hairs back, but his thoughts broke when jodha again pushed him.

"are you a deaf thief??" asked jodha making jalal shock, which cleared that she was thinking jalal as a thief, so this was their first meet, and there only jalal got a new name from jodha,i.e "dirty dog", from that point there cute fights continued, a new entry  of jodha's cousin ranvijay singh which was in a relation with moti created a new fun in the story, jodha being a innocent girl was making jalal fall in love with her without letting him know and the same thing was happening with jodha too, during the shooting trip, they started to feel something different for each other, a feeling which was unknown and new for them, sunaina, jodha's friend came to india and had a crush on jalal, and seeing them together jodha was getting jealous.

they both started to share something with each other which they haven't shared with anyone else, jalal shared the biggest truth of his life with jodha, which is, he was one of the biggest business man of India but left that profession  as he thought it as a reason for his father's heart attack was the loss in his business, and at that point jalal got to know that jodha's parents died when she was of 5.

When they both reached khan mansion, they saw that every newspaper and news channels were having their photo, and was stating jodha as jalal's girlfriend, but it was solved after some time, during this period, jalal noticed jodha having some pills, he was confused about them, when he asked this from jodha, she refused to answer it and gave excuses, meanwhile jalal's friend veer entered in this story, hence doubling the fun, and in between all this, jalal got to know about the pills (plz refer chapter 14, if you are interested i n knowing what had actually happened)

soo!! itz all this which happened in the 14 chapters, in the 15th chapter you will meet a drunken jodhaLOL

Edited by aisha.....11110 - 06 February 2015 at 3:26am

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Posted: 19 March 2014 at 6:17am | IP Logged
nice charactersketch... cont soon

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Posted: 19 March 2014 at 6:19am | IP Logged
Nice, thanks

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Posted: 19 March 2014 at 6:20am | IP Logged

The characters sounds interesting..Smile

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MeShu-Holic IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 19 March 2014 at 7:35am | IP Logged
Good ...
the character sketch sounds really good..
continue soon 

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Posted: 19 March 2014 at 7:56am | IP Logged
nice start

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Posted: 19 March 2014 at 8:38am | IP Logged
Vow superb Start... detail character introduction... Loved it...I can't wait for 1st chapter... JALAL MOVIE ACTORClap

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Posted: 19 March 2014 at 9:32am | IP Logged
nyce characters...
Continue plz

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